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kudzuhaiku


She's looking at you. Yes you. And she is judging you with her eyes. There is no escape.

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A kudzu story, with that tag/character setup? This is going to be a trip!

The plague reminds me a bit of the Black Death, just casually wiping out a third of the population, taking the poor and powerful alike.

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Um, hold that thought. Twilight never died of the plague, as you can see.

6466022 Yeah, I know. I'm betting his 'reality' was a dream while in the cocoon. His delusions are likely visions of his past before being captured.

My guess is brain worms that are messing with ponies heads. Perhaps specialy designed changeling "infiltrators" that took control of the earth ponies and pegasi, and for whatever reason the horned ponies either werent affected or found a way to fight back, but the potential for treachery by non-horned ponies was too high so they left for some as-yet unknown reason, to try and come up with a way to magicaly purge the parasites from ponies brains.


Or i'm probably WAY off base.

Its matrix

I think I know what's going on.
I just want to see how it plays out now.

It fits. It really, really fits. Start at about 0:36.

A changeling winning fic?

Eeeeh. Not sure bout this one. Though that might partly be because that i recently encountered a changeling wins fic that had some promise ubt quickly got...... confusing.
And that is after a lot of them that just didn't work. Changelings are creatures whose powers are for deception and they tend to buckle when faced with expecting opponnents.

Oh my... this looks interesting. Yet another Kudzu story I'll have to favorite then. At this rate you are going to be owning half the stories on there: ajsmug:

6466099 I refute that claim, sir! Changelings are awesome! You will bow before the Queen and lick her hooves as you will have no other choice. It is her Will!

...and stuff...

...besides, a lot of people just don't write them correctly. Too many people have bought into the tropes most commonly associated with changelings. What good is your imagination if you let someone else tell you what it should be?

I've been waiting for Kudz to get this story a-rollin'.

6466068 my thought exactly. I like the the changelings and believe they do not always get a fair shot but in this case yes.... the matrix is the perfect model.:twilightoops:

6466169 i don't mind to have a lick :derpytongue2:

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if only Kudz added a blue pill

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What if you found changelings whose powers weren't just deception?

Cry HAVOK! And unleash the Black Plot Bunnies! They're so hungry after being banished from The Weed and being denied in The OtherOther.

Fan Theory Time!
This story is a changeling that was still being conditioned to be loyal to a Changeling Queen.
Like removing a bee pupae before it fully matures from its honeycomb Twilight in her Metalgear War outfit (ala It's About Time episode)
Perhaps Chrysalis had succeeded in her bid to take Canterlot? If his dream conditioning pointed out the fall of the Alicorn Sisters and the death of Cadence perhaps Twilight leads the resistance? It would explain why Sideralis' Mother knew how they died but not why Twilight disappeared and why she was so sad that Cadence's love was lost from Equestria.
Also, fun fact: Sideralis is a type of Moth, Prorasea genus, part of the Crambidae family, or Grass Moths. They hide in plain sight by folding their wings vertically on stalks of grass. Not unlike changelings do in a crowd!

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Sideralis also means starry, and was one of the messengers of Hypnos.

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Huh, did not know that. I knew that Hypnos was the Twin of Thanatos.
But not that Hypnos had messengers other than-
Morpheus: The Winged God of Dreams, able to take any human form in dreams.
Phobetor: He was the one who created the scary dreams. He was the personification of nightmare, taking the form of huge and scary animals.
Phantasus: He was the one creating the fake and illusional dreams, and had no animus form.
Ikelos: He was the one creating the true dreams, making them more realistic.

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Psychopomps. Birds, moths, other messengers.

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Also, the WIP is up. Wanna know more?

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Despite being a loyal patreon I usually wait for the finished product. . .buuuut, I'mma check it out now.
Edit:
Wooow, did not see that coming. Kudos to you for subverting my expectations.

