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Night Flight


I like the night. Without the dark, we'd never see the stars...

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Everything was perfect for Rainbow dash until one day, her mother tells her the most unexpected decision of her life. She agrees but...will she survive?
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This is my first story ever. It's a little sad but it's filled with romance and it has a good ending. I'm not really good in grammar so I'll probably have lots of mistakes. Please tell them in your comments. And last thing...enjoy the story!

And now...

With a co-writer: Moonlightprincess002

Chapters (36)
Comments ( 673 )

ooo interesting, im looking forward to see where your going with this:pinkiehappy:

5801979
Thanks for reading. I'll update the new chapter tomorrow.:pinkiehappy:

I really like the idea of the story I'm looking forward to the next chapter :raritywink:
Oh and this is really good for your first story

5802096
Thank you so much. I didn't think my story was going to be that good

Great story ! Really looking forward to the next chapter :)

A few grammar mistakes but other than that it's good.

Please don’t hate me for disliking this, but RD just seems too much OOC. :rarity cry:
Some grammar mistakes, and the fact that RD is also best pony, made me dislike.
Once again, sorry. :pinkiesad2:

Interesting! Also, this just made it to the popular box :twilightsmile:

Good story so far:twilightsmile:I love it!

Quite the enjoyable story you have here, and with an obvious well thought out plot. Love the way you made Dash's family. I await your next chapter, sure it will be awesome :twilightsmile:

im not a fan of forced marrages at all but i want to see where this goes

Oooh interesting I'm liking this very much so far and I know already that this'll be great :heart:

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This is good kind of forced marriage. I wish you like it:twilightsmile:

YES NEW UPDATE! I love this story!!!!!! Also, in the Also Liked box there's my story Not A Nerd XD

YESS UPDATE when I saw the title I was like oh gosh rainbow is gonna be like A WONDERBOLT!!!! But I guess that part hasn't come yet this is soo EXCITING!!!! :pinkiehappy:

awesome:rainbowdetermined2: i like where this is going

Comment posted by Night Flight deleted Apr 7th, 2015

SooOOOOooOoOOoOOooooooo GOOOOOOOOODDDD!!!! Please write more soon! I can see no faults in this, and I really want some more!

I'm loving this, can't wait to see where this goes
I literally squealed when I saw the update idk why XD

So adorable! So to explode from cuteness! :pinkiehappy: loved this chapter!!! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiehappy:

this is sweet but i hope dash can still see er friends through this:rainbowkiss::heart:

ahhh sweet, what up with rarity, is she jealous:raritydespair::raritycry::facehoof:

Omg this so adorable! D'awww overload!!! :pinkiehappy:
Best chapter ever! :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

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Yeah she is.:rainbowwild: You can find out more about this in the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:

AWWW so cute
Jealous rarity…I'm gonna like dat :trollestia:

Words can't describe how much I enjoy this story

5865349 Np! It's really well thought out!

im so glad you didn't turn rarity into a complete bitch thank you some lazy writer just do whatever to progress the plot

I'm glad u didn't turn rarity into a(pinkie pie's words) meanie-mapean-mcpants :derpytongue2:
I love da bonding it's just *ahem* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

i love how this story is going so CUTE :rainbowkiss:

aww that really sweet :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

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Really? I thought it didn't have much interesting thing in it except from the last part...:applejackunsure:

5878181 yes it was delightfully fluffy:twilightsmile: and i like dat fluff

SO MUCH FLUFF I LIKE IT :raritystarry:
Oh and good luck for your exam ^_^

5881477
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam:twilightsmile: I hope I can pass:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

5881477
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam:twilightsmile: I hope I can pass:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

5881477
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam:twilightsmile: I hope I can pass:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

5881477
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam:twilightsmile: I hope I can pass:fluttershysad::fluttercry:

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