• Published 6th Aug 2015
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The Stars Did Aid In Our Escape - QueenMoriarty



While browsing the Star Swirl the Bearded wing, Twilight Sparkle learns something tragic about the history of Equestria and the meaning of her cutie mark.

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On the Significance of the Stars

"A pleasure to see you back here, princess."

"The pleasure's all mine." Twilight Sparkle smiled at the night guard as his horn glowed, and the door was unlocked. Beyond the gate of iron bars waited the Star Swirl the Bearded wing, the most secure part of the Canterlot Archives and repository of the most dangerous and volatile knowledge in all of Equestria. Wards against teleportation, invisibility, wall-walking and even basic telekinesis were imbued into every stone of the wing, with the only way in being an unlocking spell that only the guards were authorized to even think about. In this one corner of Canterlot, the princesses had to answer to their guards.

That didn't stop Twilight from brainstorming various ways to duplicate the spell or cheat the system. Purely as an academic exercise, of course.

"Feel free to call if you need anything," the guard told her, and the princess snapped out of her thoughts of treasonous conspiracy long enough to nod and smile at the guard once more. With the pleasantries now out of the way, Twilight all but barreled into the secure wing. It took less than ten of her great leaping steps to bring her to the hourglass at the center of the room. She stood there for a few minutes, simply drinking in the musty air and perking up at the smell of moldering paper. She could hardly imagine what sort of potent spells were hidden in these neglected tomes, what valuable magical insight she might have gone her whole life without knowing. In the crowded darkness of very early morning, Twilight Sparkle waited for the right moment with bated breath.

It was scarcely a minute before the sun rose, its beams shining through the endless motes of dust and illuminating books and scrolls that had gone untouched for decades, perhaps even centuries. Twilight reared up on her hind legs, fluffed her wings up and whinnied, her eyes dancing over the endless possibilities and trying to settle on just one direction to charge in.

As fate would have it, as the sun rose behind the indecisive alicorn, its rays shone through the hourglass and the princess's wings. A single ray of sunshine pierced the persistent shadows, and Twilight's gaze was immediately drawn to the tome it illuminated. The moment she saw it, she reached out with her magic and brought the dusty book across the room towards her.

Twilight Sparkle had a rich internal dictionary, which went well with her endless internal monologues. She had been planning for the use of most of the words in that dictionary today, with every adjective from 'impressive' to 'pointless' lined up and waiting to be applied to whatever book or scroll fell into the questing bookworm's hooves. The only one she hadn't been expecting to use in some capacity was, well, 'unexpected'.

Most details of the book were the sort of thing Twilight had been expecting in the Star Swirl the Bearded wing. The binding was snakeskin, expertly crafted but obviously ancient. The pages looked cracked and torn at first glance, and what little color there had been on the cover was now almost completely flaked off. Half of the ancient pigment was now floating in the air, increasing the dust density to levels bordering on hazardous in some corners of the room. But there was one detail about the book that came out of left field for the princess, and that was the cover itself. Though the colors were all but gone, the gold leaf outlining the shapes still clung to the snakeskin, and that showed Twilight all she needed to see.

The design on the cover was the princess Twilight Sparkle's cutie mark, a six-pointed star on top of a six-pointed star, and surrounded by five other stars. A small patch of violet pigment still clung to one of the points of the largest star, leaving no doubt in Twilight's mind. Instead, it raised questions, questions she could not help but ask aloud to herself.

"What is a book with my cutie mark on it doing in the Star Swirl the Bearded wing? And for that matter, how is it so old?" She tried to blow off a bit of the dust, but stopped her breath when the last of the color started to tremor and shake itself loose. "This can't be one of my old schoolbooks, can it? I can't have been gone for this long." As if to emphasize her point, a spider's corpse slipped out from between the book's pages. Twilight watched as it fluttered to the ground, as though expecting it to explode in a shower of magical sparkles.

Unable to wonder without answer any longer, Twilight finally opened the book, easing back the cover as delicately as possible for fear it might break off. The first flimsy page was almost bare, except for a small, horn-written title.

