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Charles Spratt


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"Josh, Anya. I know you two can hear me. Listen, I've just discovered something horrible about the Mane Six, something that threatens every single one of us! They're already searching the globe for me! You have to hear this before they find me!"

As always, let me know what you thought once you're finished reading. Hope you Enjoy!

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Sequel?!?!?!?!?!?! Or second chapter please?!?!?!?!?!

After reading this, I'm only left wondering why they would do something this horrible.

4891587 I'll be totally honest, I don't know why they're doing something like this either. Then again, that wasn't information that was neccesary in this story, which was told from Jerry's point of view. I might write a story about why the Mane 6 are doing this at some point as a sequel or 2nd chapter or something, but that's kind of a big might.

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Personally, I'm of the opinion that these are not the Mane Six, or at least they aren't themselves.

Uh... so ponies have a functioning society, where nobody really worries if other ponies are collecting body parts from the ponies they murdered? Or is it just that humans don't count somehow because pony racism? Because if so it wouldn't make sense to turn them into ponies, since ponies can be racist against a human easier than a human turned into them. Maybe they have to turn them into ponies? If so, wouldn't ponies still have a problem with pony body parts being collected, even if they were torn off an evil human? I sure wouldn't feel comfortable with someone who had a jar of dismembered horns if I had a horn, no matter how justified they were in acquiring them.

basically I'm saying BAN BAN HELP YOU MUST THE ELEMENTS OF BACKGROUND AND DESTORY THE EVIL

Wow.
Now I want more.
If you are going to do a one-shot in the future, author...
Don't make it so damn good!

4891945 Well, it does have an alternate universe tag, so that's probably a fair bet.

4892101 I dunno, I was under the impression that this was done in secret.

Ok that was awsome. Props to you sir props, what you just did turning iconic mlp characters that mostly repersent everything innocent in this world and made it a act of sorts to lead people in and play a game were they die because no matter what someone would do they are screwed. Examples: you cant fly you have the best flier in equstria against you, cant hide in the woods because Flutters can talk to animals, cant try and decise yourself Twilight has looked at you and studied you for to long, cant hide really because Pinkie probly has a sense for when she is near you so like I said your screwed


4892101 What if everyone either dosent know because the Mane 6 hid their collactables or everyone knows and dosent care

I also ment to put this but it slipped my mind. Please make a sequal or a chapter 2 that involes the Josh and Anya characters please I feel it will make the story greater then what it already is so again please:fluttercry:

My yandere senses were tingling...only they weren't yandere. Just bat shit crazy like them. God help us all.

4892569 Really? And nopony in Ponyville noticed that new ponies kept systematically appearing, then disappearing within 1 1/2 month spans each time?

lol only 2 left now :derpytongue2:

4892569 Sir you do know that pic is an OH SHIT moment right

Comment posted by Charles Spratt deleted Dec 9th, 2014

4893470 well, from what I've seen, ponies in Ponyville aren't very observant. I mean, in Twilight's Kingdom, the Mane 6 didn't hear that Tirek had drained every pony in equestria with Discords help, and that was for a national emergency! For something this minor, I doubt anypony would notice.

How strong is Pinkie? :rainbowhuh:

4894202 every gamer here would be reminded of certain games. I may or may not of encountered.

After reading this, I was speechless for three minutes and scared at the same time. O-o
How can they be like this and why would they do something so horrible?!

197% awesome.:yay: I don't care what this story turns Fluttershy into I just know that no matter what she is best mane 6. FOR MASTERMAX888!

Interesting.

I'm serving up free pints of paranoia for everyone who reads this!
52 pints comin' up!

im glad im not a famous brony, or that anyone knows im a brony (wow that makes my life sound sad). you know that you need to make 2 sequals now....minimum. but the first paragraph....

“Josh, Anya. I know you two can hear me. It’s Jerry. Listen, I know that I haven’t made any communications with either of you for the past month, and I’m sorry about that, but I have a very real reason why I haven’t been able to communicate with either of you: It’s because I have been living in Equestria for about a month now. I know that sounds insane, but that’s the truth. I’ve taken on the form of this world’s inhabitants, and because of that, I’ve been able to live in harmony with them. However, I’ve recently discovered something that every brony needs to be aware of, on the double. If they don’t, they’ll likely meet the same fate that I’m desperately trying to avoid right now. What fate is that? Let me explain…

...if i was that guys friend i would have said "if he didn't want to hang out he could have just said so." but still great story.

...That...was...AWESOME! So! What about the other two? And wat happen to him? His neck snapped by Pinkie? Or Knife action?
(Sound creepy doesn't it...^^)

Well anyway Pinkie's the winner of hide and seek obviously...If I were him, I would eat a bomb and blow myself to bits with them or at least with one of them.

Hey Kratos! Got some ponies needs killin!

5042885 Please continue with this, I want to see them get their dumbasses kicked by a powerful OC.

Is this going to get continued? Cause it's going to be great when the Mane 6's butts get kicked into oblivion.

So I get that Bhaalspawn is talking to Firebrand, but who is Anya?

TLP

You either go on with this or give permission to someone else to write it themselves. Otherwise, this was very good. Didn't leave me shivering, but very good nonetheless.

Although the reason may be because I own a Beneli M4 shotgun... yeah, it is.

(except for the one that belonged to ‘the element of Loyalty’, for obvious reasons)

Ugh, what reasons

5450672 He was implying that his oc wasn't a pegasus, meaning that he had no way to physically get into her home. I said obvious reasons because he was talking to people who already knew what his oc looked like. I probably should've brought that up in the story a bit better though. Either way, I hope I explained it well for you. Cheers :pinkiesmile:

4895638 Amnesia, this other game I can't think of that started the phrase press b to blow, and I don't know any others.

4903945 Yeah, they could only get the amount of paranoia and saltiness needed from your DNA.

that... Was... AWESOME.
I can't get scared by books rarely at all, but in the awesome aspect of it, it gets 20%cooler every paragraph:pinkiecrazy:

I just wonder how one pony could win... If they were going against Pinkie Pie.:pinkiecrazy:

Why has there yet to be a sequel?
This was good and unique.

Im assuming they want revenge for the disgusting fanimages/fanfics

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If that was true, then I'm actually kinda scared to think of what they plan to do to the contributors of FoE.

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