Freddy and the gang get somehow teleported to Canterlot High.
With no idea why they're at CHS.
Will they choose to live a life of a human or be the robots they used to be?
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Fun_Games
Barely watched the show so I only know the characters and some events that happen, I watched all the Equestria Girls movies though... so that's something.
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THIS IS AMAZING ONE OF THE BEST CROSSOVERS EVER FNAF AND MLP
DUH DUH DUH THIS IS SO AWESOME
"Does it look like I'm okay?" XD XD XD XD THIS STORY ROCKS
Let me stop you right there. You should not need to color code the quotes. It should be obvious from the dialogue going on who's talking. Either by giving them each a specific accent, or tone of voice, or even just putting 'X said' after each piece of dialogue, you should NEVER have to resort to color-coding text.
Yeah,we don't need another 'Five Nights at Freddies' story, thanks.
I've seen at least ten.
Okay review time! First, don't color each character, because it may look like you are disorganized. Second make each chapter at least 1,000 words, because most short story's don't get popular and it looks like you rush things. other than that 7/10, could use work but it will keep me reading because this is a rare fic. (as of right now)
You need to separate author's notes from your actual story description. And using colors for POV switches is very, very lazy unless it's a specific gimmick. Your chapters are incredibly short as well, shorter than even James Patterson's.
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5190477 This.
5184957 Spoilers!
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Try publishing a chapter when its actually finished, okay?
This needs SERIOUS rework. I suggest grabbing a few pre-readers and editors. Make a google doc and allow them to edit. I really like this concept and would be willing to help you with it but you need to be willing to put more effort into it. The pacing is far too fast, flesh out the story and give us a setting to work with. The characters themselves are stiff and are like. . . well, animatronics (though it is clearly unintentional). I don't really understand what happened after the lights went out, nor the reasoning behind it as it went too quickly. Please, talk to me via private message if you wish and I can help you with this story.
Dun dun daaaaaaaaaan
This cover art, this story. My sides, my beautiful sides obliterated.
Cancer
Like the other guys said color codeing is a lasy way of telling the audiance who is saying what. But that least of this story problems one of the biggest problems of this story you give us no form descreption of anything be it the charecters or the scenery. Another problem is that if we do a little math here we find out that you have made Foxy atleast 27 (Even older if you think the theory that anametronic are in fact vengful spirits of children) and you this is one thing you can not argue with me you wanna know because chica stated that Foxy got the scar in 1987.
And your telling me that no one has raised an eyebrow at the man with the eyepatch and hook for a hand (this could been so easy all you have to was have someone ask Foxy why he has those hell not even that insted of this whole stupid chapter being about there scareing every one at school you could have them enter the cafeteria and have Foxy hear people talk about eyepatch and hook) whis why we proof read so we can fix problem like this.
Also the chapters are barely a chapter long ther is much empty space wich you could have used to descibe the scenery charecters or god forbid develop the relationship between the charecters.
btw fnaf 2 is coming out
[No one's POV]
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh perfect
Chapter 5 has been uploaded YAY!!!
yay
yes
Sure, do it, why not? Go for it.
AWESOME STORY
Mind if I ask...which sex of bonnie is in this story? Is it the male or female? I meant to ask before.
Go for it and what about GF?
5219343 does GF mean Golden Freddy?
5190179 No it isn't, this one is: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/225745/seven-nights
5233074 Are you kidding me This is so GOOD!!!!
5225186 yup
Needs some grammar fixes, but, I am indeed interested, I'm gonna track this!
YAY CHAPTER 6 FINALLY UP
and it's going to be a ceiling spider isn't it?
Poor flash sentry.
Interesting...I wouldn't have expected this.
Check my other story if you want
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Bonnie is female in this. But I wondered that too. Bonnie's gender is one thing that I don't know. I've heard that the purple version of Bonnie (FNAF 1) is a guy. And the blue version of Bonnie (FNAF 2 ) is a girl.
5339582 I don't get it. You said that the foxy featured in this is the broken down foxy from fnaf 2, so do you mean that's what he looks like, or is there 2 foxys? Also Bonnie is a boy in both games (just to answer that question)
Chapter 6 is out
Come on Flash my home boy get your band mates and whoop those animatronics asses! Remember this, Marionette, Mangle, Golden Freddy, and Balloon Boy first, and the toy characters last. Got it Flash? Okay. Oh and these Freddy heads for you and your band mates should help.
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If Flash meets the animatronics that you said than he would fight them...at least 4 of them...
Well.. crap...
The battle against Foxy and Toy Freddy is up
"Well this ain't gonna be good." i lost it there
what gonna happen?
Nobody like flash sentry..İ still wonder how he become a guard in The other universe
it's actually four streaks of color, one being green, another blue, then pink, and the final one being a blue, almost teal or turquoise color
This is a thing. Definitely too many short chapters for my liking (too used to long chapters.), and I would've atleast add in some backstory to how they got transported to EQ. I mean, just waking up there with no known reason just feels rushed, and I don't like rushed things.
You know what- you are lucky. I am still gonna favorite this, and see where it goes.
The entire time I was reading this chapter, all I could say was 'fucking idiots'. Seriously why would they do that? YOU ARE NOT THE DAZZLINGS YOU CAN'T MAKE IT WORK!
Foxy, why are you such an idiot in this?