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Are you a living typewriter?
Just kidding.
I didn't expect this promotion. Chrysalis would better not try a betrayal... I wonder what will the other ponies' reaction be...
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I may be.
I doubt anyone saw me planning this.
Oh. we know what would happen to the Changelings if that happened~~~
I'll be covering this in a later Interlude but it will probably go about as well as you'd expect.
7009855 I wonder which part of the Interlude got that response as there was a lot of good moment in it.
7009862 Probably just the Gal of it all, Twilight's a riot. She gambles with a heavy hand, she thinks shes got all the cards. Oh how delicious it will be when life punches her in the gut...
Who am I kidding she'd probably get off on it then burn Life's house down, with him in it.
7009891 I wouldn't say she thinks she has all the cards, she just is used to doing things a certain way and also wants to set up contingency plans for in case she does lose. Hence why she did what she did with the Queen, She knows what the Queen is capable of so who better to take her place incase she is killed then some one who is able to create complex plans that only fail do to an Ex Machina. She may not have the same Experience as Twi but she has a mind for doing things.
as for the Life bit, ye she would on both counts, and most likely create a combustible fruit of some kind to burn it down.
7009909 Either way, death or life, Its going to be a wild ride.
How long before Celestia tugs on Twilight's leash. Surely she wont let Twilight's madness go on forever.
7009940 oh it will be one hell of a ride that's for sure.
and who ones, so far Twi hasn't done anything to blatantly crazy.
Sorry but Chryssy was STILL an idiot. If she had acted like Cadance then Twilight wouldn't have the defenses up and could be captured easily. And with Cadance still in the caverns no shield to Team Rocket the changelings out of Equesrtia. Sorry as much as you try to defend her actions Chryssy's invasion plans were short sighted.
7009909 XD. I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!
But the pyros.............they can talk........
This is certainly interesting though.
PLZ tell me Twilight can't get anymore insane, cruel, or sadistic!
Yay! Chryssi will be okay!
7010088 actually this is pretty tame compared to some fics I know
Well aren't you the prolific one xD
7009759 Still, she really shouldn't be murdering Civilians like how she did in this Chapter by nailing them to the wall with Crystals
two chapters in one day it must be my birthday
But... how are the changelings going to get love? How are they going to feed themselves?
TwiXchrys ship on the insanity train! I wonder of they are into Bdsm
7010434 you didn't really read it did you? twilight explained to chrysi about how to get the love.
7010009 did her plan have flaws, yes no plan survives contact with the enemy. but allowing the Elements to remain in place could be very dangerous just incase the army was spotted early, so she preventively removed them from the equation.
Heck they literally had to defeat the Changelings with a Daus Ex Machina (or however that is spelled) because if you think about it, how is it a love powered shield did any harm to a race that literary eats the stuff?
It would be like throwing food at an invading army and hoping it some how defeats them.
7010088 Good news, I am done breaking her so she shouldn't get any worse unless something happens to cause Reaper to appear again.
As long as what remains of her Sanity is there she is just cruel and sadistic
7010810 There are many flaws with the episode but Chryssy should had a much better plan. Heck in one story Twilight turns out to be her daughter and actual pulls off a convincing Cadance and still removes the EOH threat.
Heck she wouldn't have to monolougue to by for time if she did it better.
7010234 To be fare she whens he did that she wasn't really Twilight, her mind had totally shatter as what remained of her Sanity couldn't deal with losing two of her closest human friends right in front of her so soon after losing Dupo.
Reaper was literally her insanity and psychopathy totally unchecked with a single minded goal and would kill anything between it and its target. she wasn't seeing them as soldier or Civilians they were just things in her way that needed to die as punishment for such actions.
Granted White Rabbit did bring Twilight back but she was still damaged far beyond repair which is why she is a psychopath.
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7010818 yes the monologue was a bad idea but she was kinda put on the spot so had to do the first thing that popped into her mind.
and yes there were flaws in the episode but it is a kids show so I don't think expecting Brilliant tactics and an expertly timed military take over with ruthless efficiency is to be fully expected.
I am a bit stuck as I want this to follow the past cannon as close as I can so I don't want to change things to much except what happens in my story.
