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The tale of a long forgotten being who returns to an ancient, familiar world in the form of a young man. As his journey takes him across vast landscapes, he discovers more about the nature of his new reality; more than any thinking creature could hope to know.
Note: This story is currently in hiatus and undergoing some serious revisions.
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Most interesting. Keep on writing this, it intrigues me so.
THIS IS AMAZING!
I demand MOARRR! 
Dawww and amazing.
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Lets see where this goes
i hS teh sudden urge 4 bacon...
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Lets see how it plays out.
You have my attention. Well played pulling out Lyra first!
Build a small house? How 'bout a mansion?
I'm liking this. I'll track this. Good job!
693334 actual shit house XD
And this fic is awesome, and was he in the fallout universe?
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Interesting, but you have to stop mixing up past and present tense. Your story is mostly in the past tense, so you should stick to it.
Intriguing.
To say the least.
I shall see where this goes.
Very interesting so far, although the switching between past and present is rather jarring.
Really interesting story i must say, keep it up!
I see that you used the mod Exclusion Zone on Fallout New Vegas Nexus. Give credit where its due. Unless your the creator, then im sorry.
774388 Fallout is best pony.
You should probably add a line mentioning how Aiden is aware that the lake's water is not filled with any sort of toxic chemicals like chlorine that would keep the water clear by killing any algae, etc. that tried to grow in it. Probably by noticing that the tree next to it is perfectly healthy and grass grows all the way up to the edge or something.
yay
...Guitars are more like cellos than lyres.
No guns? but guns are like kittens and barbecue sauce, they make EVERYTHING better
first!!!!
Gratz on the feature.
PUNCH THE TREES! That was the best used minecrft reference
It actually reminded him of some early 21st century sci-fi film “Who was the main character? Roderick? Raddock?” He shook his head. “Focus, damn you, Aiden!”
Are you by chance referring to The Chronicles of Riddick (and Pitch Black, for that matter)?
Nooooooooooo! Lyra!
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First chapter he possibly hinted at Pitch Black and the Chronicles of Riddick, and now Minecraft! Amazing!
I would've just yelled, "FUS RO DAH" and see if it had any effect. No telling how OP you'd be in Equestria.
Huzzah. I love this story.
What's the game? It sounds awesome.
Not bad, I like how main characters we're used to are still children. Keep writing.
837449 You have a point and that's something I have also wondered.
Also, I think a small amount of shit just hit the fan.
Plz make more faster plz,this fiction is so amazon
Hero Tip number #1750: Never let a bandit leave your sight without them being unconscious or dead. This goes doubly if a large percentage of the current population are magic users who know telekinesis or a similar movement restriction spell, and you cannot dispel the magic or fight back without moving. Triply if the bandit whom you fought off was such a magic user. That said, if you can dispel the magic or fight back with some of your own without moving, feel free to set them on fire, empty the power of a storm cloud into them, or send an ice spike through their skull. Or all three. Or whatever kind of magic you use. Also, if you are 100% immune to holding spells, just laugh in their face when their telekinesis doesn't work, and then either stab them through the skull or blow their brains out with your firearm of choice.
guess who approves this chapter.....
me!
Awsome chapter, can't wait for the next one.
I'm liking this. Also first meeting with the princess is not exactly under the circumstances that he hoped for.
god dammit
Holy crap, those are some pussy ass bitches, those thief's. I woulda shot em'
are u referenceing minecraft if so then may celestia have mercy on ur soul
wen u metioned the lyre i thought it was goin to be lyra
go lyra that was a bold move
A Minecraft reference and then a few paragraphs being based off it? -the whole make an axe then the using of it thing- YES!
He was from the Fallout Mojave correct? If so, that makes two out of my top 3 games referenced. All it needs is some Skyrim.
If Lyra is a filly, does that mean the remainder of the shows characters are fillies and therefore Twilight is still in Canterlot?
Enjoyed reading the entire story very much. Can't wait for the next installment.
I gotta say, it's really neat seeing possible explanations for why everything turned out the way they it in modern day Equestria.
E.g. Shining Armour being appointed as 'temporary' Captain.
Now I just have to wait until Lyra has Octavia meet with Aiden. Believe me, it's only a matter of time...
Also, FIRST!
i am very much pleased with the story.
this is SIR status, my friend
>that cover pic
Hm... I was expecting the guys who attacked Lyra to get some poetic justice... But otherwise the chapter was good.
Your Cover was what caught my attention. Reminded me of "Gone with the Blastwave".
Marble cake? I beleive that was a typo good sir, you obviously meant chocolate. Also, this reminds me of a story called the "Son of Eternity"
Hmm, this is an interesting take. Somewhat reminscent of Fallout as well. Something you may want to consider is sticking to one tense. You tend to jump between past and present often, and it can get confusing. I do like the way you're setting up these events to coincide with the canon in the show, it's a nice little feature. I'm curious where you will take this.