to be honest, i expected even Sunset to blush anywhere in this chapter, at least here.
The story is not bad, but till now everything happens more or less rather fast, and even if Fluttershy is the shy one, i somehow see him placed under her in a ranking. I mean he don´t have to be perfect, and it is not really a bad thing, but somehow he seems to be an airhead, or a little idiot. It somehow looks like Sunset would have all the experience, and i guess i thought he would be a little bit more calm about everything, like seeing a girl in a swimsuit, i probably thought he would have seen it already.
Long story short, i can´t exactly say what it is, but he seems to be a little bit pathetic at the moment. It is like he would try to be cool, but at the same time he is like an innocent child, that knows nothing. That maybe sound wrong, but i actually mean with everything that happens aroung him, i guess i thought he would be a little bit more mature, if i can say it like that.
I guess i don´t like it that much that they can manipulate him that easy. At first i thought he would be a more clever and experienced or something like that, but right now i think of him like (male Fluttershy or something like that)
The mature scene is not bad, i just don´t like his personality that much, i am sure about this point.
to be honest, i expected even Sunset to blush anywhere in this chapter, at least here.
The story is not bad, but till now everything happens more or less rather fast, and even if Fluttershy is the shy one, i somehow see him placed under her in a ranking. I mean he don´t have to be perfect, and it is not really a bad thing, but somehow he seems to be an airhead, or a little idiot. It somehow looks like Sunset would have all the experience, and i guess i thought he would be a little bit more calm about everything, like seeing a girl in a swimsuit, i probably thought he would have seen it already.
Long story short, i can´t exactly say what it is, but he seems to be a little bit pathetic at the moment. It is like he would try to be cool, but at the same time he is like an innocent child, that knows nothing. That maybe sound wrong, but i actually mean with everything that happens aroung him, i guess i thought he would be a little bit more mature, if i can say it like that.
I guess i don´t like it that much that they can manipulate him that easy. At first i thought he would be a more clever and experienced or something like that, but right now i think of him like (male Fluttershy or something like that)
The mature scene is not bad, i just don´t like his personality that much, i am sure about this point.
He has a plain, bad personality, don't like it. Apart from that, great, and, didn't yawl see this?
"put on the sun scream"
looks like a very painful lotion..