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I know how their are going to get love. I meant how are they going to get love at the present - Not the future. I assume they invaded Canterlot to get love, so if they were in such a need of love, don't they need it like, immediately, rather than 'Whenever the ponies decide to love you'?
Even if they aren't starving for love, I assume they can't survive on solid food (Hence the need for love) therefore if they weren't to get love very, very soon, that changelings will start to die/starve.
I know changelings could disguise as the populace and gain love that way, but considering the changelings had to resort to invading, I question whether or not that could produce enough love in the first place in order to sustain their population. I guess it would suffice in the mean time though.
7010875 I'm going off the head cannon that they can eat other emotions it's just those ones aren't as healthy as Love is so are just enough to keep them alive but not enough to have them at full strength.
7010835 It's just trying to defend her plan I'm against. it really was poorly made. So she is right to question he leadership ability. But i bet Commander Sparkle can fix that.
7010961 she will, as Twi said there were things that failed as she said she could have tried other way but desperation does not lead to good judgment. But the fact she had a relatively good idea while despreat mean she will be deadly when thinking clearly and no longer being arrogant which Twilight cured. Also should point out the scene in the dungeons was from the Queens POV so who knows what Twi was thinking as she spoke though chances are some if not most of what she said was true there are probably parts that are manipulation
Plus the idea of The Commander reforming a villain through violence and death and giving her a choice between life and death just fits her so well.
7010988 and having a branch of the EDF able to shape shift would also be useful. If White Rabbit thought Twilight was bad imagine having to deal with Chagnelings.
Still wish that a Holy Hand Grenade played a part of that guys death.
7011001 sadly the EMSD hasn't made one yet.
but yeah Twi planned to get them in the army near the beginning of her plans, just needed forced strong enough to fight and know where they were. They are far to useful for Twi to not have under her command.
7010875 well in the comics (despite my loathing for having to rely on them) had a small race of overly loving furballs that the changlings fed off before the changeling arc of the comic. if not well I suppose they could do what they did in archmage by loyal where changelings survived off booze
7011014 Why I'm I now imagining Commander Twilight in a dark room with a large window with a view of the stars and her having a throne to view it with.
7011014 btw if you need a scientist you can use my oc bahamut (rule 63 humanized ff8 bahamut) img04.deviantart.net/9f51/i/2016/026/7/6/bahamut_queen_of_dragons_by_whitehawkmlp-d9pewiv.jpg
7011026 that does seem like something she'd do.
I can see her having a Lair somewhere in Equestria where she goes to, to make her plans for everything that could happen. Which leads me to a the thought she has a Plan to assassinate the Royal Sisters if need be though that is probably filed away in the "Extremely unlikely to be needed" File at the back of the filing cabinet
7011058 They can be under Order 66
7011058 yeaaaaah no i see that filed under 'if they pis me off badly' folder
7011090 that works.
7010824 Well, i can understand that then
7011360 yeah, I very meticulously planned out ever action taken. Now she may not go out of her way to kill civilians but if they do die then she wont really care and will enjoy their deaths the same as she enjoys the Feds dyeing as she enjoys causing pain and death.
She just would be slightly less brutal in the take downs the Reaper was.
...usually.....
Dang, that was shocking! And we get to see the flame troops in action!
7011541 I had hoped no one saw my plan for the changelings coming.
and yes you did, their hive made an excellent place for the Flame troopers to be deployed do to the narrow tunnels.
7010818 Can you tell me what that fic is?
7011629 Mirror Image.
7011630 Thanks mate!
7010814 "On shutters to imagine what lies behind that mask. What thoughts of chronic and sustained cruelty."
But thankfully it'll be devilishly tricky to have her go reaper mode. But how much more until she has NO sanity left? Have her be like a certain descendent of hers and be brutally rape (you've know EXACTLY what I mean)?
7011972 to be honest there is no way she can be much worse then she is unless she straight up abandoned her resrtraint and goes around killing everyone that crosses her bath while skipping to an upbeat pop tune.
Oh and I forgot to mention this earlier but, there is no commander rank in the army, there is one in navy and coast guard, and major is higher then those, the correct rank for twilight would be colonel through Lt general, according to the rank of the general on earth, I don't know if someone already brought this up but yeah.
After reading this Chapter, i now know not to piss Commander Twilight off... EVER!
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