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CTS: "Your over confidence is your weakness."
Tirek: "Your faith in your friends is yours."
CTS: Smiles and says. "Who said i was using them?"
Tirek: "Huh?" Then head shot. Followed by multiple head shots.
7030084 I could defiantly see that conversation happening.
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This was a great chapter and I look forward to the final one. Also good luck with recovering from this emotional drainage mate.
I'm curious to see what tanks you modeled the EDF's tanks after.
also;
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7031359 Similar to Leopard 2 MBT
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"All great things are simple and can be expressed in single words:
Freedom, Justice, Honor, Duty, Mercy, Hope."
-Winston Churchill
7031359 no just no TWILIGHT will always be the tf2 sniper img04.deviantart.net/7f28/i/2014/255/1/6/_sfm__twilight_sniper_by_fd_daylight-d7yv8ho.png
could only think about this old burial song here for this chapter
I am curious when the EDF will fight the Feds. Will the EDF still be weak from the attack or will they have time to rebuild?
7031757 I can say with 100% Certainty that they will not fight the Feds in this story, possible a future story in some manner. but not this one.
7031442 Agreed. Flutters too softy.
7031519 Damn appropriate!
7033763 flutters is best medic
7034060 Lacks the sadism though.
7034398 oh no nononono she is what we like to refer to as a closet sadist you all ways have to watch the quiet ones
7036462 well not directly, they beep, but Twilight has an implant that basically translates them into words on the lower part of her eyes so she reads it.
also welcome back
Dang, Anti-Tank rifle against Tirek?! A regular human would be paste if a shell from that hit them!
7036494 no such thing as OVERKILL with CTS and she gave him 7 rounds.
When I was reading the burial scene, this song came to mind:
you could say she's been forged in fire and flame.
I keep imagining Twilight with more and more similarities to Big Boss.
Great chapter, it's sad that so many died, but this pretty much cemented the changelings' place as the fourth tribe. And Twilight sniping Tirek was just epic.
You glorious bastard you made me cry with that ceremony, it was just so emotional and moving, fuck my eyes are wetter than the rain forest during rain season
7587467 in will take that as a complement thank you. Glad I could achieve that reaction.
Dear God, I was not expecting this.
Got real tears out of me with this chapter. Really sad, really epic.
In review of this chapter I believe it is quite accurate to Tirek's character as well as (new) Twilight's response. While I did think, "sniper time", as soon as Twilight found out, I had forgoten she had the AT rifle. Perfect song choice too.
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Mostly the story line in its self. The idea of Twilight being thrown into a war was interesting to me but how you wrote twilight's reaction and adaptation along with what you made her (and will make her) face, that's what got me hooked.
(A family friend of mine is alive today because someone decided his life was more important than their own. That concept of such an action had a massive effect on me when I was first told, as a kid no less, as to why said friend was still around. So when you write a chapter, of intelligent soliders giving their lives to save others... You can bet you'll get my attention.)
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That will be all.
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Tank Crew Hammer Two reminded me of Captain Rex from Star Wars I don't know why. SOMEONE HAS TO WRITE A STORY ABOUT THEM! UP UNTIL THEIR HEROIC DEATHS!
Hmm I have to disagree reaper would probably have been able to torture tirek
All those people dying, and all it took for Tirek to lose was 1 mare and 1 gun.
Sorry but this wasn't heroic, this was stupid. To the extreme. If Twilight knew right from the start, no one would have died. The fact they kept it from her, and instead let all those ponies, changelings, any whatever innocents also got caught up in the crossfire, die is an act of pure treachery against Equestria.
Smart. I mean, Twilight being smart is a given, but it looks like she actually read Sun Tzu's stuff. Niiiice.
(for those that don't realize: the point of the exercise is to identify possible defense flaws, attack vectors and surfaces that you may not even realize need defenses, non-obvious approaches etc.)
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Did a similar exercise in Cybersecurity Club, though obviously it centered around cyberwarfare.
Well now I'm probably gonna start crying.