Make-out Party

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Isn't it weird that of all the ponies that would invite Scootaloo to a party, Diamond Tiara is the one to cough up an invite? Is this just a trick? Or is Diamond actually trying to help Scootaloo with her problem?

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Fic Demander

Fic Demander #1 · Apr 13th, 2015 · 2 · 1 ·

I thumbed down, because... reasons.

Randablitz

Randablitz #2 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

I thought it was very good, and well thought out. There were some errors, but they were very minor so I'll look past them. Great job!

Torilia Shine

Torilia Shine #3 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

aawwwwwwww.scootaloo actually kissed someone
so nice,short but cute, thumbs up

Mr mustash

Mr mustash #4 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

That was nice.

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SpookyPrincesssa

SpookyPrincesssa #5 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

I only got through halfway of it... The part where Scootaloo's friends called for her. I'm sory, this jt seemed kinda boring. It feels like Scootaloo is out of character... She wouldn't shed a tear for sure. Just change Scootaloo a bit in this fic and maybe it will get more popular. For now I will downvote this. I give this 2 out of 5 stars, grammar seemed good.