On the Significance of the Stars

An essay by Star Swirl the Bearded

Already, the mystery of the cover was seeming far more mundane. It was an arrangement of stars, a constellation that had fallen out of favor with Luna and was no longer seen in the night sky. It was the only explanation for why Twilight had never seen it when stargazing.

It didn't explain why she hadn't seen it in any astronomy textbooks, but the prospect of reading one of Star Swirl's personal essays was too tantalizing for the princess to pursue the mystery of the cover. Instead, she turned the page, and started reading the faded words.

Most ponies don't see the stars as anything special. They're the backdrop of the night, little more than fireflies. If anypony were to associate the stars above us with magic, their thoughts would most likely turn to Princess Luna and her breathtaking night skies. They certainly wouldn't think that those stars were more homeland to ponykind than any part of Equus.

Not even a paragraph in, and already Twilight was confused. That was the intoxicating thing about Star Swirl's writings, though; if it didn't boggle your mind within the first few sentences, it was an academic rip-off.

Don't be so surprised, dear reader. Haven't you ever wondered about how much we stand out on this planet? Every race that isn't at least vaguely equine is barbaric, insanely pragmatic, or some kind of horrible monster. Equestria is the most fertile land in our entire world, and sometimes it seems like ours is the only land that is not an untamed wasteland. Who is it that does not fit the pattern here?

Despite how alien the idea was, Twilight couldn't fault the logic on display. She would need more than a few short phrases to convince her, though, so she read on.

I noticed this pattern for myself not too long ago. I haven't bothered broaching the subject to my students, of course. Too many wizards ruins a spell, as I always say. No, instead I pressed on alone, travelling to distant lands and asking those who would listen if they remembered a time with no ponies. I found my answer with a mighty red dragon, his hoard so high it took me three days to scale it. He told me of a star that fell from the heavens, then cracked open and spilled out ponies of every form, from the humble earth pony to the resplendent crystal equines. Normally, of course, I would dismiss this as a creation myth, but a dragon as old as this one has no reason to lie about the origins of his favorite meal. Myself excluded, of course, on account of how difficult it is to get beard hair out of one's teeth.

Twilight chuckled a little, still surprised by the great mage's casual approach to mortal danger. Had she been in the wizard's hooves at the summit of that dragon's hoard, she would have been shaking like a leaf in a hurricane.

But despite my source's credibility, I could not be certain. The word of an ancient dragon pales in comparison to a total lack of evidence, after all. There had to be something else, something to shed light on where we came from, if from anywhere at all. And while I could not find any creature or ancient library older than the dragon, I did find an alternative.

I traveled to the reclusive jungles of Zanzebra, where one can find potionmasters and alchemists that put me to shame. What a zebra can do with a few ground-up flowers, why, it rivals any enchantment I could conjure up. And that is because the zebra race, more than any other I have met, understands where power over others begins; the mind.

When I braved the jungle this time, I found a dazzle of zebras slaving away over a memory potion, capable of showing one the memories of those who came before them. They had made the usual breathtaking advances I expected of their kind, but as it was, the potion only allowed you to go back five generations in your family. Thoughts of my Alien Equine Theory came pouring back, and I dedicated the next few months of my life to improving the formula.

Twilight Sparkle turned the page, unveiling a complex diagram of the memory potion with scribbled notes about ingredients and improvements. Time and neglect had taken their toll on the drawing, and just the turning of the page seemed to have smudged quite a bit of the ink, but the central details were all there. Memory dawned on Twilight as she looked at the shape of the bottle, the designs on the handle, and a few barely decipherable notes on color; this was the same potion Zecora had given her during the Plunder Vine Incident. On the next page, the essay that had quickly become a series of anecdotes continued.

After much study and experimentation, along with a few tragic mishaps, we were able to perfect the memory potion. Now, instead of tapping into family genetics, it could let you experience memories from anypony of your species across a massive expanse of history. Rather than concoct different potions for the different species, I instead mixed in a magivorous protein that would feed off of a creature's specific brand of magic and change the formula to suit that species. Even a stray hair is enough to trigger the change, so a pegasus need not feel pressure to sacrifice a feather for magical stirring purposes.

