Sweetie Belle's friends have been tired of Button's and Sweetie's relationship. And that was because there WAS no relationship. Will they go to drastic measures to get them together?
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I like your idea of 'special styles'. It may not be original (idk, first I've heard of it) but it is rather cool. Clichéd as the plot may be, I like it. You have nicely segmented chapters, little errors and good pacing. The dialog is a bit dry in some instances, and Celestia once again reinforces the existence of military technology in Equestria (ish) with her "tank you" amid other minor vanished letters.
Sorry about this comment it's 00:54 AM and I've stayed up past midnight for over a week in a row. I ramble at this hour. Keep up the good work when you will.
I agree with vinyl_swag.
There are errors and such, but this story interests me a bit and I really want to see what happens next!
Special Mark Crusaders Cave Explorers! Yay!"
Hmm the SMC... I like it, has a nice ring to it.
Not to discourage you.. but I could write a book out of the spelling and grammatical errors. Could I suggest looking to get a few prereaders or such? I'm sure it'd help keep the story flowing.
I hope Apple Bloom goes out with Pipsqueak!
Darn. No Pipsqueak. At least Apple Bloom kissed someone.
This is serious business. You ssid that something was seroous. Near the end there. Keep up the above-competent work!
THAT MOMENT AT THE END GOT ME:
(this is what my mind did)
break down
YOOOOOOOO
then I grabbed a friend, I had one hand on their shoulder, and I was like:
THIS STORY BRO. BRO!!!!
AND THEN I DIED! THIS IS AWEOSME!
P.S
Scoots lol was the first to make it out.
There's an error, but I don't mind, in fact, I thought it was kinda funny (so don't change it!)
There was only like two grammatical errors that I saw
Otherwise
SQUUEEE!! So dang cute!
Especially that it's in the human world
My imagination is making me work twice as hard!
As a good thing though....
Wait what just happened?!
that caught me by surprise!
Lol
I have only one question...
What is a "special mark" ?
It sounds odd...
Anyhoo good story so far!
I was like aww because nothing happened
Then I kept reading
And I gasped so hard
That I was choking on my own AIR!!!
How do you even do that?!
Aw dammit
I'm a huge spike bloom shipper
Which is obviously not happening here
My next resort would be pipsqueak though
Aww well next best ship is someone you know nothing about!
What?!
Dream mode activated***
Me: Grandma?
......
....
..
NOPE!
Wakes up***
Me: WTF!?
In all seriousness this was super cute! I loved it!
5695369 I think it's a humanized version of a Cutie Mark.
That dream was a little weird, though Sweetie Belle's grandma was pretty funny.
I can't wait to see what happens next! 
5761562 ahh i see
Well still super cute ill keep on reading!
This is so priceless
Come one button, you know you wanna see Sweetie without a top on! Don't even try to deny it you sorry sod!
5880823
Ya got that right sugarcube
Not surprised about that scene
Awesome chapter, keep it up! It feels slightly rushed, but you can work on your writing style a bit to fix that.
Scoots is a pervert apparently, good to know.
How does strip monopoly work?
Nice chapter!
Has Rumbleloo!!!!
I agree with Pegasister. I love SpikeBloom, shame there won't be any.
I need more! Moarrrr
What happened?? I'm really confused.
Can we have the next chapter? Please????
Oh my gosh, I love this
keep up the good work 
I have an idea for the story: when they finish all the games the couples sleep together in how they were after the games like strip monoploy!
Nice!!! So goood!!!!!
Good first chapter, a couple of grammatical errors (and a lot of punctuation errors) but still fine
Yes. YES. YES!!!!
You should continue this story for a long time. Discord and I approve.
Next chapter??? I mean, if you really want to??
Omg this is gonna get exciting!!!!!
Another awesome chapter! I'm looking forward to whenever you've finished the next one!
Lol. I know how Sweetie Belle feels about those weird mushrooms.
AWWWWWWWWWWWW! *dies of cuteness overload*
I agree with MajorDude. lol, love that name! Anywho.... I AGREE WITH MAJORDUDE! l ship it so hard.
0/////0 OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! IM FREAKING OUT!
Sucks.
6022438 What do you mean? It's amazing, unless you are being sarcastic. Someone CAN NOT hate this!
I suck at video games. Shame Button's my fourth favorite pony. Sorry! Rarity, Rainbow, and Sweetie beat you!
5958846 Two words. Butt. Face.
D'awwwww.................
6049621 Oh man I'm fine with Sweetie...