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Brony_Headbanger
Metal music, guitars, and model electric trains. Rainbow Dash is best pony!
Brony_Headbanger
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I like this.
to be honest, i expected even Sunset to blush anywhere in this chapter, at least here.
The story is not bad, but till now everything happens more or less rather fast, and even if Fluttershy is the shy one, i somehow see him placed under her in a ranking. I mean he don´t have to be perfect, and it is not really a bad thing, but somehow he seems to be an airhead, or a little idiot. It somehow looks like Sunset would have all the experience, and i guess i thought he would be a little bit more calm about everything, like seeing a girl in a swimsuit, i probably thought he would have seen it already.
Long story short, i can´t exactly say what it is, but he seems to be a little bit pathetic at the moment. It is like he would try to be cool, but at the same time he is like an innocent child, that knows nothing. That maybe sound wrong, but i actually mean with everything that happens aroung him, i guess i thought he would be a little bit more mature, if i can say it like that.
I guess i don´t like it that much that they can manipulate him that easy. At first i thought he would be a more clever and experienced or something like that, but right now i think of him like (male Fluttershy or something like that)
The mature scene is not bad, i just don´t like his personality that much, i am sure about this point.
If he can keep that up that i could like him a little bit more.
nothing bad till now, his personality got better too, at least that is what i think.
I like the story good work, i can´t decide if it is rushed or not, but i don´t care for once.
I started shaking...
*no new chapter....* WHAT!!!!!
I like this. Im a severe weather freak.
You know, I can help you with this. Ive watched that movie multiple times and I do know some places they could go.
I love it sooooo awsome when is the next chap
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Well right now, I'm trying to think how Pinkie and the others are gonna get around that power-line before the tornado gets to them. That will be a tough thing to think aboout. But I'll try to think of what I can come up with. Hopfullly it won't be long. But yeah, I'm glad you enjoyed it btw.
So how many chaps are u going to write
5674544
That's a good question. I'm Not exactly sure.
5674466 Why not break the fourth wall? She always does that.
Can you write a fanfic crossover between predator and my little pony?
5683479
How do I do that?
Sorry to be picky, but this story is unrealistic... There is no way that plane left on time. Ha, anyway. I wouldn't mind seeing an ending!
5700895
Yeah, that was a bit tough to think of. I can edit it though (if my computer isn't a bitch) ya know?
When are you going to update this story?
5792637
I'm working on it now. I finally have an idea for the next chapter, and it might be the last chapter to this story. I'm terribly sorry for the wait.
A Good story, but definitely could've been done better.
I can't really say what could've been added, edited, deleted etc. All I can say is, it was a good story, I liked it. But it definitely could've been a whole lot longer.
-Shy
YES!!!!! Finally!!! thanks for this amazing story.
I likes this so far and can't wait see what happens next.
I loved this chapter it ws sad and sweet.I can't wait to see what happens next.
5798992
No prob bro. Took meh FOREVA! But I finally have it done.
Sorry for yelling, I didn't scare you did I? Don't punish meh!
5796051
Haha, yeah. I was running out of ideas that fast. I wish I could of made it longer too, but all in all, that was all I have. And I have to say, I like the story myself too. I really enjoyed writing it.
5850308 You must be Punished!!!!! Your punishment is no more metal music for 30 seconds!!!!!!!
5850413
But I like Metal. It's my destiny.
5850418 I have a feeling you where listening to it while you were reading your punishment
5850453
I was. I listen to metal all the time while I write.
Luv It!
5850455 Nice
5850486
Metal. Is. Awesome.
5850315 I can understand that. Since I'm a storm chaser, I can understand that when you run out of ideas you just go where your mind goes. But it's also important to ask for help and not just be on your own. #1 rule in storm chasing, NEVER chase alone. You want to have a partner because that person can keep you from making stupid mistakes.
in story writing, you could've asked your readers such as myself for advice and ideas and help you put those ideas into play. When you have more than one person by your side, the more successful the story is going to be. Hope this makes sense to you bud.
Cheers!
5851153
Why didn't I think of that before?
5851527 Self Conciousness
5850455 I listen to metal too. Famous Last Words and all.
hmmm, what kind of magazine me/you dirty bugger you/me.
6367606
LOL, that's a really good one. I just laughed.
I don't know why but this chapter gave me chills... I don't have that big of a fear of tornadoes though.
I love it, great work plus sub, but the jessica part is unrealistic. It's nice, bu the fact sunset saw him with jessica, then decides to steal him, like if she were planning it all along, I have shivers. But hey, that's just a theory, A MLP theory!
He has a plain, bad personality, don't like it. Apart from that, great, and, didn't yawl see this?
"put on the sun scream"
looks like a very painful lotion..
5661306 Eh, ah guess he's ok like that.
Good, but it's not very scary though.
what a shame. Or is it that i'm not scared of bassicaly anything, not even fnaf? Well, I do have insectophobia...
A bit late on the comment here but I can picture what is going on in there heads for I live in tornado ally so this dose seem like a true storm.
I want-I want to get something clear. Okay, I'm not criticizing you, I'm actually really enjoying this story, even though I'm not a brony, I just want to say, based on the title, you know, Tornadoes in Los Angeles. There aren't any tornadoes in Los Angeles in real life. But hey I may be wrong about this story. Also I want to point out the real Los Angeles. Sure it's all fun and beautiful, but in reality, it's a crime filled city with tons of hobos, rich white people, hillbillies, the Bloods and the Crips, LAPD go apeshit if they see a black person, and tons of hipsters too. It's basically every man for himself in Los Angeles. But hey, this is fiction so my guess is that it's gonna be a Utopia right... if only Los Angeles was like that in real life
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You got a point man. I really didn't know if it was called Los Pegasus or Los Angeles when I wrote this. So, I went with what I went with. Because I usually don't enjoy Equestria Girls that much. I like writing stories about it though. Don't ask why. Yeah, I know LA is filled with all the stuff you said. But, I've never been to LA before in my life. So... Yeah. I came up with this from the Mavis "The Day After Tomorrow". I'm really glad how it turned out. But, I feel like I'm now working on a remake of this story. Kinda.
tornados can form anywhere
i knew that remind me of day after tomorrow whats next category 6 and 7 movie
I already been through a f-2 tornado in 2020