Twilight was slightly confused by this. Zecora had claimed the potion would only respond to alicorn magic, yet Star Swirl had apparently made the potion to be accessible by anypony. Or perhaps Zecora had said that to make sure it was Twilight that activated it; Celestia knew they wouldn't have gotten anywhere with the plunder vines if Twilight had instead wasted the entire potion looking at the history of Zanzebra. Probably, anyway.

I had done everything I could to make the potion as potent as possible. The more a pony drank, the older the memory they experienced. While the rest of the team was celebrating our accomplishment and indulging in first-hand experiences of their own mythology, I worked feverishly to produce the gallons of memory potion I would need. I had not lost sight of why I had helped them with this potion; Quite the contrary, it had been on my mind every day for those grueling three months. Access to ancestral memory was the key to understanding the origins of ponykind, I could not afford to doubt it. I finally had the tool I needed.

When I at last left the jungle, I paid little heed to the well-wishes or the jubilant festival behind me. My cart was heavy with the key to the past, all twelve gallons of it, and I dared not perform this experiment somewhere where anypony would be concerned for my health. Of course it was dangerous, but danger cannot impede progress. The best it can do is distract progress with a shiny toy for a few minutes.

As soon as I could be reasonably sure the zebras would not find me, I cast my spell and began to drink. As I drank, I slipped in and out of history, the jungle briefly disappearing to be replaced with a temple or battlefield. Moments as recent as the previous Tuesday gave way to bygone ages that even I had believed to be baseless myth. I bore witness to the Crystal Exodus, and stared in awe as the mighty maelstroms of the Unconquered Sea were broken beneath the hooves of the hippocampi. With every legend revealed as truth, I grew more hopeful.

When I started on the final bottle, I opened my eyes and saw darkness. I felt the presence of so many ponies all around me, but I had no idea who any of them were. The only thing I could see was the glow of unicorn magic, brighter even than the magic of the princesses. But for all the power I sensed, the only spell they were casting was telekinesis. Telekinesis the likes of which I have only seen used to govern the stars themselves.

And now at last we return to the matter for which this essay was named. For as I further explored that vision of the distant past, I discovered that these mighty unicorns were not arranging the stars as my student Luna does, but using the stars as a climber might use outcrops of rock. They were on a vessel moving through the vastness of deep space, and using the stars to guide their path.

On the opposite page, there was a picture of the vessel, a nearly-perfect sphere of polished metal. It was surrounded by stylized six-pointed stars, and a jagged tracery denoting unicorn magic was extended between the sphere and the nearest star. Twilight's magic danced over the cracked page in wonder, as she did not trust something as clumsy as her hoof to trace the lines of faded ink. After studying the image thoroughly in search of hidden messages, she turned the page.

When I awoke from that vision, I had never before known such anticipation. The dragon had spoken the truth, and I was now on the cusp of discovering the origins of ponykind. I could only hope that there was enough potion left to glimpse the world from whence we came. I seized the final bottle and drank deeply, until there was not a drop left to drink.

When I next opened my eyes, I was not in Equestria, or indeed anywhere on Equus. I was on a whole other world, and everything from the soil beneath me to the ponies around me assured me of that. Its technology was so advanced that I mistook their science for magic at first, and nowhere was that more evident than at the observatory on whose lawn the potion had dropped me. Within those steel walls, I saw things that nopony of Equestria will believe for the next thousand years. Telescopic lenses that could watch the dance of solar flares with nary a spell in sight, flickering glass that displayed the most intimate details of distant galaxies, and a magnificent machine that poured forth a drink so potent that those who drank of it seemed to almost explode with energy.

