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A wise woman once said, " Fuck this shit." And she lived happily ever after

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Hm... approved. This is some hot stuff.

Well..since sexting isn't an option...:moustache:
Well done

Now for the clothespins. She had seen these all the time at Rarity’s house but never knew they were for this!

Though Rarity probably uses them primarily to put clothes on a line up to dry. Consider her main profession and hobby.

My Rarity's fairly kinky and might use them the other way too.

RARITY: Spikey-Wikey ... will you be a dear and help me with these?

SPIKE: Sure thing, Rarity ... what would you like me to hang on the line?

RARITY: Line?

SPIKE: Oh, yeah ... :moustache:

Babs has obviously found some fairly-interesting store. There really is such a store in our world's Manhattan, and it existed long before any of the others: the Pink Pussycat Boutique. It existed as early as the 1980's.

I've noticed that your editing is getting better, too. Well done! :twilightsmile:

But how did you write this and have it not contain rape? Also good story :)

6648643 thank you! I take all your guys' criticisms to heart

I'll give this a read in a few hours.

Why is this featured in The Coltcuddlers group smut folder? :rainbowhuh:

6650217 very good question. It's out now. I'm sorry.. Why would I put it in that group?

I'm curious how babs learned all this stuff... *nudge* *nudge* 'hint' 'hint'

Is there gonna be a sequel to this where Babs Seed comes over to secretly give Scootaloo pleasure in person? Maybe have Babs kiss Scootaloo in secret before the event in the sequel.

6650789 Maybe a good idea.

6650907 Do you think you'll get to that?

This was good. Some minor errors here and there, but for the most part, well done!

If you don't write more to this, I will send you a very angrily worded letter!
Er, wait. Considering the subject of this story, a letter may be the wrong thing to send...
Meh, whatever. Just write more!

6651327 thank you sweetie.

6652294 I'm not Sweetie, I'm MysticGuitar! :rainbowlaugh:
(or Rainbow Dash, depending on who you ask)

6661191 No, seriously. The similarities are scary. Like, we're nearly identical in every way. It's so bad, that people constantly think I'm role playing as her. And I'm not just talking fimfiction, but people from random video games, namely Team Fortress 2.)(which has a big brony user base)


It's freaky...

I Like This It Was Good :heart: Fav

Question: why are there 4 clothespins? Horses only have 2 nipples, just like humans. They're not cows. Or dogs.

8064928 I don't know. Lol
Honestly...I don't know. Thank you for the insight.

I will change it!:scootangel:

8065577
You haven’t changed it yet.

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