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The Abyss


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This is going in my Read Later Clop Folder. Would read now but I am honestly amazed I can even read what the hell I am typing right now lol.
*Leaves so he can go promptly pass out*

Oh my. I'll have to read this later. Tonight most likely. *squee*

6575574 Mods wouldn't let me use the SFW version of this pic. :P

You've delivered a great story once again. I just love reading Octascratch fics, and this story was just as good, if not better, than your other stories. I loved it!

If there's a sequel let me know.

So... um...DID VINYL WIN?

Vinyl's lucky to have such an awesome marefriend XD

6575585 I can't find the artist Shino on derpibooru or deviantart. Do you have a link by chance? orrrr a broken one with like spaces?

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Shinodage, is the artist's full name if I remember right.

It's probably saying something about me that I can instantly tell from a quick look at the picture without looking at the description even, but yeah. Helps in times like these! :rainbowlaugh:

6576091 Shinonsfw is her tumblr! :pinkiehappy:

6576091 His name is shinodage on DA, but shinonsfw on tumblr. Since he goes by many names, I went with the base name.

This Art... :raritystarry:

Not the couple that I usually read, but I think I will give it a try :raritywink:

6576216 His DA graffiti is amazing. So well done and detailed. Thx for the info!


6576244 Thx, found the pic :trollestia:


6576246 Ah gotcha! Thx for that and nice story btw :raritywink:

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Yer whale cuuum :ajsmug:

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Is Shino a 'he' or a 'she'?! :raritydespair:

*Nosebleed**passes out from blood loss* and He's out someone get me a bucket of water.

6576287 :trollestia: Whale Cum :trollestia:

And the picture on the DA is a guy. I just assumed it was him. In Argentina as well; according to the DA
:rainbowhuh:

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Gallons :trollestia:

I always knew I couldn't trust a Gypsy Pinkamena :fluttershyouch:

6576358 "Every time I go port to port, I produce a quart" :trollestia:

6576358 He, she, tomato, cumquat, everyone looks the same on the inside!

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I had a feeling that was from something.
Thank you, Google :heart:


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You mean metaphorically or biologically? Because let me tell you, some people are pretty messed up on the inside!

Hooooooo boy... I found this to be very entertaining...
I guess you could say I wub it :rainbowkiss:
I'm terrible~

Awesome work Abyss~

6576454 Weeeeellll, if you ever cut up a pony into teeny, tiny little squares,most of them think the same thing! Although some don't. Then they're all thinking a different same thing. Differently. But the same!

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That was terrifyingly specific. :trixieshiftright:

6576587 Oh no no no, I was being broad! If I were to be specific, I'd need a whole BUNCH of comments, and then I'd probably get banned for spam! Not the yucky, kinda-good-but-not-at-the-same-time, spam, but the get-banned-to'the-moon, spam.

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Not the get-banned-to-the-moon spam! That'd be awful :raritydespair:

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Please take your conversation elsewhere. It is disappointing to get a comment on a story of mine only to find out that it has absolutely nothing to do with the story.

6576804 Oh. Okay. I will gladly comment on your story once I find the time to read it later tonight.

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Sorry, I didn't realize I was doing it :twilightblush:

But on the story itself, I'll end by letting you know that it was wonderfully written.
I can even say it was rather stirring, too. So there's that :heart:

you did it again my pervy friend, :) Good work!

I demand a sequel.

Wow. Simply wow. Okay, I just...Wow. Have I said wow yet? Wow!

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Ah, porn about pastel colored horses in the land of friendship and little girls toy sales...What could be better?

Anyways, Vivd description and excellent writing. I typically give more in-depth critique but with my schedule right now and not to mention the quality of the work... It would be a bit of a waste to critique as you're already an excellent writer. Of course, everyone can improve but there isn't anything blaringly wrong that I saw from a quick read.

So, overall, great job. :derpytongue2:

6577371 I'm glad that you like it. I had a lot of fun writing this one. :twilightblush:

Vinyll should repay her.

My weakness. NO!.... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Unf.

Were you quoting Fisto with the assuming the position stuff?

6578155 I have no idea who that is, so no.

6578161 A sexbot. It's a sexbot.

This is nice! Short, sweet and to the point. Pretty good in my opinion! Awesome job. :pinkiehappy:

:raritywink: You did a very good job at describing the scenes, Dear.
It was a very good read. the scenes were just so fluid, :trollestia: pun intended.
Though I am saying the pacing was good. :twilightsmile:

This is going right in my folder of pervy fics to live.

To think I clicked this fic by mistake, happy accidents are the best accidents.

Welp, back to the main page for some Sunset X Rarity.

Cum swallowing and lots of cunnilingus

I am prepared for Valhalla!
Minion! Prepare my Chariot of Flames, we shall ride this fic till sundown.
Prepare thee my feast, we shall be busy tonight.
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6577573 But my body! My BO-DYY is tellin' me yeeeeessss!

Far out, great fic, as always! Thumbs up!

This is my fetish....times 2.

That... Was... AWESOME!!!! :rainbowkiss:

I'm reminded of a Joseco pic.

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