In a darkened forest, a cult attempted to bring the spirit of King Sombra back to life. Their goal; imbue the spirit of King Sombra with far more dark magic than he ever had, and take over Equestria. When Twilight Sparkle intervenes, things go wrong, and something else is summoned. Something that Twilight is familiar with, and hoped to never have to deal with again.
Something that may not be worse than King Sombra taking over Equestria.
Something far, far more obnoxious.
IT NEEDS A SEQUEL!
IT NEEDS MORE DESU!
Rarity seems to be having a relapse of some kind
...that's one powerful filly.
Poor Beatrix...
The greatest and most powerful of nemeses.
Really, Beatrix just needs a good spanking. A little old school parenting tends to stop a brat in her fits.
Nice work!
Edit:
Twilight: That's it. I'm never having kids.
Oh, man...this looks like a job for SUPER NANNY! Super Nanny Pony! *gets on knees* Please write a sequel...I need more of this!!!
...I give it 24 hours before she drives Tirek insane.
'Harbinger of Annoyance'
After reading this, I feel like that's an understatement.
Meh.
Nitpick: near the end, we have this dialog:
It seems like something was cut off here.
That was fun!
I could be wrong, but I think the correct takeaway lesson from this is that if Dash wants to send something to Tartarus, send it to Tartarus.
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and do it without getting banned, and most of the stories are ...controversial
Hello, Beatrix. My name is Steve.
I Hate Trixie so Up vote for u
5548192 10 games of tic tac toe and 40 hours after that befor he whats her dead or says "shut up or i will eat u tiny pony!"
Brilliant and hilarious. As someone who has taken care of kids before, them being bratty like that is a pain. I really enjoyed this fic, and you wrote it very well.
Only mistake I noticed throughout the entire thing is:
You can has review!