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Everything was perfect for Rainbow dash until one day, her mother tells her the most unexpected decision of her life. She agrees but...will she survive?
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This is my first story ever. It's a little sad but it's filled with romance and it has a good ending. I'm not really good in grammar so I'll probably have lots of mistakes. Please tell them in your comments. And last thing...enjoy the story!
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ooo interesting, im looking forward to see where your going with this
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Thanks for reading. I'll update the new chapter tomorrow.
I really like the idea of the story I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Oh and this is really good for your first story
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Thank you so much. I didn't think my story was going to be that good
Great story ! Really looking forward to the next chapter :)
A few grammar mistakes but other than that it's good.
Please don’t hate me for disliking this, but RD just seems too much OOC. :rarity cry:
Some grammar mistakes, and the fact that RD is also best pony, made me dislike.
Once again, sorry.
Interesting! Also, this just made it to the popular box
Good story so far
I love it!
Quite the enjoyable story you have here, and with an obvious well thought out plot. Love the way you made Dash's family. I await your next chapter, sure it will be awesome
im not a fan of forced marrages at all but i want to see where this goes
Oooh interesting I'm liking this very much so far and I know already that this'll be great
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Wow thanks!
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This is good kind of forced marriage. I wish you like it
5805847 ok
5805839 no prob
YES NEW UPDATE! I love this story!!!!!! Also, in the Also Liked box there's my story Not A Nerd XD
YESS UPDATE when I saw the title I was like oh gosh rainbow is gonna be like A WONDERBOLT!!!! But I guess that part hasn't come yet this is soo EXCITING!!!!
awesome
i like where this is going
Soo good update pls
Loving the story so far!
SooOOOOooOoOOoOOooooooo GOOOOOOOOODDDD!!!! Please write more soon! I can see no faults in this, and I really want some more!
LUV IT
Lovin dis!
I'm loving this, can't wait to see where this goes
I literally squealed when I saw the update idk why XD
So adorable! So to explode from cuteness!
loved this chapter!!! 
this is sweet but i hope dash can still see er friends through this
ahhh sweet, what up with rarity, is she jealous
BREH, LUV DIS CHAPTER!
Omg this so adorable! D'awww overload!!!
Best chapter ever!
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You can find out more about this in the next chapter.
Yeah she is.
5859674 can't wait
AWWW so cute
Jealous rarity…I'm gonna like dat
Words can't describe how much I enjoy this story
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Wow, thanks!
5865349 Np! It's really well thought out!
im so glad you didn't turn rarity into a complete bitch thank you some lazy writer just do whatever to progress the plot
I'm glad u didn't turn rarity into a(pinkie pie's words) meanie-mapean-mcpants
I love da bonding it's just *ahem* AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
i love how this story is going so CUTE
aww that really sweet
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Really? I thought it didn't have much interesting thing in it except from the last part...
5878181 yes it was delightfully fluffy
and i like dat fluff
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Thank you so much!
SO MUCH FLUFF I LIKE IT
Oh and good luck for your exam ^_^
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I hope I can pass
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam
5881477
I hope I can pass
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam
5881477
I hope I can pass
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam
5881477
I hope I can pass
Thanks for reading the story and also for my exam