6466748 hwat i mean is their shapeshifting and abilities to dull the mind are more fit for a species who is reliant on secrecy. true chrysalis was stronger and could pose a more physcial threat compared ot the changeligns, but she was some kind of ruler. and in mlp the ability to dropkick dragons seems to be a requirment on the application.

guess it depends on what those abilities are. though as i said, its kinda a personal thing for me. i love the changelings are an idea and concept, just seems like every other story seems to completely forget the part where Chrysalis herself admits her overpowering celestia was a fluke.

Sideralis, as in the Astronomy term?

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Um... hold up on any further mentions of Chrysalis until the next chapter is realised... mmmkay?

Trust me. :pinkiecrazy:

Whoa. This is gonna be trippy. Can't wait to see where this goes. :yay:

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It's an astronomy term too?

Neat. Noted.

:applejackunsure: uhhhhhhhhhh, OK....... We'll see where this goes...

Kudz level gore, HA! I laugh at you, try your best to make me cringe:trixieshiftright:

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I have a chapter known as papercuts in a story. It made grown men cry.

6467110 well.... Meh, you shoot, and see if i can dodge.
Also, what story is this, I'd like to read it.

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To Dance in Shadow.

Good start. Goooooood start!:raritystarry:

You had my curiosity but now you have my attention.

So, is there some inspiration from the Matrix in here? It almost seems as such, but dang this seems pretty intense.

Snuggle Buddy is best pony!

My first thought was the Bugs were trying to siphon love from a pony with intimacy issues, and put him in therapy while cocooned, then when the pony's colors were pointed out, Luna had a sex change operation!

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Srsly, I'm seeing it too.

Mind control parasites? Not sure what to think bout that. Though it kinda fits with your typical works with the changelings, making em more alien and scifi like.

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Chrysalis was more into deception and trickery. Mariposa was more into parasites. But, but absorbing so much of Chrysalis' drones, Mariposa now has both. She commands disease, plagues, sickness, she makes weakness. She's forced Chrysalis to take on a new role and apply herself.

6467910 ....... Would that mean you could easily defeat her using that illness repellign spell Cadance can do and a bottle of antihestimine?

The second part was a joke.

Not saying that is not a dangerous power, just that ponies have a means to repel it.

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You might block some of her diseases, but her parasites are a whole different beast.

6467963 eh debatable. depends on the term disease being used. though i guess you can't repel what already got inside you.

though there are definitely a few questions to answer. though will wait and see when they are.

Ooh, parasitic warfare. That's nasty.

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Oh good, I'm not the only one that got kind of a Matrix vibe.

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*remembers the papercut chapter*
*shudders*
dude. I had forgotten about that one. Dammit, now I'm remembering it.

Oh, so it's this kind of concept! Awiaiting chapters with the other harmony memebers if they're alive.

A bitt too rushed for my liking. Can I haz Enviroment Descriptions?
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EDIT: Do we get other Luna clones, best two ones that reasemble s01e01 Luna and Nightmare Moon? Any chances for XCOM2 refrence for the gamers? (as it's vaguely a simlar genere)

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For environment, I sorta skipped over that on purpose. Sideralis can't see very well, and everything is seen from his perspective. In time, we'll be seeing more of what he sees.

And yes, we will see other Luna clones. Perhaps even successful ones.

Edit: Wait until the introduction of the airship.

6468675 Cheezburger iz sad. Even a mentation of a blurry wall makes a story more immersive. Maybe remember that if you're gonna make edits?

Any chances for friendly ones? Is there a possibility that his brokeness is in a way am advantage?

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I have a good feeling bout this one I think this story is gona be great

Mariposa. Queen Mariposa. A member in relation to the Monarch butterfly genus is a Mariposa.
Her name is Queen Queen. No relation to Moon Moon.

Bio- and asymetric warfare? Chrysalis being calculating and malevolent as we all know she is, but on Twilight's side? Luna clones? A tale of brutal war, loss and triumph?

:rainbowhuh:
:pinkiegasp:
:raritystarry:

I'm hooked :pinkiehappy:

I'm feeling... Matrix. This has a Matrix feel. Also, the only good bug, is a dead bug. We all know that.
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Mariposa, also the Spanish word for butterfly.

I I subscribed when you said Twilight killed a thousand Changelings.

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