After his latest defeat at the hooves of Daring Do, Ahuizotl was determined to get his revenge. However, instead of going after Daring, like he usually does, he decides instead to set his sights on the other one; the mare who helped her foil his plan to bring upon eight hundred years of sweltering heat:
Rainbow Dash
Unfortunately, things don't go exactly as planned when he goes to her home for a surprise ambush.
NOTE: This story has some suggestive material, so discretion is advised. Also, I want to thank Choya for proofreading for me.
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Interesting premise... I'll read and review soon. I don't think I've seen anyone do a fic involving Ahuizotl and anyone else but Daring Do.
I thought it was 800 years of unrelenting, sweltering heat.
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Crap, it is. I just fixed it!
Daaaaaaayum! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WlpBO3L6UJo
Oh wow. Just...wow. Liked, faved, and bought the t-shirt!
And then... they kissed.
Tee hee
Pretty much what I expected
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This whole story...
Silly Ahuizotl! Everyone wants to cumberbatch inside Rainbow Dash!
You're on a roll with these comedy one-shots, dude! Very nice! :)
I laughed so hard, I think I broke a rib. Seriously, hilarious!
Also, I think it's cold showers that are supposed to wipe images of this nature clean, not warm ones.
Wow, seriously funny stuff. Not to mention a very very interesting scenario that includes a villain that Daring Do and Rainbow Dash conquered. I will say that for an evil villain he sure doesn't have a very sinister mind, if I was him I would have just cut the table off its stand and rolled it on out of the house. Of course I would have blind folded her and gagged her so she wouldn't annoy me as I rolled her to my secret lair. Wouldn't that have shocked the crap out of Dash?
It was very fun to read and to see the villain more freaked out and disgusted then their intended target. Usually the villain is more devious and dirty minded then their victims. I almost felt sorry for dash getting tied up and left there, it also made me wonder if she was ever going to get this whole ordeal out of her head after having to be rescued by one of her friends. Hhhmmmmmm I could see many different scenarios playing out, but.....heh......let's not go there shall we? I do have to ask........what is going through Rainbows mind after she reflects on the events of that night?
I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Can't to see if they are as great as this one!
Ok that was funny, next do another one where he tries to take on Daring and he keeps getting mental images of rainbow. Lol
This is utterly magnificent.
A unique scenario, and very, very hilarious. As well as kinky.
Woo, I'm view #1,000. Congrats!
This was awesome. You made this the perfect length, just enough imagery, and not too much brain bleach fuel.
XD!!! OK, at first I thought this would be similar to the ransom of red chief where Rainbow is such a headache that he begs Daring to take her away. This however was FAR better.
While this was kind of amusing, it was missing something... I don't know what, though.