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Nightmare Moon would like to have a word with you, Sargeant Sparkle.
Aw man...Luna's going to be thrilled...yeah who am I kidding?
Holy throne, that was intense!
6912739 I'm happy because Twilight didn't try to put 'the Commander' in the back of her mind and try to act like her time spent fighting was just a bad memory. Those kind of stories piss me off.
Fed soldier : "I repeat, enemies on the roof!"
Fed sergeant : How the hell did they get there??"
Another soldier : "Huh!?! E-e-enemy sniper on the cloud!"
The sergeant : "What the f-" *BLAM!
But now, according to Twilight's dream, they'll be ambushed on the way back...
6913387 ah some one remember that unfortunate little bit of information I see.
as for that little skit.
but yeah she has a huge range of spell that can be adapted for combat oh so well I was like "how can I not use them?"
6913371 which makes absolutely no sense when you think about some one who has had a drastic personality shift as the Commander has. you can't just turn it off.
It just feels too soon for her to lose ANOTHER limb. you have about a year before she gets back.
And wow never thought Twilight as a sniper, Rarity sure but Twilight. AND MAN IS SHE SCARY! I bet she had that lesson zero grin too.
6913554 there is a reason she lost it so soon, it has to do with the feds incrasing the ambushes of the rebels squads. It's some what of a escalation, as more squads are ambushed, the rebels ar eon alert more, which means they are ready for attacks, which means the Feds need to changed the ambush, in this case it was snipers and then landmines in the only cover from the kill zone.
but later in the story it will all make sense and I don't plan on her loosing anymore limbs for a while.
also yes she had the Lesson Zero smile.
6913608 now that is the million Credit question isn't it?
6913599 Good that the rest will be a while for it just feels too soon.
6913619 Calling it now it's Chekov.
6913639 oh? why him?
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and yeah going to have her be a sergeant for a while, just couldn't really think of anything else to do with her as a private and it had been a while since she got a major motivator.
6913676 No family at all thus no loyalties or way to check and is aloofed. and finally Chekov's gun.
6913759 LMG's make you a bad guy?
weird, I usual use them when given the choice >.>
6913760 I'm talking about the term Chekov's Gun. Look it up.
6913778 huh...never heard of that.
not sure how it applies here.
6913783 I thought you literally made a Chekov's Gun for this. But either way, there is enough flags to make me think him first before anyone else.
Awesome chapter. Twilight's going just little of the rails on the crazy train. Now that she remembers she has magic, I am hoping for a want-it-need-it grenade, or some other magical application.
6913954 cast a want it need it spell on a rock in a fed mine-feild
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Not a bad idea.
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Just a small glimpse of exactly what has returned to Equestria.
and that is also a good idea.
6913808 no, I just liked the name Chekov
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Another use the pocket dimension could have :
- Sir! A rebel squad infiltrated our ammunition depot! We attempted to take them down but they... they vanished in a flash, sir...
- .. How much ammo did they steal, soldier?
- ...
- I asked you a question!
- ... They've taken everything, sir... the depot is empty...
- !?!?
6914735 how did you know what I had planned?
But yeah that may or may not be why the commander has so much ammo in Equestria.
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Just a hunch.
If Twilight has more or less infinet ammo...... M2 Browning, anyone? Or an IS-2........OR THE BROTHERHOOD OF STEEL!!!! SO MANY OP POSSIBILITYS!!
Awesome chapter BTW!
But Twilight was likeI'm retarded
And cue the minor mental breakdown.
oh helo nightmare twilight can you have my babies plz
Am I evil for being entertained by Twilight's enjoyment in her killing spree, especially when she sang
7042645 I'm like that when I get into an FPS with a mandatory knife. You would not believe how fun it is to go running around like a maniac with a knife in their ranks. Got a quad once, and did pretty well in a team deathmatch only using the knife for the last two thirds of the round.
7070320 when I play hard point on titanfall, my team mates send me in because it seems my sole purpose in that game is to be a huge distraction. Grenades every where!
... Way to stare a very useful ability in the face and do nothing, Twilight.
First command, raid went off perfectly......yeah this was the dream Twilight had towards the beginning. RIP a lot of soldiers soon.
And yet another ambush. A sniper in place and a minefield in their path. This just solidifies my opinion that either Twi has a tracking chip implanted in her, or there is a traitor (Still betting on the first one). I mean, I don't think the rebels would have lasted very long at all if this kind of thing was normal. This 'war' wouldn't have lasted a month if this were the case.
get rekt bitches
7440725 the chip would not work like that and they would have seen a chip when they examined her for the implants
Sorry, You just said WHAT now about my Princess? *loading a shotgun*
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Good point.
Somehow this sort of reminds me of some events in the movie Fortress near its beginning and end, if you've ever watched it? (Not the same events, but a similar sort of cycle...)
The moment i saw they needed a name change i knew it was nightmare lol obvious much
Was waiting for Twilight to use her head...er...horn for once. Hmm, I can see why magic is so useful in a tech filled world, they aren't expecting someone to walk on clouds and teleport around willy nilly. It's perfect!
I think it should be "infinite".
There probably now gonna wonder who the heck is Luna, let alone Celestia!
Well I'm glad I'm not the only one who Thinks Twilight is an idiot sometimes, she has so many spells that could be useful in a lot of different situations but never uses them!!
Ok nevermind, this is truly hilarious, sniping on a cloud? There never even going to expect such a thing as it should be impossible, unless your a certain unicorn on a alien planet! Hahahaha!