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Yep, you're back in style! Poor guy... That blasted White Rabbit will PAY!
The screams Twilight! What do they mean!
I think someone just made a HUGE mistake. A great many villains in Equestria underestimated Twilight. And now that she's learned military weapons and tactics, as well as what she's set herself to learn. Twi is going to be the most dangerous being on both worlds.
Can I say that White Rabbit has very seriously F'ed up!!!
Gah, it was takess me about 22 minutes to get onto a chapter for editing. Going to have to dedicate my entire Saturday to catch up and finish. Going to b the fastest way.
6991010 sorry.
blame the muse, the muse controls me I am merely the tool
but you can take your time my dear editor for there is no rush.
6990927 yes yes he shall
6990975 it's not so much underestimating her, White Rabbit is a very intelligent and dangerous human and is very capable of beating Twi. There is just something that has lead to this fuck up.
and yes mentally unbalanced element of Magic with advanced combat training and is basically Amoral, yes she is dangerous on both worlds.
It's amazing how right Rabbit is about Twilight when she arrived. They could have gotten much out of her and maybe even get her to side with them. Yet he is stupid enough to tick her off. If you knew what she faced before you would know better. Like Fisk you are a dead man walking.
Never seizes to amaze me, this story
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are you ok do i need to call you an ambulance
hmmmn well frsk is on my list of suspects now at the bottom now lets see if i am right aat the end i am always right after all
6991192 I will say but one thing about White Rabbit, the only reason he loses is do to the fact the psych eval was taken before the medical experiments, there fore is out dated...very out dated.
also welcome back tot he story, haven't seen you for a while.
6991195 well I am glad that my twisted little story can still amaze people.
6991225 Been making Cupcakes with Pinkie.
6991222 I honestly think no one will see who White rabbit is coming, and I don't think anyone has figured out what he is yet either.
though I have left clues as to what he is and less direct clues as to who he is so far.
6991234 ah that explains it.
I think I've done well in creating the villains of my little story as they have all be universally hated for different reasons and yet, at least as far as I can tell, been legitimate threats though I suppose I am biased on that front.
6991235 it's simple. He is a human Angel
6991259 hmm...hadn't thought of that one actually.
Oh, silly Wabbit. You have made the first mistake of thinking that there is a trap strong enough.
Twilight realizes that she's in a trap, BOOM, Rapidash Twiliy, and say goodbye to all your little machinations of grandeur.
6991282 Ever seen Monty Python and the Holy Grail?
6991332 one of the best movies of all time good sir. and creator of one of the best weapons in games, the holy hand grenade!
6991358 well that bunny was Angel BEFORE Fluttershy got him.
6991367 I...honestly can see that being true.
Is it just me, or am i the only one who thought 'Coup de grâce' when twilight killed/euthanized Wallace?
6991376 I figured after the Holy Hand Grenade Fluttershy found him and hursed him back to health. Result a tamer Angel.
6991424 well that depends what you mean by Killing Blow
6991435 that could be true, wouldn't put it past something from Monty Python world to thrown him into Equestria with how loony everything is there.
6991220 XD I have shit grammar bro, my bad.
6991235 we will see if you can surprise or if i am right
This is the first time I got tearful in this story. Euthanasia always hits me hard.
What other evil white rabbit do I know of?
7116896 (totally not an) Angel?
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6991235 hang on, i haven't read past chapter 18 but i have been going through previous chapters and i think i know who it will be.
Marcus, the guard from the first chapter.
I see cupcakes in White Rabbit's future.
It was the best choice, the guy was completely broken.
7406754 I agree on both counts!!
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7406754 Tear the F***er limb from limb in a mirror room so he has to watch, make him drink acid, make live scorpions crawl down his throat. I'm not crazy, I swear.
Not much scares me. that kind of psychological torture very much does. good job.
Oh Twilight...I am so very sorry. Things like this...this should not be your burden or your curse. What have they done to you...
It was at this moment he knew he fucked up.
I would love that soundtrack
It's been said that managing programmers (and by extension, computer creatives) is like herding cats. So yeah. ;D
Can also confirm, from personal experience, that being one feels very feline-like, for some reason. I guess I find the comparison rather flattering (you know - top-tier predators that move silently and with grace? ;D), and I suppose others do too.
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Not crazy, thorough.