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Hey, I have an idea if you're bored. Follow me and you get awesome stories. Yeeaah


So... I've been a Soarindash writing mood.

What do you think of when you hear "Rainbow Dash?" Athletic? Cool? Braggy? Loyal? Two-Dimensional? In this story, she is all of that, but more.

Cover art made by Eilemonty

As Rainbow and her soccer team get ready for the big game, she startes to feel weird around a certain boy she's been friends with for years. But it can't possibly mean..
Could it?

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 172 )

Sorry, but I must be frank with this story.

This plot has been reused over and over again, but your version is a tad bit better, but those bonus points got killed by some grammar errors. I'll be tracking this story and see how it improves. Otherwise, keep up with the good work.

This was pretty cool, a couple of grammatical errors here and there, but overall pretty good my good Sir!!!!:moustache:

It's so cute!
Wow when Soarin called her Dashie I'm like
Awkward alert!

Can't wait to see where this goes

Oh man. Dis gonna be good. :rainbowlaugh:


Rarity why you being so rude!???!?!!! :rainbowhuh::facehoof::ajbemused:
Rarity is not vary nice when it comes to gossip. :duck::twilightangry2:

I l:heart:ve this story!

:rainbowderp: Woah pinkie slow your boat!
She got seriously mad there!
This is the best story!
Can't wait for the next chapters!

Chapter one could use some clean up, and it was fairly interesting, outside the Pinkie part. Could use some more description.

The problem I have with this other then it being too short is that is that there's no description and seemingly no reason for conflict. No one other then Dash and Soarin seem to have a motivation for anything, so everyone else is coming out super bland, add on top that Siarin and Dash are rushed through their feelings and conflict that the reader never gets into the right mood. Flesh things out a bit

Cant wait for the next chapter!

oh please let it be dodgeball :trollestia:
on a side note i.imgur.com/MXUg1Cq.gif

Oooo, I like this story :twilightsmile:

Can some say awesome! :pinkiehappy: because that was so funny! Especially when they both hit each other and fell unconscious! :pinkiehappy:

I won't lie I laughed at dat ending:derpytongue2:

I wonder what happened that day?

WHOA, THERE PINKIE!!! :rainbowlaugh:

5803555 you do NOT want to know.:rainbowwild:

Lol I love the brother-sister teasing it Mae me laugh hard:rainbowlaugh:
Dash now know her crush on soarin it's gonna be awkward while she's around him
Cool chapter keep it up:rainbowkiss:

Can't wait for more. This was the best chapter so far!

D'awww so adorable!! Dashie is falling in love! :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

Blitz and Dash are Bro and Sis here?

Yep. Ya know, since it's NOT a RainbowxBlitz story

Let the shiping commence!!!! :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::ajsmug::moustache::coolphoto:

He grabbed her hand and pulled her close.


They were both looking in each other's eyes.


Their faces were getting closer by inches until their lips-


"Gah! I-I gotta go. See you later!"


LOADS better than the... thing I made Flash and Twilight do without either of them knowing about it.:pinkiecrazy: if you read that story know that I can't not use Amnesia, I don't know why so don't ask!

"Sweet! School's almost out!" She said, congratulating herself for sleeping THAT long.

Only Dashie :rainbowlaugh:

He grabbed her hand and pulled her close. They were both looking in each other's eyes. Their faces were getting closer by inches until their lips-
"Gah! I-I gotta go. See you later!" She said as she zoomed into her house. Soarin' looked at her house. Confused as ever.


So adorable! Best chapter! Love it! :pinkiehappy:

Good. And Rarity not going nuts seeing Rainbow have a crush, that's a bit new. And little refreshing.

Dun Dun Dun rainbow danger dash congratulations……u finally have a crush :rainbowkiss:

Jeez, Rainbow. Wake up and smell the roses!:raritywink:

Ready, set, ship!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing in love Soarindash stories. Keep It up bro!!!! :derpytongue2:

Sooo awesome!:pinkiehappy:
Keep going!:twilightsmile:

Rainbow's not gonna stand for this.... but I'm hoping she does :pinkiecrazy:

That right there caused my county in Virginia to burn down, my cousins' pigs to jump in a plane and fly to Moscow, the devil to ice skate his way to work and my sister to adopt a monkey as a son. if anyone gets what i'm referencing (and how i'm referencing it) you need a life more than i do.

D'awww! :twilightsmile: I'm super giddy after reading that! It was fantastico! :moustache: :pinkiehappy: :raritystarry: :twilightsmile:

so cute :rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::raritystarry::yay: yay new chapter i enjoyed this

I'm so giddy right now :raritystarry: this is tooooo adorbs :yay:

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