As I was only a spectator in this memory, I chose to admire that which needed only be seen to be appreciated. I went to the telescope, hoping to catch a glimpse of some constellations so I could try to chart the stars for this strange world when I woke up. But as I approached, the pony using the telescope shrank back from it in fear. I peered through, and was taken aback at the sight of a purple six-pointed star hanging in the night sky.

Twilight Sparkle stopped reading, and turned to stare at her cutie mark. Rarity would have said it was magenta, but Star Swirl didn't seem the sort of pony to give a cat's whisker about shades of purple. The question of the cover had a new answer now, one that only served to unnerve the princess. A part of her still hungered to know the full story, though, so she turned her gaze back to the pages of the essay.

I followed the panicking scholar, and within no time at all we reached a town square. Descending from the sky there was a winged unicorn, and upon her rump she bore a mark that looked just like the purple star. She was met with fear, and hatred that even I could see was unfounded. As the ponies fled, I saw shock and dismay on the alicorn's face, and I found myself compelled to go and comfort her. But as I put my hoof on her shoulder, I saw in her eyes that she did not feel it. I was only a spectator to ancient history.

Twilight's magic wavered as she began to turn the page, fearing what she might see. Her worst fears were realized, as Star Swirl had drawn the alicorn, and she saw too much of herself in those lines of faded ink.

They ran from her. Wherever she trod, nopony would dare wander. I cursed myself for drinking so much, for I could not awake from this horror nor force time to move faster. I watched as the alicorn was shunned for her very nature, saw her shed tears as those she had once called friends turned their backs on her for changing. Even through the fog of the ages, I could sense the matchless magic within her, and it broke my heart to see that potential untapped.

When I learned why they made that vessel to travel the stars, I very nearly broke. They made it so that they might abandon her. The ponies sealed themselves within an impenetrable sphere of metal, and their strongest unicorns reached out to the stars in the hopes of either pulling themselves up or making the heavens crush their world. The earth withered without the earth ponies, storms raged without the pegasi, and it felt as though the planet itself would rupture with no unicorns to channel the magic. In the end, there was only myself and the alicorn.

I awoke too late, it seems. Even the ancestral memory of a world dying beneath my hooves was enough to shake me to my core, and I can feel something splinter within myself. As I write these words, I feel like I should be crying, but I find I cannot. A pony died alone and crying on an empty world, and part of me refuses to accept that. It is a part of me I did not know existed, and do not yet understand. This deserves some study.

The words ended there, and the next page was utterly blank. Twilight turned the next few pages, certain it did not end there, but after twenty pages it seemed that was all he wrote.

Twilight Sparkle set the book down, and stared at the blank pages. What was she meant to take from that? Was she the reincarnation of that alicorn? Was this simply another of Celestia's elaborate pranks? Whatever it was, it was ancient, and had been all but forgotten in a dusty corner of a heavily guarded wing within an archive that scarcely anypony ever visited. If this were a prank, it was far too elaborate for even the princess to pull off.

After much deliberation, Princess Twilight closed the book, and returned it to its place on the shelf. "I am not that pony," she told the empty room. "I am the Princess of Friendship. My friends didn't leave me when I changed. Everypony I know loves me for who I am. If I am that pony reborn, then I'm her done right."

With that declaration made, Twilight turned and grabbed a random book from across the wing. She would not dwell on the past; she had seen what that could do to a pony. Instead, she dove headlong into an elaborate treatise on the movements of leylines, and was soon thinking of a way to run a city-wide energy grid based off the leys. In the dust behind her, the tale of her ancestor sat, and when Twilight idly flapped her wings about an hour later, it crumbled into dust.

Author's Note:

So, funny story. This actually didn't start out as an elaborate parallel to the whole Twilicorn hate scandal. I set out to theorize that stars are the source of unicorn magic, that an abundance of star-themed cutie marks made the ponies of another world believe their world was ending, imply the world ended because all the ponies left, and then prophesy that all the star-themed cutie marks we've seen in the show are indicative of especially powerful mages and this might be the final days of Equus.

I don't know about you, but I think this version is better. Feel free to disagree, hate on it, or just give constructive criticism in the comments below.

