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Oh no....
The situation is reaching Code Red level...
Somehow, I can imagine Twilight going the way of Shinji Ikari...
SHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT!!! TWILIGHT PLZ DON'T GO NUKE MODE.
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yes I had to end the chapter on a cliffhanger like this, I've been planning it for sometime. And you have no idea how annoying it's been keeping this under wraps and not having it sooner.
frankly I really liked this chapter as it has so much happen with this chapter both with Twi, the one that started Twi down the path into what she is now being heard from in a manner of speaking again, her squad seeing a side of her they probably rather not see and then that ending.
and yes I planned it all for it to go up when the next upload was going to be an interlude so you all have to wait to see what happens now.
Granted some are probably more interested in the Interlude but hey this is a major chapter of the story so yeah.
"MOM! TWILIGHT HAS THAT JOKER SMILE AGAIN!"
And darn you for leaving that on a cliff hanger.
6926750 well that's a surprise in all honesty.
6926789 is there any other way to describe that smile better?
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meant that part.
the skit was perfect.
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Twilight points at her flank : "You wanna know how I got this scar?"
Nightmare Squad : "Uhh... no?..."
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6927125 Twilight leaves a Fed building. Takes out a remote and presses the button.
Nothing Happens.
She frowns and starts fidling with it.
BOOM!
6927244 I like how my version of Twilight has become The Joker.
I'm so proud of her!
6927261 well a mix of joker and the Punisher.
6927297 to be compared to two legends such as them is such an honor.
6927314 and considering her intelligence and if she had an opprotunity she could be Joker/Punisher/Iron Man
6927325 hmm
she is scarier then I thought
6927332 I'm making a scarier version in one of my stories.
6927373 sounds interesting. though I guess mine would be worse if she didn't have self control.
oh shit code black twilights going to lose her shit
I was wondering when this was going to happen.
Okay, the grammar is barely acceptable, and the punctuation is virtually non-existent. You really should get an editor. But, the story is good, and through having to deal with the same sort of issues multiple times, I am able to ignore it and automatically correct it in my head.
bush did 9/11
Mr president sends his regards.
Crap
i.imgur.com/tFD5BZS.gif
CRAP
the feds caught the wrong train
7537225 think you quoted the wrong chapter.
You’re not alone Twilight, you’re not alone.
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That’s not funny man...not funny at all.
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Oh, wonderful timing! The popcorn just got done!
It's spelled HIKE idk y this 1 typo upset me so but it does
wtaf if the leak was what’s his name (guy that wanted to save Twilight from lab) Imma be pissed
*sniffs the air*
Smell that?
Smells like a set-up.
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This is an excellent thing to have Twilight give a lecture on. :/ (yeah, this common "Murphy's Law" understanding is wrong actually)
A better simplification of Murphy's Law would be more along the lines of "If anything can go wrong, it eventually will, somewhere*", but even that doesn't do it justice. For one, it has nothing to do with things going wrong, no. It does not apply to events happening to you. Here's the original (though generalized[1]) meaning:
So guys - give Murphy a break. ;]
Heh. In fact, Murphy's Law has more to do with the events at Chernobyl or Fukushima.
Also, note: the law says nothing about malice. You don't need to intend your actions be evil: cutting development costs that leads to disaster also applies (see for example: Apple, "Bendgate").
[1] originally, the statement was meant about a very particular someone, meant as an insult
Hmmm, I'm still not completely sure what made her act like this, the near death experiences, her torture and torment, or her cybernetic implants. How does one go from being completely shut down by killing a single FED to going full sycho mode and enjoying killing every FED she sees
Ok so there's definitely a traitor, and it might be multiple.