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I'm sorry about how you're too busy in school to publish 10,000 word stories on a regular basis.
Hi, I'd like to take a moment to give you a critic on this. As a fan of the Titanic, and other ships of that Era, I read this story with a enthusiasm towards the subject. I sadly must say, I was slightly disappointed, it didn't feel real.. The atmosphere was to 2 dimensional an lacked feelings, backgrounds ect wich would have made it feel more real. And somehow the sinking was.. I must say a Lil to undramatic I liked the concept, and the way the plot whent, nice job on that.
As a fellow Titanic enthusiast and an enthusiast of other ships of that era, I have to say this was an interesting read. The plot is good, the writing has some minor mistakes here and there, but can easily be fixed, and the dialogue is great as well. I understand the feeling of having to write stories on a schedule. Plus considering that there aren't any other stories on this site about the Lusitania, yes I checked, I'd say you've done a fine job on this story.
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Yeah. Thanks 4 that though. I was a bit scared on how it would turn out when I hit submit. I was taking a little break from writing stories, then I remembered this and I needed this story to be uploaded by "May 7th." Sorry about that, I didn't mean to be a little rush while I was writing this. Hehe, lol.
Weird. You know that the reason they built Titanic was to rival The Mauritania and the Lusitania.
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Damn. For real?
5959346 yep. Her and the Mauritania.
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Holy shit. I didn't even know that. Usually, they say Titanic was the biggest ship ever before she sank in the deep abyss. And what I think of this... It's really hard to say.
5959641 she was. By a hundred feet.
5959875 Yes. The Olympic-Class vessels were White Star Line's response to Cunard's Lusitania and Mauritania. But they went with size and luxury instead of speed. That is also the reason why Cunard built the Aquitania, as their response to the Olympic-Class.
5960518 unfortunately out of the three Olympic sized ships, only one didn't get sunk.
5960558 Indeed, it is a shame that they met their demise too soon, especially Titanic. But if her disaster never happened, we might not have the safety features we see on ships today.
5960576 Either that or there would have been a bigger shipwreck with a greater loss of lives.
This may be a weird for me in a way but I was a reincarnation of a survivor to the Britannic, which sunk in 55 minutes and I or he witnessed the entire sinking of the ship though it`s still a mystery to what caused the fatal explosion.
The Edmund Fitzgerald next? All the children along the lakes know the sad tale.
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I heard of that ship before. But, not sure if I'll write a story about it though.
Oh that`s OK it was just a suggestion
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Yeah. Haha.
But I might though. I love the Britannic's history a lot. But yeah, if I do write it, I'll see what I have. And we all know that a villain in the ship sunk it. But yeah.
6393681 what about the brittanic
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I'm planning on making a story out of that ship. I remember looking up a ton of things about it when I was young. Luckily, it's 100th anniversary will be in 11 months. I got plenty of time to sort that one out.
6762100 nice
"Eye, sir." It's A-Y-E
Imma bitch slap AJ for putting me on the Lusitania
I don't trust the captain
I have a feeling that the captain is german
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its better than getting put on a filthy white star line ship, at least your on a majestic cunnard liner
Lusitania didn't sink til May 7th 1915
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nor do I