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LakieLegion


im an Aussie 18 yr old, just left school, love ponies(obviously), metal, TF2, Pokemon, Borderlands, Dark Souls and conspiracy theories...

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When a highly ranked monster hunter finds himself fighting a foe that none has defeated before he quickly realizes why, and after a crushing and life-threatening defeat he finds himself in a new world, one where there are no 'Monsters' as such and any creatures bearing any semblance of the title have gone extinct.

But when monsters from his own world start pouring into the world he was dragged into, he quickly finds that he is the only one that has the skills and knowledge to defeat them, armed with an an arsenal of weapons and a group of friends, he will set out to find out what is allowing these monsters access to this new world, and most importantly...

Why?

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Teen rating because of minor swearing and slight amounts of blood and guts

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 81 )

Monster Hunter in Equestria?

This could be interesting, since there are a variety of mythological wildlife that are confirmed to exist there. I'll be keeping my eye on this to see where it goes.

Such interest. Much wow. Will follow.

4410657 4410778 wow, I go to bed and as soon as i wake up I already have more interest in this than i expected :rainbowlaugh: I really have low self esteem don't I?

4413340 you know, I could preread and correct the spelling mistakes for you. If that's okay

4415782 were there spelling mistakes? I thought i got them all *shrug* I may just have to start using google docs instead of rich text files if I need a prereader

4418593 Nonono....I was just saying if you wanted one, it's okay if you don't though. Also your OC, like the mane, fur color.....meh. (wow I sounded like a douche right there)

4421922 *whew* that's a relief, thanks for the offer though, if I feel the need I shall contact you, also, my OC is purple because I like purple *shrug*

Maybe i am to fast about muy judgment but i like it and want to read more of the fanfic, but i think you should not lead them from one fight into another without a break. The three chapters are good i think:twilightsmile:

4431683 yeah, I think I went a bit fast with the GJ combat, but I needed some way for Celly to be alerted to his presence other than 'he's from another world'

Kinda the reason I don't write often, too much action, not enough filler *shrug*

4431731 well right now i like it:twilightsmile:

plz continue it, sry if i sound like a troll :trollestia: but, can you add like 10 chapters, the last about the Dire miralis, look it up if yooz dooz notz knowz

i like it... but finish it, and add a hunter i know, his name is sangaurian, he has volvidon armor x and is a G rank in 3 ultimate his fav weapon is the skysuderer, he doesnt fight anything unless he has his kelebi deer shot awakened with slime too. jus sayin :twilightsheepish:

4452561 firstly, I am hoping to get it much longer than 10 chapters, and Dire Miralis probably will not be the final confrontation, Daren Mohran is a mh4 monster, hopefully by the point of his return, mh4 will be available in Australia and I can go much further

Secondly, this will unfortunately be a 1 hunter show, I am not confident enough to have more characters than I already have, and Ian is based off myself, so he is easy enough to write for

Thank you for reading it so far

oh, well, watch out for dat white fatalis!:flutterrage:

4458186 oh duh, almost forgot, look up monsters and armors and weapons on the wiki for monster hunter, my personal fav is the stygian zinogre he is bad-fucking-ass watch this little thing *a stygian zinogre walks into ponyville* RD: what is that?:rainbowhuh: Ian: a stygian zinogre..... RUN! ill handle it.....:trixieshiftleft:

4534209 'tis my story friend, and I know enough of monster hunter for almost every monster, admittedly, I have not been able to fight any of the G-rank monsters yet, but I know how to use a wiki, I hope you will continue to enjoy once I got more chapters out, but to let you know, we won't be staying in good old Ponyville forever, we might possibly be in another continent by the time we reach stygian :trixieshiftleft:

4535241 *facepalm* i feel so dumb. *whacks head on a random table*

Damn son.....that Wroggi going to break free and wound the Princess or someone, I'm calling it. Also, Liquefiying insides? That sounds delightfully evil. I'm gonna use that as a torture technique, thank you good sir. *cackles evilly* Huzzah and what have you! Also, I give this chapter four moustaches out of five. :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: / :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

4583898 mehehehehehe, we shall see, there may be another chess piece in Canterlot other than good ole Wroggi, but we have a few chapters worth of filler/exposition, although, Wroggi may get out at a much later date *shrug* we shall see what is in store for Celestia's specimen


also, worth noting, i have gauged that seeing as a Great Wroggi's poison is powerful enough to melt armour/wound skin(whatever getting damaged in MH means *shrug*), that inhaling it and such should be strong enough to kill much... much faster... anyone up for pony organ soup? :pinkiecrazy:

4583951 I'm down for some. :pinkiecrazy: Also another monster? Hmmm...Rathalos, or that Bear one, whatever it's called. also, just want to point out, the Long and Short describtions need to be capatilized also. Might put people off when they see those not Capatilized. (Warning, shameless self-promotion coming up) Mind reading my story? It still needs some work and stuff but yeah......Huzzah and what have you.

Comment posted by LakieLegion deleted Jun 22nd, 2014

oh bloody hell deleted the post

welp, lets do that again


4584026 oh bloody crapola on a crap stick! ill get right on that, also, im planning on using rath for something else, such as an air/sea battle where our intrepid group of plucky adventurers fight Rath and Lagi while on a large (thankfully fireproof) ship with a couple of guards while the two monsters also contend with one another for the prey :pinkiecrazy: guards will more than likely lose their lives

now, the typo joke i tried doing once again

wow! your story is not a sham! i'll get right on that!

