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Yukito


Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )

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The Great and Powerful Trixie has always had one goal: To be recognised as the great and powerful magician that she is. Especially by one particular Unicorn.

But one day, Trixie loses all of her memories, and is found injured by Fluttershy. Twilight decides to help Trixie on her road to recovery, and thus Trixie's new life in Ponyville begins.

There is a lot to teach Trixie, but with the friendship of Twilight and the rest of Ponyville, the road to recovery should be a happy one...At least, that's the hope.

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 193 )

Sounds like it could be interesting :twilightsmile:

Well, this story certainly has potential. Not bad so far. I'm not sure about suddenly having the behavior of a foal as an effect of amnesia, but I havn't studied it. I'm interested.

This story is so far, one of the most fun and original pieces of fanfic I have ever read :D
It's positively magnificent! I :heart: this!
Please make many new chapters, I'll be following this fic all the way till the end :pinkiehappy:
Hooray for foal :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

I had an Idea simular to this, however Trixie just forgot who she and everypony else was, she then wonderd into ponyvile one night and Twilight desided to take care of her. She wasn't mentaly a foal.

There's a typo on the description... Other than that, this looks promising!

Pretty good, confused how she managed not to have any serious physical injuries froma fucking cliff fall
but I won't question it

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Well she wound up in a stream, so the general assumption is supposed to be that she fell into some deep water at the bottom of the cliff, and was washed away. Or maybe she uncionciously used whatever magic she had left to protect herself. Take your pick.

Thoroughly enjoyable first chapter! I haven't really read anything like this here before, so, in contrast to alot of the other works here, this feels very fresh. Favourited of course, and I'm eagerly waiting to see where you go from here, since this has all the potential to be a terrific story. Good job thus far!

632327 water is hard as concrete from that high up, but you know what, it's okay, because magical ponies

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Orly? I didn't know that. But if you say so :3 Yeah, I'll just go with the "magic, I don't need to explain!" explanation.

632374 lol, fair enough, it works
not many people know that actually, but i'm from the san francisco area and the bridge wouldn't work so well for suicide if it wasn't that way

Oooh, this is great. Looking forward to more! :twilightsmile:

This actually looks very promising. Will now be tracking. :twilightsmile:

interestingly enough blunt force trauma to the head is the least likely method of inducing Trxie's degree of amnesia its more likely caused by the trauma of being in so many near death situations in rapid succession could induce it though if I remember right I could be wrong however its been a while since I read about it... anyways very nice story so far looks like it will be a fun one to read.

Wow. Trixie's father is a giant douche. I'd really like to see him get what's coming to him, but it probably won't happen. Other then that, I'm enjoying this so far.

Beat by Twilight at everything... just call her ugly, cuz she is ugly! :twilightoops:
Why do I hate Twilight so much?! I think she's too much of a smartie pants try-hard, and I know that I could never be that good... cuz I don't try that HAAAAAAAAAAARD. OH WAAAAAAAAAIT, TWILIGHT HAD THE ADVANTAGE OF A LUCKY magical overload to become Celestia's Protege!


THIS STORY IS NIIIIIIIIICE!

D'awwwh! <3
Now I have a different view of Trixie--
As I'm reading this I'm imagining her as a little filly,
and I'm imagining Twilight as her mother :3 :heart:
Adorable!! Can't wait to read more :3 :yay:

NEXT CHAPTER WHY YOU NO HERE YET:flutterrage:
This is pretty funny, but why does she revert to a foal? I don't think amnesia can do that, can it?:derpyderp2:

Beautiful Chapter :trixieshiftright: Keep it up!!!!!!

Oh man, I've been waiting for this <3 I love the story so far :pinkiehappy:

Blargh. i sense a depressing drop in quality from the first chapter to this one. I love the story, though.

Could of done without the hostage situation(since when do the ponies do business with the Diamond Dogs) but that aside nice chapter.

This was soooooo GOOD:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:
Trixie's first words being Twilight: ALL OF MY D'AAAAAWWWWWWW AND HHHHHHHHNNNNNNGGGGGGGG :heart::heart::heart:
This fic is going in my "Best Fanfics In Existence" map :pinkiehappy:

Oh wow this was amazing!:pinkiehappy: didnt quite understand that last part though...

699836 if your talking about the thing under twilights letter
it's a fragment of her memory

Yeesh. Trixie's father is a royal jerk. No wonder she was such a pain when she first came to Ponyville.

I've never wanted to injure a pony so badly before now.

I think this deserves the right to the [Sad] tag...

Love it. MORE TRIXIE, PLEASE.

About the A/N: First I was like :pinkiesad2: then i was like :pinkiehappy: but then I was like :pinkiesad2: again but then when you said you were going to do another fic i was like :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Yeah, sorry if you wanted it to go on a bit longer. But like I said, I'm just not enjoying it that much, and I don't wanna spend time working on something if I don't enjoy it. Or it'll just not turn out so well, and I'd probably leave it half-finished.

It's a shame, cause I really love Twixie fics, and was hoping to do a Twixie slice of life one day. But after this, I'm not sure it'd turn out so well. One-shots maybe, but definatly not any longer stories.

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Meh. I'm just overly obsessed with Trixie

A very good chapter :pinkiehappy:
I assume that the foal Trixie is now gone for good, seeing as Trixie has regained a good portion of her memories and social abilities? i'll miss the cute and innocent Trixie :fluttercry:
Poor Trixie, so much pain... no pony deserves this :fluttercry:

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No, but these are magical horses. I'm not going to question it too much.

TRIX'S DAD WILL SUFFER THE WRATH OF THE MOTHERLAND :flutterrage:

THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT. @.@ Looking forward to more!

Wow, never thought I would feel sorry for Trixie of all ponies, but this story makes me feel...:fluttershysad:.

The amnesia angle is a little overdone in stories but it does make for effective drama. What I'm speculating for future parts is that Trixie eventually remembers everything and reverts back to her old persona, grudges against Twilight and all. This will really test just how much Twilight is willing to go through to keep friendship alive.

You've caught my interests so keep at it!

Is he going to kill her?

Urge to kill Black Cat... rising :twilightangry2::flutterrage:
Either way, a very interesting chapter chap!

If that bastard so much as touches trixie imma kill his whole damn FAMILY!!! Wait...:derpyderp2:

Shame on you Yukito! Fancypants is happily married!:twilightangry2:

I have to wonder when and how Trixie will get her memory back. You know she will.:trixieshiftleft:
I also wonder how much Trixie will remember about her time with Twilight.
Time will tell.:twilightsmile:

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