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Plot twist!
Dang! This is getting intense!
Celestia isn't the problem. It's the intial meet with Shining. She just shouldn't be that could from the the begining. As the talked continued then sure. She certainly didn't treat her friends that way coming back.
6919738 Well the main reason for the difference is when with her Friends she was talking to civilians and wasn't really doing anything, now though she is acting on orders from the Princess and has run into a fellow soldier who just happens to be her brother.
She won't be as cold when she see's him again as she won't be on duty so will not be fully an officer.
6919884 I don't know. I think she could do a Hey Shining we'll talk later on duty now." Then it could have followed from there. That jsut cold onset just doesn't sit right with me.
6919907 and that there is the point of it. She is a very ridged soldier when on active duty to the point of basically being a totally different person that really won't mesh well with Equestria.
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That is a hay of a conditioning. It reminds me of that scene in the recent Robocop movie when, Robocop has its feelings to 0% and just waves off his wife and son like that. Has Sparkle been taking some feelings nullifying pills?
And the Feds are trying to reach her homeland... did you plan that from the start? It sure is a big plot twist! That may give a good reason for Commander Twi to train the royal guards (and more recruits) the "MOVE YOUR FLANKS FASTER YOU LARVAES!" way.
6919938 well it's not so much conditioning as her controlling herself, as we have seen in the recent chapters she is basically a psychopath and so in order to control her self she wrapped herself in layers upon layers of military training.
there were also a few other things that will happen later that shows her being driven further to this point.
But next time she sees Shining she will have had time to think about how she treated him.
Factor in she hasn't had any interactions with anyone but hardened soldier fighting for what they believe in so that is who she is used to interacting with.
As for the invasion it wasn't entirely but it's what came about from the idea of her helping to secure Equestria. it makes the most sense that Celestia would actually allow the militarization of her nation do to an impending invasion from a vastly superior force.
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Hopefully she's left behind the sadistic and psycho mare she was at the time she got her sergeant grade...
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6919114 This may sound (very, very, VERY) stupid, but you'd think that with a rocket launcher, you'd be able to detonate the exposed missiles, and thus killing the vehicle
6920198 yes but you'd have to hit it and Anti-Tank rockets tend to be more for ground vehicles and hitting an air target with them requires the target to not be moving and to have some luck. as well as not turn you into paste the moment it sees you.
i think you wrote Celestia just fine.
6920340 and why did Fimfic not notify me of your comment? But good point.
The Feds are coming!?!?!?!
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Because if the other ponies see her sing-songing and humming while killing Feds (if/when they reach Equestria), they surely won't appreciate.
6921595 which is why she only does things like that when alone.
6921190 OK, we need the Payday gang (hey, they'd HATE the Feds, and with Bain would kick their ASSES), Gordan Freeman, R.E.D. team, Lilpip (and her friends), Blackjack (and hers), all the other kick-ass groups from Fo:E, The Lone Wanderer, The Sole Survivor, The Corior, The Master Chief, Chell,.... who did I miss?
6929613 Use all of the noobs from ROBLOX that take atleast 1 second to shoot any sort of projectile as living shields/bait for landmines.
7016977 Badass motherfuckers don't NEED no meat shield!
.....that explains why you wrote the sequel
Epuus? Im pretty damn sure its Equus.
6929613 maybe commander Shepard
I really have one question for this chapter, why didnt anyone react to the scars? or shining armor for that fact, didnt react to the armor she was wearing or her legs... good chapter never the less, just really confusing
7079947 a lot of level 50 pilots from titanfall, and level 40 guardians from destiny.
Welp, cold Twilight is cold.
Well that was sudden.
I feel like I've been hit by a truck.
And then Shining Armor arrested her since his position as a de facto MP/Secret Service superseded her rank.
I think the opposite just get Celestia to earth and have her drop the sun
hahahaha sucks to be you Armour.
The present just got intresting
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what secret service