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I'm getting the feeling that those words are gonna be prophetic...
6868877 seemed to fit with her personality that she'd have almost 100% accuracy.
I bet she can get her mark back after some EOH action. We know they have regenerative albilities and while limbs might be pushing it the mark should be easy.
6870039 what's EOH?
6870076 Elements of Harmony
6870159 Right, I know that >.>
totally wasn't thinking some Sci-Fi thing at all <.<
6870184 you're doing this aren't you?
6870188 maybe
Also I thought of a scary thought, could you imagine Commander Sparkle becoming and Alicorn?
She already extremely powerful in magic as is thanks to the war. add the boost from being an Alicorn, plus whatever it would do with her cybernetic, mostly likely boost them as well.
She's be the most powerful creature in the history of Equestria!
6870201 Sunset Shimmer, Starlight Glimmer AND Tirek are all doomed.
Tirek: "Ha! I have taken your magic!"
Twilight: "I don't need it!" Lifts of a 50 calibur rifle and Tirek's brain is no more.
Where were they in the series before the accident anyways?
6870223 hmm...im going to say after the Crystal empire but before Discords reform. and obviously before she became an Alicorn.
6870228 I was guessing before Discord since there was no sign on them asking him to look.
That meeting will now be far more entertaining if Celestia still thinks it's a good idea after meeting the new Twilight.
6870240 well he'd be reformed, though he'd have a few broken bones and other injuries to show for it.
a fight between Twi and Discord is an amusing image.
Dupo should have said "marksmare"
Twilight has started toughening up ; she'll assuredly need it on the field.
6870463 I enjoy the fact everyone is liking how Twilight is slowly turning into what we all saw at the start of this little story and everyone seems to like the fact she's an marksmen
though no one questions where Dupo got the materials to build his weapons cage and how he built it in two days.
6870486
I like fanfics in which Twilight is thrown into an hostile world (or galaxy) and has to harden in order to survive and protect her ideals, friends, ... or avenge them. I have found some fics like that, sadly, one of them is dead and the other is from an author who writes 6 fics at once with short chapters...
6870819 ah yeah, I'm trying to write these chapters as longer then my usual around 2000.
im trying to keep these above 4000 words if I can while still not making it to drawn out so everything is thrown into one chapter and I have nothing for the rest of the story.
6869346 I picture Twilight outside the battle as a General, calling the shots. Or if she is on the field, as a Sniper. Sneaking, hiding, and teleporting around to new places to get better angles. Calculating distance, wind speed, bullet speed, bullet drop, target's armor or shielding thickness. Basically a Sniper without needing a spotter as she can calculate everything on her own.
6878030 that's actullu a bit of what I was picturing her as during certain mission where the fighting isn't going to be straight up CQB fighting. In those cases she will be in the thick of it as no real way to snipe.
But yeah she is a skilled sniper as well as an expert in all her weapons. She's basicly ready for any situation with a gun or hand to hoof fighting.
6878331
If Chrysalis and her minions come back, I expect them to find new holes in their bodies...
6878455 lots of new holes
I honestly have thought about how Twi would handle basically all the villains from the show.
so far none of the villains have lasted long
6886876 yes, both have been lost and replaced and then upgraded.
I'm really hoping that Twilight spares Sunset. Knowing her in this universe, she won't be as forgiving.
6886922 I can already see her breeching the doors of Canterlot High.
but in all seriousness she's most likely just beat the crap out of her then return home within the hour.
6886930 I wonder if Twilight would care if she killed Sunset when she turns she-demon...
6886988 if that happened she'd feel she'd have no choice but to act in the best interests of everyone around and neutralize the threat so....no not really.
Luckily I don't think Sunset would be able to steal the element anyways as Twi would wake up the second she entered the room.
6886997 Phew. I'm glad this isn't Twilight as a copy of Shepard where she just blows stuff up for no reason. Or Twilight from the PWNYverse where she can mess with reality on a whim. But I'm hoping Twilight from your universe kills Tirek with no mercy like that bugbear.
Only reason I don't hate the PWNYverse! Twilight is because she's in a universe that makes some sense *coughRatchetandClankcough*. Another thing... is she gonna kill Starlight Glimmer for messing with the timestream?
6887015 Twi would most likely take out Tirek with an Anti-tank rifle from a half mile out to the head.
As for Glimmer, she'd most likely never have lost her cutie mark as she'd call for back up when she saw the creepy smiles do to every fiber of her being screaming "IT'S A TRAP!" and then go in with a squad of soldiers, most likely arrest her and then Glimmer falls down some stairs...repeatedly....don't question where the stairs are in a single story building.
