• Published 23rd Sep 2015
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Twilight's Toys - The Abyss



Hooked up to a fucking machine, Rainbow experiences levels of pleasure unheard of by most mares at the hooves of Twilight.

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Twidash + the abyss + clop = Yep, I love it lol.

This shall be fun *gives a thumbs up before reading*

Hot stuff Abyss.

Cover art by Drake

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Nice to see he's doing stuff other than his music.


....I'm very tired

The Eclipse approves!:twilightsmile:

As always a great story from the abyss!

I NEED MOARRRR!:rainbowkiss:

Idea for sequel:Twilight starts manufacturing and selling theses things and the rest of the mane 6 agree to try out the consumer model before it hits shelves.

6455686 Lol, good idea.

6455688 :pinkiehappy:Disclaimer: Fossil-Dragon-Messiah is not responsible for any and all ideas that he pulls out of his ass. Please fossil responsibly

6455060 Yeah, it's a shame he doesn't play with his band anymore, I wish he'd come back for a Drake and Josh reunion. That's be sweet.

Biting down on her hoof,

Can... can she do that, given the position she's in? <___<

6455108 the eclipses profile pic is missing

Cover art by Drake

Started from the bottom now he here!

wow. kinky... I want that toy! 0.o
Lucky Dash.

Amazing super hot

Of course it's you Abyss.

Always nice to see you in the box.

What was the best part of the story? Well in my opinion it was...

“That... was... amazing...” Rainbow panted. “You know, I sure wish I could go for another few rounds...”

Twilight’s tone changed from soft to very sultry. “Oh, that can be arranged, Dashie...” She slid from the bed and lit her horn, clicking the dial on the machine up a few notches. She smiled as she heard Rainbow moan again. Twilight watched as the dildo plunged all the way up to its medial ring, only to pull back to start fucking Rainbow all over again. “You know... I think I’m gonna run some errands, Rainbow. I’ll see you in a couple hours.”

Rainbow simply smiled.

Because the ending is always the best.

There's a dangling prepositional phrase in your description.

Fucking machines.

What fun is it if it has no Dicks?!

Cover art by Drake...
It is odd how common a name that is for artists.
There is an artist named Drake who has a website called Medusariffic.
It could be same lifeform, could be different.

thumb up #200 reporting in

6460753 Normal boners are not cool enough, if you're gonna have one, you gotta do it Hisoka style!

Lmfao, one of your clopfics has made it further than any of mine in such a short time... I could only wish..

I love it. It was hot

Wasn't a story of a similar plot featured a while back?

Hot diggity dog! Machines are the best! Thumbs up!

6459181 you sir

wow there is a lot of ass hurt in this comments section lmfao

6462789 Pfft, if you think I wrote this mature story for tweens, you're sorely mistaken.

6456282 Lol, got that, thanks. Let's just say my mind was a little hazy when I was writing this. ^^

6557838 Nice, thanks! I added it to the story's page. :heart:

That was a awesome beyond awesome read.

MMOOOORRREE PPLLEEEEZZZZEE !!!!!!!! THAT WAS AAWWWEESSSOOOMMMEEE !!!!!!!!

TWILIGHT, YOU ARE A GENIUS !!!!

6456625 Goddamnit! No more pop culture references! XD

Well this was rather hot. It could burn with a touch. :3

I'm a little jealous of that little machine of Twilight's... >.<

Welp, my mind's dead, burned, toasted to death and ready to be eaten by Death...

but let out a long and throaty moan as the dildo slid all the way up to its medial ring inside of her.

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Thanks! Totally forgot to make that change haha

Comment posted by Second Chance deleted February 21st
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