Comments ( 58 )

Like an idiot, I forgot to mark this as complete.

Originally when I read the title I thought this would include Nightmare Moon's escape or something like that. I was pleasantly surprised to find a short and very entertaining story that made me think. Aside from being a bit confusing I have nothing but love for this story, keep up the good work!

A nice tale. I like the way you ended it too, much better than the original version you described in my humble opinion. :pinkiehappy:

The Twilicorn thing actually didn't even come to mind till I saw it in the note.

I really like it are you going to maybe make a sequel to this story maybe have it where it started where celestia saw twilight reading the book and is thinking about weather or she should talk about it mare with twilight???

Now I want to know why the ponies fled and how reincarnation works in this universe. Did the first "Twilight" become good friends (unlikely since they fled) with many ponies or did her magical potential increase to the point where how the universe works forced her to ascend. With how this story ties ponies into world health, would it also mean they are tied into the universe itself with how connected they are to magic?

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Let's see if I have any answers for you.

I'm not sure how closely the previous iteration of Twilight Sparkle matches the one we know, but she definitely had what she thought were good friendships. I don't know if there was a supreme authority that triggered her transformation, but I've always held that the way to become an alicorn is, as Celestia said, to do something nopony else was capable of. It's like a college thesis, except it turns you into a god if you do it right.

No sweet clue how reincarnation works. My best explanation is the broad statement "time is circular". History repeats until it happens the way it should. Or something.

And now, for why the ponies fled. They were afraid of that Twilicorn, afraid of what she might do, what her ascension would mean for their world. Think back to our real-world Twilicorn hate scandal, and remember all the debates and questions it raised. Now, instead of bronies believing their show is ruined forever, imagine ponies believing the natural order of their universe has been defiled. I'm sure we've all read hatefics where the Mane 5 suddenly ostracized Twilight simply because of her ascension. It's heartless, yes, and the ghosts of these forerunner ponies are probably the hate-breeding windigos.

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Hate to disappoint, but there probably won't be a sequel.

6290145 oh okay thank you for letting me know

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I didn't much like Twilicorn at first, not because she got wings, but because of how lackluster it seemed. I really would have liked more struggle but it is a show for kids. I also feel it killed any ideas fans had for Twilight becoming an alicorn and might have squashed caused a couple stories to get canceled.

I guess the ponies fled, possibly cause of a history of issues with alicorns; maybe somehow having killed off the few in the past. Also, how big of a spacecraft we talking? Cause if they moved a whole city, that is a massive craft. They also regressed technologically pretty far.

6291974 The 'spacecraft' is little more than a massive metal sphere with a few decks inside, enough for however many ponies you need to keep a species from dying out. Probably two cities' worth. The rest of the population was dead from every cause you can think of, except killer robots. Those didn't happen.

Technological regression mostly came from not bothering to bring high-tech on the exodus, and most ponies not knowing how it worked. Magic became more fashionable quite early on.

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So, all the others died out before Ancient Twilight came to be? I guess that could make them more fearful if legends somehow hinted at alicorns being the bane of their race.

6292312 Sure, we'll go with that.

Scientists have calculated that if the human population drops below 5,000, humanity would die of inbreeding. So let's go with at least 5,000 ponies. It would be even better to have 5,000 of each race.

Earth, crystal, pegasus, unicorn, you mentioned hippocampi, and possibly more?
At 5,000 a race, that would be at least 25,000. Large space ship, but not inconceivable, especially for a species that had both magic and tech that borders on magic. A few space saving tricks for the ship: Sphere shape was a good choice as spheres have efficient surface-area/volume ratios. If they hot bunked -- multiple ponies sleeping in the same bed but in shifts throughout the 'day' -- you would only need beds for 1/3 of the population at any time.

6295688 Thanks for the science. I definitely thought of the unicorns living in shifts, but I hadn't considered how that might apply to others. Thanks for having a thinky-science-brain.