But yeah she doesn't kill pointlessly, well sometimes she does if she's had a really crappy day but those are only to Feds who she hates so yeah.
And while Commander Sparkle is extremely strong in magic do to constantly pushing the limits of her abilities in combat she can be over whelmed eventfully, just would need sustained fire from a lot of heavy weapons.
I don't really like my characters being unstoppable as it ruins the tension if they can get out of everything
6887035 Oh. I'm surprised that Twi hasn't dealt with all her phantom pain. Her chest is pretty much the only organic thing left since her eyes and limbs are cybernetics now. Either way, thanks for answering my questions.
6887060 not a problem, happy to explain as long as it doesn't spoil anything.
and she just deals with the pain s it only spikes when the limbs are reattached.
6887070 So like Ed's automail limbs?
6887809 basicly. The legs can be detached to performs maintaince on them and then reattached which causes a huge spike of pain as the nerves reconnect. It only lasts a second but still gets a response from her.
6887816 Can Twi still use magic? Or will she depend on her firepower instead?
6887852
How could she put and get things in and from pocket dimensions if she had lost access to her magic?
6887921 Is there a spot in her body where she can access her pocket dimension(s)?
6887933 the only spot on her body that has been enchanted to access the pocket dimension is the mechanism that deploys her blades as they are stored in it so she has a full range of motion in her legs.
other then that she still has all her magic and uses both in combat, like how she teleported onto the Bugbear's back.
She is extremely powerful in magic, far more so then when she left as do to fighting heavily armed and armored soldiers who have tanks and gunships she pushed her magic further and further past it's limit so it kept increasing to it's current level of being somewhat close to a young Alicorn's magic.
Though as I said earlier she can be overrun and if she were to fight a full Alicorn such as Luna or Celestia she'd be hard pressed to win and would most likely loose after a few minutes if she didn't retreat.
Compared to anything else in her home dimension through excluding the Royal Sisters her Magic and, weapons, training and cybernetics make her the most deadly thing in all of Epuus do to the level of technology of the planet.
6888107 I'm not so sure the Princesses, the Crystal Empire or the Royal Farce will easily adjust to Twilight's aggro attitude.
6889237 not completely. not at first anyways, she takes some getting used to, Pinkie is about the only one who is completely ok with her just do to the fact she is a bit aware of what happened to Twi so understands why she is this way and is just happy to have her back at all.
But yeah Twi will have a lot of issues with being home as well do to the fact that gun powdered is in her blood so to speak. She is more or less harmless when under orders from those she sees as a superior, in This case The Princesses and won't attack unless provoked. Though how she will respond to some things is anyone's guess as she's not the most stable of individuals.
6889308 Like when she aimed a gun at Pinkie and blew up the bugbear?
6889335 pinkie was reflex as she was still on a Combat High and was sort of tackled, though never a good idea to surprise her.
the Bugbear was a threat to the town so was a hostile.
6889351 I'll bet all of Canterlot will soak their proverbial pants when Twilight comes to visit Celestia.
6889404 Probably .
6889412
What of Twilight Velvet and Night Light?
6890149 She sees them as her parent still but she is a soldier so answer more towards her superiors, and since Equestria doesn't have a commander rank she doesn't have anyone above her in the military so answer to the Princesses.
But she will be very happy to see her parents and does still love them dearly but they most likely will have some issues with what their daughter has become.
6870819 Another "ruined the story" thing was like this 1 fanfic, AU, but Celestia goes WAY OOC from FiM, but that wasn't what killed it for me. No that goes to Celestia's OOC made me out for BLOOD, I NEEDED to see her defeated and a flag stuck in her heart, and similar for the main 6 (minus Fluttershy, of corse) when they were going to BIG TIME stab Twi in the back but instead got this "Luna rules for 1000 years because that's a long time for an immortal being" BULLSHIT, and a bad epilogue.
6887060 *Thinks of Blackjack from FoE:PH* It must run in the family!
That's the second time she got fooled. I love it when gullible Twilight gets pranked.
Had had? Two time? is it right? Oo
"couple changes of her medical"
"“Here you are Doctor.” "
Either "But if I can use them when someone gets injured then there is a lower chance of dying." or "But if I can use them when someone gets injured then there is a higher chance of surviving."
"When she was done she slowly opened her eyes and stared at the square"
“Well I’ll be kid. “Dupo said whistling", Also fells like some word is missing.
Most typing errors ^^.
Okay this story has a lot of grammar/syntax errors and I try to overlook them but this one is just ridiculous. Makes her sound like the worst medic ever.
7347645 Maybe she's getting lessons from the TF2 medic?