A Good story, but definitely could've been done better.
I can't really say what could've been added, edited, deleted etc. All I can say is, it was a good story, I liked it. But it definitely could've been a whole lot longer.
Haha, yeah. I was running out of ideas that fast. I wish I could of made it longer too, but all in all, that was all I have. And I have to say, I like the story myself too. I really enjoyed writing it.
5850315 I can understand that. Since I'm a storm chaser, I can understand that when you run out of ideas you just go where your mind goes. But it's also important to ask for help and not just be on your own. #1 rule in storm chasing, NEVER chase alone. You want to have a partner because that person can keep you from making stupid mistakes.
in story writing, you could've asked your readers such as myself for advice and ideas and help you put those ideas into play. When you have more than one person by your side, the more successful the story is going to be. Hope this makes sense to you bud.
A Good story, but definitely could've been done better.
I can't really say what could've been added, edited, deleted etc. All I can say is, it was a good story, I liked it. But it definitely could've been a whole lot longer.
-Shy
YES!!!!! Finally!!! thanks for this amazing story.
5798992
No prob bro. Took meh FOREVA! But I finally have it done.
Sorry for yelling, I didn't scare you did I? Don't punish meh!
5796051
Haha, yeah. I was running out of ideas that fast. I wish I could of made it longer too, but all in all, that was all I have. And I have to say, I like the story myself too. I really enjoyed writing it.
5850308 You must be Punished!!!!! Your punishment is no more metal music for 30 seconds!!!!!!!
5850413
But I like Metal. It's my destiny.
5850418 I have a feeling you where listening to it while you were reading your punishment
5850453
I was. I listen to metal all the time while I write.
Luv It!
5850455 Nice
5850486
Metal. Is. Awesome.
5850315 I can understand that. Since I'm a storm chaser, I can understand that when you run out of ideas you just go where your mind goes. But it's also important to ask for help and not just be on your own. #1 rule in storm chasing, NEVER chase alone. You want to have a partner because that person can keep you from making stupid mistakes.
in story writing, you could've asked your readers such as myself for advice and ideas and help you put those ideas into play. When you have more than one person by your side, the more successful the story is going to be. Hope this makes sense to you bud.
Cheers!
5851153
Why didn't I think of that before?
5851527 Self Conciousness