Very interesting, although the length made it feel awkward: Was I supposed to be reading a multichapter epic as the style and plot implied or a simple tale with a moral? This story seemed to try to do both which, isn't a bad thing.

The amount of genre tags is also very confusing since I felt it could do with just Tragedy, Adventure, and Alternate Universe.

I would like to see this expanded upon. Especially the "Reincarnation of Purple Alicorn"(The story never seemed to say wheather she was or was not a reincarnation.) and to why she was forsaken.

6296420 Here is a breakdown of how such a ship might be crewed:

Three shifts of unicorns working around the clock to move the ship.
Three shifts of earth ponies working in the horticulture labs to provide both food and oxygen
Six teams of pegasai, three working on maintaining ventilation and environmental control, three working with the unicorns on navigation
Three shifts of crystal ponies maintaining the artificial gravity core and power systems
Three shifts of sea ponies maintaining the water systems

If breezies count as ponies, they may have been responsible for keeping the electrical systems running given that they can fit in small places
If Changelings count, they probably had janitorial and sanitation duties. Hivemind means that they would not get bored

With time being cyclical to try for a new Twilicorn, Discord and the Princesses may have been born specifically to prepare ponykind for Twilight's return. Discord was made as a threat too powerful for the ponies to fight, and the Princesses were made to defeat him and make the ponies look up to alicorns. Cadence was there to nurture Twilight and push her along the right path.

6296676 Note about genre tags duly noted and tweaked.
I might consider expanding on Twilight's preincarnation.

6297049 Breezies have been shown as originating from an alternate universe in the show, and for the purposes of this AU, I decided the changelings were a life-form indigenous to Equus. When the ponies arrived, they evolved to feed on love.

Also, you forgot zebras.

I'll freely admit to not giving much thought for how much of time repeats itself. With the possible exception of Discord, nopony would be aware of their role in the cosmic order, unless Star Swirl made multiple trips and discovered other reincarnations and wrote those down.

6297152 I personally think that the breezies live in an artificially created pocket dimension. They chose to live there because the world is otherwise too big and scary.

6297180 Logistically, it doesn't make much sense for Breezies to evolve in a world where everything can kill them, especially in the pre-pony days where selfish and amoral predators would be the only animals that the Breezies could turn to for help.

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I'll be looking forward to that. :pinkiehappy:

This was absolutely beautifully written

6298298 Thank you, that is so nice of you to say!

VERY good story

Ri2

So...they abandoned their planet just to get away from a single pony? Isn't that a bit extreme?

Ri2

6346530 I mean, that's almost ridiculously extreme. What, was there a prophecy that the appearance of someone like her would end the world?

6346538 Well, as the sequel is slowly elaborating, this version of Twilight ascended by perfecting an immortality spell. Because she's, you know, Twilight Sparkle, assumptions were made that she somehow had foreknowledge of an impending disaster, and some friction came from the idea that she only cared about herself.

As for the prophecy, it's exactly the opposite. The ponies of this world have no frame of reference beyond long-ancient myth for alicorns, so what they're seeing is a god-like being of the sort that shaped the world as they know it through epic battles with other alicorns. Mountains as tombstones, valleys as landing pads, rivers and canyons, etc. What little they know tells them that their friend is now a monster that acts according to its own whims, with so little regard for other species that some myths aren't even sure the alicorns knew of other races.

And yes, this will actually be in the sequel. I just don't like to force people to wait for answers.

Ri2

6346563 Oh.
Wait, G3 was advanced enough to build spaceships?

6346741 It's really just an airtight metal sphere with gardens and sleeping quarters.

6296676 It's not even "alternate universe" any more than any other fanfic. I mean Twilight Sparkle is no different than usual, and all the new stuff is set in canonically undocumented prehistory.

6375500 You really think it doesn't need to be labelled AU? I've always been a little uncertain about what qualifies something as AU.

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For a ship powered by Unicorn telekinesis and levitation spells or possibly pegasus levitation, mass and or size isn't really a problem. Also, while a sphere is the optimal shape mathematically, it's a bugger to construct. Give me a cube, or an square tower (gravity and thrust along the long axis).

