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A wise woman once said, " Fuck this shit." And she lived happily ever after
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i don't particularly like the subject material but it was well written and it was exactly what the description said it would be so i did my part to fix the like bar. one thing that bothers me about it is that last line and unless i misunderstood, scootaloo was the first of the CMC to go into heat?
Well.... this was an interesting pairing. I dislike Foalcon and almost thought this was going to be one of those stories.I appreciate how you drew it away from that by maturing Scootaloo beyond that of a child.
Then things got dark.... really freeken dark... Fuck yeah...
6136432 thank you!!
Just wait till the critics get ahold of this one
6135638 yes.. She was the first, and came in much much earlier than usual. Which somehow seems typical for Scootaloo
Where's the scene where Robert De Niro mows down a bunch of bad guns with a machine gun?
6136562 that is the next story . I love / lust Robert De Niro
6136564 You get the joke though right?
6136575 ok no
My main criticism with this was that it went from happy and cheery lemonade to the savage sex with little in the way of transition aside from Scootaloo admitting that she has no real idea what's going on with her body and sending Mac into an enraged frenzy.
If maybe Mac had gone with offering to explain it to her, with a demonstration, then lose control with lust instead of anger, it would have been less jarring.
6136592 hmmm.. Very interesting. But in rape is it ever really a pleasant transition?
I do appreciate your feedback, thank you, thank u very very much.
6136589 Heat was a 1995 movie starring Al Pacino and Robert De Niro about an FBI agent who is trying to stop a group of dangerous bank robbers.
6136605 yes!! Yes I remember now!! Yes!! J love Al Pacino too. Which was the one where he says "say hello to my little friend." And start spraying.
Scar face?
Yes those two are.fine, fine men.
I just can't believe ANYONE could DOWNVOTE this! This story is a masterpiece!!
6136600
Not pleasant in terms of mood, but in the sense of the flow of the story. Just makes it a touch less jarring to the reader, or at least in my opinion.
6136699 I will definitely keep that it mind!! Thank you!!!
6136629 its because some people dislike rape and sex, but why even ccome here anyway!
This certainly was your best story yet!
6136744 thank you!! I know.. I don't get it, it's cleaky marked, I even put "raw, brutal rape" and.. Whatever. Lol
6136752 and its clearly marked dark and sex.
WTF PEOPLE!
Not bad but not what i'd consider raw, brutal rape.
6137953 honestly,me neither. But I dod want people downvoting it on the premise that it's a rape fic when it's CLEARLY MARKED. I changed it. It's still going to hated.
No
the ending though
6139850 actually that was my editors suggestion, I can't take credit for that. Tee hee
You're doing it AGAIN. You're spamming your story in multiple groups, some of which it doesn't even belong in. The Deleted and Blocked Club is supposed to be a reservoir of stories with comment graveyards inflicted by authors with horrendous attitudes towards criticism. This ain't that. I also don't think BikerPon3 appreciates you volunteering it for his bookshelf, and I don't even know what Booty Lovers Anonymous IS.
Seriously. Stop.
6140428 I'm starting to think you don't like me. Did you like the story at least?
6141006 Your fic-whoring and past behavior haven't exactly endeared you to me.
wow. That hurts. I've been called many things but never a fic whore.
Have a nice day.
Sorry I made a mistakE.
You don't have to be such a meanie.
6136449 you're a sweetheart
Awesome fic. Keep up the good work
6141006
6140428 is indeed correct, here. I'm giving you a dislike just for crying wolf. Shame.
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6141288 Crying WOLF?! You know...Ive been here THREE months. IM SORRY I don't know ALL the rules. Some of you people and your hostility is unbelievable. Its just a fucking story. Take it out, then, if you hate it so much. And to dislike it just because its in the wrong place...is REALLY a mature thing to do.
You people and your precious groups are so anal toward anyone making a mistake and 'tainting" your group.
HOnestly what harm did it cause to be there?
Ive removed it from those groups, so WHY are we still talking about it?
Give me a list of groups you want it removed from and I WILL REMOVE IT promptly. I wouldn't want anyone's underwear to be in a twist, and I certainly wouldn't want your group to be damaged because of something I wrote. Have a nice day.
Shame on YOU for being such a jerk.
6141253 thank you!
6141309
This apparently isn't your first time doing it though.
That said, you have a point. I'll retract my dislike since you're new, but please in the future read a group's rules before just dropping it in a folder, cool?
Also, welcome to Fimfiction.
6141325 yes I have pissed off a few people...because I put a story in the wrong GROUP. You'd think I assimilated the president!
Its nice to see that mistakes are so forgiven.
6141288 Of COURSE that's a meme already.
Well, this got retarded fast.
6141344
I readily forgive when the lesson is learned from the mistake.
Yeah, us fimfic folks can get a little finnicky. There's a certain order of rules in interacting with the community- some more obvious than others- and when something/one strays from that, we get a little jumpy. Best way to learn the ropes is just to interact with people.
6141353
Oh, malisciously.
>>K9Groomer
Your fic is great. And your a great writer so dont take shit from people who bitch at you. Almost every story gets haters and so dont let this affect you. You did great
6141553 have a great day
6141676
Where I'm at it's evening, but I appreciate the thought. You too.
this story feels like the first act of every "Lifetime original movie" ever
6162978 lol
Gotta say the story proved to be interesting crazy but mainly interesting gets a like for its creativity in my opinion
Could you possibly do a version where Mac impregnates scoots?
The story's already pretty dark so I wouldn't think that would be a problem.