I'm rewriting this story, essentially. As such, you see a lot less than there actually is. If you're curious about the story, PM me and I'll show you the rest. And even more, if you'd like to help me out, I would so greatly appreciate it.
The Cutie Mark Crusaders have regrouped after a personal hiatus; after about a year. Two out of the three live their lives according to new—and really not the best—kinds of 'philosophies', but the other member, Apple Bloom, remains totally faithful to her friends and her family.
However, her family isn't in the best shape right now: all of the metaphorical glue that held it together is gone now, and the Apple name doesn't have nearly as great of a reputation as it did years ago, before Apple Bloom was even born. But even more so—Apple Jack is missing, and the Crusaders come to find out that she's in deep trouble.
A powerful, psychic force doesn't make Apple Bloom's life easier during this time of confusion, as it begins to stalk her after she witnesses an event that, while she already questions so much about her life as of late, makes her question reality itself. As the Crusaders' group efforts to find the truth about Apple Jack reach higher and higher grounds, so does the threat that the force poses.
It wants something from Apple Bloom, it seems...and it wants whatever justice it so desires. It won't stop.
Personally, I don't like ponies swearing much. It just doesn't fit.
Weird, the CMCs swearing, and talking about sex. Hmm... Very strange fic indeed. I like it! (Please don't turn this into a clop fic. God knows we don't need anymore of those -_-)
606882True, it's not a common concept that most people think of, And yeah, they're only like 3 years older in this story, but they have matured a whole lot, especially Scootaloo.
And AppleBloom is about to.
606938I feel you, bro (or girl, I dunno)
Let's just say that fillies who will be handling guns and grenades and a whole bunch of whatisthisidonteven stuff are going to have to have been places in life.
606991 Well, if you compare them to the average grade and/or middle schooler, they'd be saying fuck every other word.
You got me there, but I'll be sure to keep it at least bearable; if not tuned down. I don't want to ruin it for everyone by doing such.
Great so far! Can't wait to hear more, keep it up! The only bad thing's I picked up on were a few missing letters, you might want to go back and add them in.
:607057 I'm a middle schooler and proud!
607200Letters? You mean like misspelled words?
Darn you author, using the same cover image as Equestria Total War made me think it finally updated. But NNNNNNNOOOOOOPE
608170Another story I've yet to read. Thanks.
608190
Yeah that's the unfortunate situation with the way stories are ordered, it's near impossible to find anything that's 6+ months old.
608222I recommend bookmarking the story at first. You see why.
could you put my oc in?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/ if you want to you can lean about him here
and here
http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/davy-downpour-r432
608616I bookmarked the page on my computer, signifying that I agree to your proposition. I mean, he's smart; the CMC are gonna need a weapons blueprint person (whatever it's called).
He's a guy. Older, but not by too much.
I'll be sure to consider him as a vital part of their operation.
THANKS!!!!
Interesting...
All I have to say- nail guns.
608888OOOHHH!! Liike The Darkness 2 where you can pick up poles and throw them at enemies, impaling them!
Thanks so much for the idea!
Fucking Love F.E.A.R.
608900Ah know ya do!
608899
I always found impaling enemies to the wall/floor funny. Probably because of the way they get stuck.
608932We have a common interest, then. I find it...arousing...
The Hammer head, was a great weapon. Along with the type 12 pulse weapon. and don't forget the FL-3 laser. I had way too much fun with that series.
608996Ooooh, I have plans for the hammerhead. (never used it, as I was stingy with my assault rifle ammo)
OH GOD THE LASER! FUCK, THIS IS GONNA BE SO MUCH FUN TO WRITE!
609008
Being stingy with the assault rifle is always good, but my main weapons were the sub machine gun and the hammerhead. If i ever switched it would be for the laser. Vaporizing people was fun
610603I dunno. I could never get the feel of the laser right. Don't know if I was using it right, either. First time I was going to use it was right before I found that big machine thing, and I'm like "...fuck this, I'm gettin in that thing! RAMBO!!"
The power armors were great, and the laser took alot of practice, mainly because it was a 'sniper' like weapon and hard to use.
611720Oh, okay. I think I get it
ohhh i wonder if my oc gets accepted
Keep your spirits up. I think I have plans for him
yay
Hehe, thanks for the support. Your character's coming up.
634840 awesome cant wait
Part 3 oh yah
640188You laughed your ass off too?
640736
Who didn't LMAO?
654452Apparently, everyone has so far
654552
The plan is going just as expected.......... *laughs evily*
654969~Joins you in maniacal laughter ~
655845
*double maniacal laughter breaks fourth wall, revealing Pinkie Pie*
PP: Awww.... I just fixed that!
656115Wait, you broke it? I'ma have to break something else...>:3
656666
How about we break 42?
656676Huh?
656685
Ya know, 'What is the meaning of life? Hint: it's 42.' Came from Hitch Hiker's Guide to the Galaxy.
656698I actually don't know
656766
Well, let's just get in my spaceship and go see other worlds. You game? Where you wanna go visit first?
656779Can we visit Skype?
656806
Sure. I've never been though; You'll hafta show me around.
656814((Do you even have one?))