Still given your estimate of a population of 25000, we can come to some estimate of how much volume this hypothetical PonyArk (TM) require.

Personal quarters, say 9m^3 per pony (2x3x1.5m). Enough for a bunk and personal effects. Times 25000 ponies = 225000 m^3. Hot bunking reduces this to 75000 m^3. Though we need to allow for toilet facilities, corridors and common spaces, so say another 35000 m, giving a total of 125000 m^3, A cube 50 m on each side, or a sphere of 31 m radius, surprisingly enough.

Food to feed them all, water, life support in general. Each pony needs 1kg food and 3l water per day (equivalent to human norms). Assume total life support system mass is fifty times that (soil from ground based farming rather than hydro/aeroponics) since Earth ponies. 4kg x 25000 x 50 = 5 million kg mass = 5000 tons, an additional 5000 m^3 volume. But we need access spaces, especially if it is also recreational. Assuming 10 times the open space as solid material gives 50000 m^3. And that doesn't include the Expresso machine...

"[A] magnificent machine that poured forth a drink so potent that those who drank of it seemed to almost explode with energy."

This may not do for the bulk of the air-recycling, as assumng a human equivalent norm of 50 l per hour and a plant output of 5 ml per hour per 10 cm^2 leaf, we need 10000 leaves per pony = 100000 cm^2 = 10 m^2. For 25000 ponies that is 250000 m^2. Even assuming the food plants from above are laid out in effective 10 cm deep trays, that still only gives a surface area of 50000 m^2, only one fifth of the required area. Bump the life support volume by a factor of 5 to 250000 m^3 assuming the same volume of access space. Well, at least they won't starve, and it allows plants other than vital foodstuffs to be grown, such as coffee beans for the expresso machine.

So we need twice the volume for life support as living quarters or 750000 m^3 in total. Make it 1000000 m^3 to allow additional room for growth and machinery spaces (even with ponies providing the major functions you still need things like plumbing, lighting and so forth). Not to mention a bridge and other ship functions, even if the engine room is a group of unicorns sitting in a ritual diagram around a giant glowing crystal.

The total size of the ship is therefore a sphere 62 m in radius. A cube 100 m a side would work too.

Gross tonnage, lets assume the same density as a big luxury cruise liner rather than a warship. The 'Oasis of the Seas' is 225282 tons gross tonnage and roughly 360 x 50 x 80 m volume or 1440000 m^3 (over half as big again as PonyArk, but that has engines and all sorts of machinery in it as well as being a less optimal shape. Plus it does carry a maximum of over 8500 passengers and crew, over a third as many beings and those are larger humans. Double plus, it has a much larger proportion of it's internal volume given over to recreational spaces). That gives a density of 0.1564 kg/m^3. So the Gross Tonnage of PonyArk would be around 156000 tons.

Assuming the unicorn portion of the population is 5000, there are still going to be ones who aren't suited for heavy lifting, foals and such. Based on the three shift rota, you'd have maybe 1500 unicorns driving the ship at any one time. Which means each unicorn must be pushing around 100 tons of mass.

If they were dead lifting it against Earth equivalent gravity, I can't see many of them being able to do that much unaided, even if all three shifts were working together for the launch phase, bringing the thrust needed down to just over 30 tons per unicorn. However, any sane designer would add levitation runes like the ones that allow a flying chariot to fly (presumably by sharing the pegasus flight magic), tapping the power of the pegasus portion of the crew. Maybe using pegasus stabilised clouds as support elements at lower altitudes. Or ice crystal arrays pre-charged with massive amounts of pegasus magic to act as a levitation booster at the start.

They would exhaust themselves in a few hours, but that would give the unicorns time to build up enough speed to escape the planet. Say each pony can only provide three tons of thrust, giving only 1m/s rather then the 10 m/s needed for a dead lift. If The pegasus power can stop the ship falling back to the planet for 2 hours, that translates to 7200 m/s, or roughtly orbital speed. At that point you can take things as slow as you like, as you will never fall back to the planet, at least if you are on the correct vector. Okay, you still need to make another thrust at periapse to circularise your orbit, but that is far less time dependent.

