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Wow, double update today! And of course Twi has one of her 'crazy fits' but on the inside this time...
HE HE HE CAMP MENDEZ
love it
Hahahaha, CAMP MENDEZ! This is the best possible thing to happen.
Would she be called the purple death? Love the Sabaton.
What the bloody hell are you talking about? It is FAR too late for that.
XD
Or as the Rooks will call it, "hell on earth".
Is it me or is Twilight a darker version of Sargeant Hartman from Full Metal Panic?
Camp Mendez? Mendez said under his voice full of pride and liquid pride overcoming him before he shot the paintball through dimensions and hit twilight's flank before turning to the new recruits who bore a healthy dose of fear that even the commander in another dimension wasn't safe from Diablo Mendez
7003403 but....its so much fun reading into thing way more then would be sane!
YOU MAKE SO MANY CONNECTION NO ONE ELSE SEES OR CARES ABOUT!
also don't really use Pandora for my music to write i use Youtube and when writing most of the chapters for this, especially for the more action oriented ones, i put on Sabaton as it fits well.
Interludes usually get Slyphstorm as they are lighter in tone so Metal doesn't really fit the mood.
7003368 I believe she is just insane and enjoys torturing people to various degrees for her own amusement.
7003418 So... she's a mix of Soldier and Medic from TF2?
7003472 eh, she is more just insane , kinda like Doctor Edward Richtofen from Nazi Zombies.
I bet the Princess her chuckling to themselves later at the girls reaction.
Camp Mendez
*Back on Earth Mendez sneezes*
7003482 If she's broken, I wonder what's keepin' her alive since her friends and family in Equestria aren't on the list. If Twilight wins the war with the Feds, where will she go? Equestria doesn't have the know-how to help Twilight with her brand of PTSD and all her mental problems. Not even the soldiers of Equestria can relate to her as they haven't been exposed to war or suffered like Twilight has. Also, what with the secrecy BS? She's treating everything like she's in the freakin' equivalent of the CIA and the FBI. Why the hell are military people obsessed with secrets? Why. The. Fuck. Does she hafta say everything's "classified". It's really getting on my nerves now.
Anyway, I figured that Frisk taking away her cutie mark would mean the loss of her equinity and her cybernetics give her more power, but at this point, she really can't live without cybernetics. TO be honest, I feel that Twilight as of now from chapter 17 has become so edgy it's bordering on Mary Sue territory. Her canon self is OP with magic, this version of Twilight is OP with weapons and I've given up on Pinkie Pie already. Is it so wrong for me to think that Twilight might as well be Superman and Goku in a pony package?
7003521 well shes being kept alive by the simple objective of keeping Equestria and her friends and family safe.
as for the secrecy, if word got out of an impending invasion that can happen anywhere at any time from a race of being with technology far above Equestria to where magic doesn't give any form of edge it would cause a panic which would not do anyone any good, the EDF public image is to deal with situations that the Royal Guard cannot deal with like if there is another invasion like what the changelings did. But their actual point is to deal with the Federal Army if they show up.
As for her mental Problems she is sorta stuck with them as there is no way to fix her really.
and the reason she keeps certain things from the princesses even is because they would see her as a monster and try to contain her, which would cause Twilight to defend herself and that would result in her killing a lot of people and she'd rather avoid that.
and yes she does have to have her cybernetics to live.
also Twilight isn't unkillable, well the only thing on Epuus that is a threat to her are the Royal Sisters as theya re far more powerful then her so they could beat her if they wanted to.
But the Federal Army is a danger to her, a single sniper bullet to the ehad would kill her like anyone else as would getting shot in any vital organs. She's lsot everything that she can lose safely, all that left is things she needed to live so if she gets to injured she will die, just need to overwhelm her with fire power which the Federal Army is very cabale of doing.
A bit of a spoiler but later on Twilight is almost killed by two Strike Teams and is only saved by other rebels showing up and drawing fire.
