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Wow. To this day, Twilight still can't beat Mendez. Its actually quite funny.
I'd like to see twilight sparring with the two sisters just imagine celestia challenging twilight to a brawl/bout and the nobles and guards faces witnessing it, with Luna with a smug smirk and a wing boner over twilight's ferocity heck make it apart of a sequel where twi and Luna fall for each other while the Feds are back and due to war technology has jumped significantly.
WHAT MENDEZ SAID IS TRUE THE DAY THE APPRENTIS BEATS THE MASTER IS THE DAY THE MASTER HANGS UP HIS HAT FOR HE HAS DONE HIS DUTY also i welcome Mendez to equestria with open arms and unlimited paintballs and gas canisters
7027917 nope, she can fight Two Black ops at once but a normal non-augmented human kicks her ass every time.
7028144 I am going to say the story of Federal Earth is over after this but Commander Sparkle's Story is far from over.
well i shouldn't say over, I may revisit it some day.
7028027 I don't think the castle would survive the sparing session.
7028188 I am so tempted to make a non-cannon side story where through an unexplained means Mendez ends up in Equestria and everyone gets to meet the one person CTS can't beat.
7028189 Now I get why she called it camp Mendez. After the one human she could never beat.
:-) teehee
7028277 that and he was the one who trained her so why not name the training facility after the one who trained her?
7028296 at least her own troops will feel Mendez training.
Mendenz and that paintball gun.
7028319 hey no way he is letting her leave without being shot one last time.
Nice chapter, but I'd have liked if Twilight had finally beat Mendez.
7028519 but then he'd have to go be a princess in Equestria.
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I'd say he wasn't serious saying this. I still would have preferred to see Twilight win, even if just to tell him something sarcastic with a sassy pose.
7028597 I know but I enjoy the idea of no matter how skilled she gets he still kicks her ass.
that and I honestly couldn't think of anything for her to do if she did win.
7028196 there is outside XD
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"The day I lose to you again is the day I eat quesadillas."
7028207 That would be a delightful bit of chaos that will surely be entertaining for Discord...
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Please... no shipping for the sake of it.
7028931 um that's the whole point of shipping, besides I just think twi needs some love and tlc and maybe some psychiatric care. And that is where Luna comes in she has experienced war without the dilution of centuries of peace, so she'd be perfect to help twi adjust, Luna has also had to deal with her dark side. Also considering twi has selflessly helped Luna even treating her like an equal rather than a princess there has to be affection and attraction(yes I know it's cliche for women in high social and governmental heirarchies to like being dominated or attracted to power) and Luna returning the favour could ignite feelings in twilight. Also I know there isn't going to be shipping in the story I am just having fun
7028634 I think I will have to put that fear into the sequel, I actually forgot about that little fact with is strange for me.
I can already see CTS reaction to coming face to face with her greatest fear.
7029385 it is both funny and adorable at the same time no?
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Let me guess : she gets her shotgun?
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The point of shipping isn't to be put there just for its own sake, out of the blue, without background, adding nothing to the story. I've seen too many authors fall in that trap.
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7028196 Agreed
7028319 XDXDXD ROTFLOL
7029413 Duh!
I shall miss checking to see if SoM has a new chapter at 2:00 in the morning. Ah, it feels like only yesterday it was just the prologue..... good times, good times.
7029460 I more see her using every single gun she has to send it to oblivion then a bit of plastic explosive for good measure while remaining absolutely calm as if this were a normal occurrence one does every day and is not an over reaction.
7029498 good new, there will be a sequel, and a side fic, and I maybe opening the word of EDF Equestria to other writers to write for.
7029505 IT'S NOT THE SAME! :'(
7029527 true as it won't follow Federal Earth but still will follow CTS
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Now, about a spar, if Mendez can beat CTS, yes, but I'd like to see him try beating Fluttershy (Bear Wrestler)...
And now I imagine him trying to train Pinkie... paintgun emptied in vain and running after her :
"COME BACK HERE YOU **** PINK CLOWN!!
*Giggles*
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I so need to make this side fic. Gah so many possible stories for the EDF Equestria universe!
though i'll need a name for the universe if I do open it up.
7029460 did I say I wanted it without reason or back story I hated when they did that with douche sentry a shallow weak character made to make twilight wet. heck I gave two rough outlines on it.anyway once this is over scorch plans on making it an open universe for anyone to write about. And the ideas I had were based on twi and lulu's history together both canon and in this fic.
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Flash the pony is not expanded in canon, but it can be done in fanon.
Though I fear the chances of him going with Commander Sparkle are Planck's wavelength level of small.
7029607 'twould be funny if he tried and she emasculated him.
Heh, Mendez is still as hard as ever, and now the final battle is about to begin...
Goodbyes always make me cry.
... I now totally expect Mendez to shoot her in the flank across dimensions.
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Oh yeah. He will. He’ll find a way, that bastard of a drill sergeant.
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