Twilight is not happy. Her friends take her somewhere she does NOT want to go. Will she survive?
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I was thinking about maybe giving this story a try, and then I saw the word "ensue" in the description.
It was..alright to say the least
Not the cheeeeese!
Okay, there's this thing going around the fandom lately about Twilight being afraid of cheese related foods. More particularly, quesadillas. Why is this?
It was a fun to read sure a few mistakes but it was still fun to read I mean who doesn't love chase scenes!
6165952 because of the episode "Party Pooped."
6165958
Dang! Literally the only one I haven't seen yet! This always happens when I'm behind on an episode.
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If you ever write something like this again pls explain WHY Twilight is afraid!
Well.... That was pretty crazy.... I LIKE!
This is something Flash Sentry should be notified on.
6165952 Watch the latest episode. It's freaking gold.
This is literally my fanfiction... I suggest reading it. But yours is different in a good way
6167908 thanks for the idea!
6168045 this will be the new LOHAV
This was kind of painful to read. Your writing needs a lot of work. It's very stilted and your word choice could use a lot of improvement. Also, the characters all feel flat and lifeless here. It's like they're third-generation photocopies of the characters, completely lacking in vibrance and contrast. The setup didn't make sense, the execution was sloppy, and the punchline was dead on arrival.
What'd they do, go to Roybertito's?
XD YES! THIS WAS NEEDED
6165958 Here's what I don't understand about Twilight's repulsion to cheese. According to a Hot Minute video, she loves Spike's nachos, which clearly have cheese on them. How can she love nachos and hate quesadillas?
Flittershy? That is all. I suggest a revision of other syntax, but that's the largest problem I saw.