There are dozens of elements I haven't talked about, such as losses in the recycling system (made up by mining passing Oort cloud bodies?) or landing the beast (areobraking with a unicorn based force shield followed by deploying really big pegasus stabilised cloud to provide support as the ship is lowered. Or possibly just wrapping the entire ship in a force shield and pegasus based inertia neutralisation and imitating a meteorite, i.e lithobraking, the favoured method of Kerbals everywhere.)

Then there's power for the lights and heating, a Star Heart reactor? (my own headcanon, a magically confined cool fusion reactor, using magic to increase the strong nuclear force so fusion occurs at lower temperatures, a force field to contain the plasma, and an atonic photo-thaumic conversion field (based on inverting a light spell, it converts all light frequencies to magical energy, including gamma and X-Rays). Fresh hydrogen is teleported in and helium teleported out.

But this gives some idea of the scope of the project.

I do think it works better in its present incarnation that it would have in the style of the first draft that you describe in the author's note. There are some questions; were Zebras part of the interplanetary exodus as well? If not, wouldn't they be the exception to Starswirl's commentary on how the ponies are self-evidently alien because they aren't monsters? Questions remain.

Still, a cool little idea piece whose strength is in its imagery. Thank you for sharing.

Also, have to point out: "bated breath," as in withdrawn and held in, not "baited" like a hook.

6524983 Correction duly noted. Yes, zebras were part of the interplanetary voyage.

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Interesting! Not Griffons though, I assume?

6526002 No. Griffons, changelings and the various non-equines are natives to this planet.

Basically, if the majority population doesn't espouse the magic of friendship, it's from this planet.

6291093 Okay, have no idea if you're aware, but I have written the first few chapters to a sequel. Plans changed.

6559903 yea I am awear of that infact I'm waitting for the next chapter it is really sad that her friends are all leaving her

6560083 Oh, it's about to get much worse.

Up next, the Exodus begins.

Disclaimer: I have no idea when. Hopefully sometime next week.

6560172 okay good to know thank u for letting me know

6295688 I feel like I should point out that the tech Starswirl was gushing over was a telescope, a tv, and a coffee machine. Also, unless I'm reading it wrong, they built a ball, got inside, and played hookshot with the stars. Not that it makes any of this less impressive, of course (do you know how a tv works? I don't. I'm sure it's all very complicated though), but it wasn't exactly futuristic. They seemed to be at about our level of technology, just with the added bonus of magic.

6607245 Nope, you didn't read it wrong.

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I wish you'd been a little more time-appropriate with the tone of Star Swirl's work. It felt like a bold ejaculation of some (admittedly very interesting) headcanon, with Twilight commenting on it now and then. Not bad, but not as immersive as I'd have liked.

6649914 Though I'm ashamed to admit it, this fic wasn't really meant to be immersive. It was meant to be spur-of-the-moment regurgitation of headcanon, and to make matters worse, the story mutated and went down an entirely unexpected path. The only reason it's not a blog post is that I was completely unknown at the time I wrote it.

Still, criticism appreciated, and I'll keep it in mind if I ever do this sort of thing again.

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6650044
It's certainly not the worst headcanon dump I've ever read, but it definitely comes off as one. Good luck in the future. :D

6650058 Oh, one question:

What in the name of Celestia's magnificent beard is the [Author Interviewer] doing here?

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Readin' pone fics. :B

6650344 Walked right into that one, didn't I.

Well, you have a good day.

It's as if nobody notices that it's crap.

Like, seriously, this is shit. Utter shit.

7102716 7108552 Aww...I was just about to add this and its sequel to the 'read later' list the other night...and then I read your comments, as well as "The Author is Honest with the Readers" and so I didn't. :/ You must have a way of writing tantalizing descriptions. Silly you >.<
Though I would almost like to read just to see for myself why you consider them bad...

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