Heck her shield shatter just from a single tank shell and since tanks are usually supported by infantry it would be simple to kill her with a tank shot then open fire with infantry.
She is very killable it's just she needs to be out maneuvered which is difficult as she usually isn't alone do to having an army under her command.
7003539 I didn't mean to rant like that. I'm so used to reading a Twilight is OP fic that it sometimes gets on my nerves. While I can just stop reading because of how you portray Twilight, I'm not that petty. I've read so many Badass Twilight fics that I should be used to this aspect of her now. For being a former magic savant, I have to remind myself that while Twilight is essentially a one-mare army, she has limits... just a higher threshold than everyone else. For all that's worth, I liked that she doesn't care about the nobles.
Camp Mendez = Hell.
ha i get that earth defense force reference
7003563 no it's fine, I don't mind your rant. It's my fault for how Twilight is portrayed as she hasn't Reallu faced much but normal soldiers.
Plus I do agree with you, I don't like unstoppable characters as it ruins the story do to there being no danger(unless its being played for comady)
And I can see why people should think my version of Twi is OP do to the fact they don't have access to the information I have.
I can garneree you that she is very stoppable, hell White Rabbit nearly killed her in their first meeting with the building.
And the next couple of chapters are going to introduce Feds that are in fact a threat to her I just have had the opertunity to deploy them in a realistic way.
Also rants like your are good for keeping stories on track and with in the realm of believability.
Plus it gives me a chance to explain things I have not been able to work into the story yet so that people can enjoy it because frankly I do not like superman and Goku as they are beyond Boring to me do to the shear lack of threats to them.
7003792 I was wondering if anyone else would make the connection to those games besides me. While its not so much a refrancr as I just like how EDF sounds though the irony is not lost on me about the other EDF.
7003418
I am starting to wonder if there is even one single possible good ending in this fic for Twilight at this point.
7004029 does total world domination with her as the supreme leader of Ebuus count as a good ending?
In all seriousness I do have a decent ending planned out that isnt really a "bad end" more like....hmm well depends on the person I suppose, either neutral or good.
I have the fine details o the fic panned out, only left the journey vague So as to allow the story to grow.
7003998 i have earth defense force 2025 on my ps3 and play it once in while thats why i know that
7004173 ah then you know it from somewhere else as I have never heard of that game.
7004376 you never heard of the earth defense force games? then just play them they are amazing and 2025 even has co-op and there is friendly fire always on but still very fun games even more so if you love to blow giant insects and robots apart
7003143 I agree.
Mendez reminds me way too much of my Calculus teacher, Mr. Merced.
As I haven't seen it posted, EDF fan art
orig12.deviantart.net/d4ac/f/2014/152/c/b/edf___equestria_defense_force_by_dishwasher1910-d7kkpj2.png
(not mine btw)
Camp Mendez... Perfect!
I call it now, Mendez is a Jedi.
7406884 May the force be with you, Mendez!
Gonna Call it, they might start pulling there manes out in less then a week or two in that camp.
Throne...not thrown...thrown is used differently and have different meaning.
7357417 YYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can feel mendez grinning across the multiverse..........
I see that Earth Defence Force Reference there Man is that a Good game!
(Playing EDF: Insect Armageddon Again!)
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Honestly? I never even heard of the game till some one mentioned it in the comments of the story.
HOW MANY THINGS HAVE THE INITIALS “EDF”?!?!
hahahahaha
Celestia is so chill. Also, I am gonna take a hitchhike and point out about the Israeli Defense Force (IDF)
Ponies, welcome to Tartarus in Equestria.
EDF! EDF!
(i wonder)
I know you weren't directly referencing this, but I can't help but thinking of this any time the letters EDF is used haha
Fuckin love that game tbh just pure, mindless fun
I'm skipping alot of chapters and just skipping to the interlude chapters, I really hope I'm not missing anything.
I will be reading the other chapters eventually as I see them as prequels, I only finished chapter 1 before only reading the interlude chapters.