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When Sonata Dusk tried to return to her home after the Battle Of The Bands, she ended up in the wrong version of Equestria. However, while she didn't find her home, she found somepony willing to help her.

Ever since then, Sonata has been grateful for Dusk Shine's help. And slowly, her feelings for the prince who gave her so much have become deeper and more meaningful than she could ever have imagined. Thus, when a special day for couples to express their love for each other comes around, she resolves to finally declare her feelings for him.

The answer he gives her, however, may surprise her.


Written for Equestria Daily's Super Happy Hearts and Hooves Lovefest Fanfic Event. Coverart by BerryPunchrules (AKA Tennis Match Fan)

DuskDusk OTP!

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Comments ( 25 )

The cuteness...the feels...:heart:

Ltmajordude stole my reaction. :rainbowkiss:

awww please continue this

5623608 Then you need to steal another one from someone else! :trollestia:

5626043 The cuteness! The feels! :rainbowwild:

“It's been all right,” said Dusk. “I mean, I've been reading The History Of Hearts And Hooves Day like I do every year on Hearts And Hooves Day.”

Oh Dusk.

Elusive is such a good friend to make that plushie for Dusk.

I can't get over that kiss part. It reminds me of a Christian song I can't think of the name right now. But, there is one line in there and the original is "sloppy wet kiss" and the newer version is "unforeseen kiss". If you get enough Christians together and ask which is better, you'd get a debate going, with several different opinions. I've seen internet wars over those lyrics. I've joined in just to say it doesn't matter and I'm way off topic.

Anyways, the stories cute. I like it. Now I'm off to see if I can find that song I mentioned.

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Goddammit this was cute and dumb and I'm disappointed you had him secretly like her too, but writing a story just so you can ship "DuskDusk" is perfect and I love it. ._.

Dusk+Dusk
Math Error.
Too cute.
Please reboot.

5774601 Maybe it could be Dusk x Dusk= Dusk²

5775986 I've seen that too, and DoubleDusk :pinkiehappy:

Absolutely adorable... although I think literally any other character ever would be upset with "taco siren" as a pet name.

It would be interesting to read what would happen when Dusk Shine finally found a way to get to her home universe. I doubt she would leave, but there may be some... unfinished talks to have with certain ponies. It would also be nice to know if this is a two dimension switch, with each pair going to the other's world, or a four dimension, with each going to a world that otherwise didn't have a Sonata-equivalent attempting to go through the portal.

Great story, but there's a minor error you may want to edit.

“I thought that since, you know, you're a prince, and the savior of Equestria, everpony would want to go out with you.”

Awesome story:heart:

Whelp, reserve me a bunk, I just signed on for this ship!

Very cute! Sequel?

What if he doesn't like it, though? What if he thinks it's a dumb gift? Or what if he hates me for thinking... for thinking he'd like me after everything I did?

Damn it if she's not cute as a button when she's worried.

“Not really. I mean, I once asked Flare Warden out, but it didn't work out as well as I thought it would. It kind of sucks, seeing how well her human counterpart and I got along.”

But she's not her human counter-part. What part of that made him think they would?

Dusk's eyes went wide as he saw the object: a blue seapony plush holding a big heart with the words “I Luv U” printed on it.

I. Want. It.

“Oh, Dusky, why would I blame you for what Twilight did to me?”

Exactly.

However, what truly caught her eye was what the plush was holding: a heart-shaped taco with the words “My Taco Siren” printed on it.

Why can't canon Twilight be half that sweet?

That was adorable.

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