*story does not exist*

well.. bugger...




not that retyping that is away, i shall actually check out the story and fix my intro thingies

4584073 What the actual fuck! Why does everyone say my story doesn't exist! If someone took down my story I'm going to wrench their balls off or slowly twist a knife in their vagina. :pinkiecrazy:

4584080 *headdesk* it vas a joke, you obviously clicked before i tried fixing it goddamn me and my jokes

you typed shamless instead of shameless

4584088 Oooooooooooh......um....haha?

4584096 no biggie dude, i mindblanked and clicked send before writing in 'that was a joke btw', then tried editing it and accidentally clicked delete, but i fixed it

you had every right to rage, i would too if i did that to myself (it is actually quite common for me to do that :rainbowlaugh: other ppl irl raged at me fore similar reasons)

4584108 lol. But no seriously, sometimes when I send my story to other people it says story doesn't exist. Also, you are really cool guy. (Another shameless question) Did ya read it? It was bad wasn't it? I know it is, don't try cheering me up.... :raritycry:

4584118 demons from the past right? if it is something else, im afraid it isnt there, but i have clicked 'read later' for DftP (yknow what? imma call it Daft Punk now :rainbowlaugh:)

4584129 Yeah its DftP....woah, it kinda does look like Daft Punk.....you can continue to call it that if you want. I've been having bad Writers' Block for the past.....what? Month and a half? I've been trying to Slaughter it, chopping it up to little pieces, then basking in the glory of my vanquished foe get past it but yeah, a pretty cool guy is trying to help me get past it and help me brainstorm.

4584148 i hope you get through your WB, and i shall read it at a later date

Still good; despite never having played Monster Hunter, I'm enjoying this story. :twilightsmile:

Unfortunately, the footnotes don't really work in this format. In a book, they're at the bottom of the page, and the page isn't scrolling so you can just look down and then up again. Here, to read the footnotes at the time they were referenced, you'd need to scroll 22 times! It's just not going to happen. I think you'll probably need to integrate them into the story before they're readable...

4632658 i had them like that to begin with, but i remembered a similar format on another story a read, where they mentioned to use ctrl+f to search for the number, i, uh, forgot that little detail :twilightsheepish:

4635232 I've seen that done, but honestly, that doesn't really work either. Too many key presses required. For one footnote, possibly...but not for 11 in 1.7k words... :twilightoops:

4635250 true :applejackunsure:
i guess i'll fix it later

4636474 all fixed, i'll post notes such as these in a similar way in future :twilightsmile:

now back to playing Dark Souls 2, praise the sun! :trollestia:

4639239 Definitely easier to read now. :twilightsmile:

i just wanna see some of the strongest ponies get fucked up by on of the weakest monsters

Crap, why does it have to be Peco? Friggin things are annoying as hell. Easy to beat, but their calls make things rather difficult. I remember a time where I'd just entered the HIgh-Rank quests, and the damn thing summoned a Deviljho, way before Iwas ready for such a thing. I don't know whether it was the hunter in-game or me, but some screamed liek alittle girl when that thing popped up right in fron of the camera... One other, after just beginning the G Quests, summoned an Azure Rathalos....

Speaking of which, will we be seeing the Rath subspecies? Maybe even Alatreon?

4677503 dont you worry mien freund, Flashy won't be the only pony caught off guard by the Peco and he also will not be the only pony to walk away with scars either :pinkiecrazy: mentally or physically

4677503 to answer your first question, i'm using Peco to further plot development, because, if it can mimic monster calls, why not human speech itself? :trixieshiftleft:

also, i have plans for alot of monsters, we will be seeing the Great Dragon of Darkness eventually, and i have a Rath Lagi combo fight planned aswell, with both Rath and both Lagi types (Abyssal Lagi and Silver Rath will more than likely come much later, as they are both much stronger, or atleast i believe so, never got that far :fluttercry:)

Will there be Crimson Qurupeco as well?

And I would love to see how they would react to Dire Miralis or Gore Magala.

4677503
Remember the quest where it would summon Savage Jho? Don't know if it was DLC or not, though.

Qurupeco!!! YESYESYESYES! I'm so happy to see this bird! Best monster 11/10, would slay again.

4680658 Gore will not be appearing, as this will only be MH3/MH3U story, that said, Dire will have a role alongside Ala and GB Ceadeus, and it shall, more importantly, be a PLOT POINT! so no more info on that regard for you :duck:

also, crimson will appear at some point, possibly during the fight with his cousin, not sure whether i want DDogs or Crimson as backup for Quru, i plan on having practically every monster in this story

4681958 ahhhhhh, Qurupeco, one of the most loved and loathed monsters in MH3 and MH3U, i once fought a Quru that glitched when hitting a Deviljho, causing Jho to die, OHKO

it happened on MH3 :rainbowlaugh: one of my most memorable fights in this game tbh

4682083 Cool, I've never actually played the MH games, but I have watched people play them, which is basically the same thing. Right? Right...? Anyway, all hail the mighty Qurupeco, bask in his/her glory. *Praising intensifies*

4682086 they are fun, and unless you look at the monster's actions analytically, you wouldn't understand how the dance of battle is, analysis is everything

personally i have only played Tri and 3 Ultimate, but i have played them enough to know that, knowing your foe's motions could be the difference between success, and failure

but on a less serious note, Quru is not even the most fun to fight, that privilege goes to Jho, where to play aggressively is to die :pinkiecrazy:

4682083
Fair enough, but just one more question. Since your having every monster, then you will be using Gigginox. Will he scream as much as he normally does?

4682177 more than one pony will be having sore ears that day, not sure if i should have it in a Diamond Dog warren or not :applejackunsure:

4682184
It would be funny, given how the d dogs will probably have better hearing than the ponies.

4682278 in my headcanon, they have similar hearing to our dogs, but a love for digging and gems, like Doggy Dwarves :rainbowlaugh:

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