Sunset Shimmer takes a new job at a children's entertainment restaurant downtown as the night guard. At first, things start off simple: show up for five nights, work the night shift, earn the pay and leave. But as she begins her shift, Sunset suddenly realizes that this place is not everything it seems, as she learns about its dark history and how the animatronics inside the restaurant seem to be hunting her. Can Sunset survive, or will she become another part of Freddy Fazbear's mechanical family?
Chapters (3)
Wait, why is sunset Springtrap? Is it just because she's yellow? Because if so, that's racist.
I liked this story!
Funny thing is this game inspired me and my friends to role play the real thing. The look on the victim's face when we jump out of nowhere is priceless!
I give it a like for general originality. And that cover pic scares me more than Spring Trap ever did.
This Is A Good story in my book... can't wait too see where this goes in further chapters.
Freddy's eyes are blue.
5756659 Guy's right. Big, piercing, absolutely terrifying, but still blue. If you played the game, you should know this.
I like it so far! It's really well written.
Well, "I told you so."
Well Done. Looking forward to reading more.
Ok this was good for a first attempt but I must say that the way the paragraphs are set up makes it hard to read. There should be a space in between new paragraphs. For example:
There should also be a new paragraph for every line spoken.
Also, the picture of Freddy and the gang isn't really necessary since a majority of the target audience should know what they look like already. Though if you really must provide a pic, then use a link.
I look forward to reading more.
5756137 I couldn't find any other pictures relating to both Sunset Shimmer and Five Nights.
5757008 A minute detail that can be easily overlooked or forgotten. Besides, I just edited it.
5757528 Alright.
There better be someone with purple skin in this story.
5757801 Wait and see.
5756137 I'm sure there's some reason behind it...
Its cool I like it I can't whaye for the next 1
5757493 Fair enough. Getting specific coverart is hard to do if it doesn't exist on the internet and if you stink at drawing (i'm no Picaso but I do okay)
Dat cover art.
Quit now, Sunset. QUIT WHILE YOU HAVE THE CHANCE!!!
Erm, so why doesn't she immediately quit?
Bonnies eyes are actually red, but it's not that hard to tell so I don't blame ya.
Everyone says that Sunset should quit. I say she should bring a shotgun! Applejack, give her your 12 gauge, I don't care if it's a twin barrel!
5775429 Because when Sunset makes a promise, she really commits.
Yar-....har-....Fiddle..... de de.... A swashbuckling pirate.......... is alright to be...
See you in night two sunset.
5820862 I apologize for any similarities, but when I wrote this, I had no idea that any other fics like it existed.
still nothing?
5924820 I'm trying to tie in my writing with my job. Just be patient.
5926216 sure thing
are you making next chapter now?
Will the toy Animatronics from the second game be referenced in the story?
5951917 All will be revealed later on.
are you still on this
6245137 Yeah, just haven't had a lot of time to write. Plus, the next chapter is going to be a relatively long one. But I promise that I am still on this story.
6247614 okay, that all I needed to hear, last thing we need is nor talent like this going to waste
yes!!!new update I love what your doing so far with this story can't wait for the next chapter.
the marioetta is helping sunset for behind the murder can she solve it?
Please don't take so long with the next chapter. This just turned into a favorite for me.
This was very much worth the wait. Looking forward to seeing what Sunset manages to learn before her second night of fending off animatronics.
Faved! Please add more chapters!
This story had such promise. I'm sad to see it was never finished