I don't know why I'm here...
I don't know how I got here...
I don't want to keep going like this...
But I don't have a choice...
I just don't want to wind up like her...
Preread by: MyLittleGeneration, The Cynical Brony
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Charles Spratt
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Scary I need some help to understand what the hell happened or why my onions are Weeping other than that it was an intriguing read and it was well done
7564458 Thanks for the thumbs up, mate. Glad you enjoyed it!
7564463 no but seriously I'm confused what the hell happened I read it carefully but I can't figure out what happened
That was pretty creepy. The idea of being stuck in a time loop and getting wiped from existence if you ever do anything different... that's some pretty messed up stuff you've come up with, assuming I understood it correctly. Excellent job.
That some pretty deep scary stuff man
7564577 Glad you enjoyed it!
7564484 You've pretty much got it, mate. I'm glad you liked it so much!
7564647 Coincidence? I think so!
I'm going to assume that Sonata is stuck in the movie as it loops over and over again and forced to do all of her parts with no screw ups or deviating from the script or she will be erased like that one girl was
Seems like a scary world...I enjoyed that!
This is scary and it's awesome!
Sonata is trapped in the movie, as someone is watching the movie again, again, again, and again?
Creepy and Funny.
Can you imagine the next time you watch a rerun of any show the characters all break character and go off script and almost never do what you expect again?
It'd be terrifying and hilarious.
7564902 It'd certainly be interesting, I'll give you that.
Also, funny? Huh. I wasn't really going for humor, but hey, I ain't gonna complain. I'm just glad you enjoyed it.
7564787 Glad you liked it! And as for your hypothesis... well, what do you think?
7564729 Great! I'm glad to see people are enjoying this so much!
7564910 I have a weird but strong sense of humor in some of these stories.
7564910 I think that it is it.
Man,now I'm feeling bad for watching Rainbow Rocks 20 times....
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/673311/read-this-guys-story
7564923 Yeah, I noticed that blog soon after he wrote it. It was quite nice of him to take some time to help promote someone less popular, huh?
7564943 Yep.
7564943 *hug*
Woah, thats something.. Its nice to see stories like this once in a while
Reminds me to a similar fic, maybe you can enjoy this one as well
7565683 Thanks, glad you liked it. I'll make sure and check out that story you recommended sometime.
Just that I understand this right, the others don't know this is one big time loop?
7566228 It makes watching a movie seem a lot crueler, doesn't it?
Now this was a interesting read.
I really like the storyline concept.
So basically she is forced by the movie makers to play her role....and if she doesn't she will be removed from it......
.....
WELP! Never watching a movie again!
I feel bad for the characters in the Saw movies, now.
I don't remember any character matching that description appearing in the movie...
7565734 Maybe. Or maybe they do realize it, but are too scared of disappearing to step out of line.
Wow. Really spooky and deep. A concept I'd never seen done before. And very well written, to boot. I was hooked withing the first few paragraphs.
Liked and faved. Well done.
7575683 Thanks mate. Glad you enjoyed it!
7576525 Least I could do.
*INTERNAL SCREAMING INTENSIFIES*
that moment when you realize you've watched this movie a... ridiculous number of times. even have stuff involving the character around the house. or the fact you watched this exact movie this morning, while laughing and singing (drinking as well)
*breaks a tad, tearing up, twitching*
WE GOTTA GET HER OUTTA THERE! SOMEHOW! WE GOTTA DO IT!
Whoa
That is some Ground-Hog Day Insane shit right there
Well done
We need more ideas like this on this site
before I read it. what is the Dark and Horror tag for ?
7741495 Um, because that's the story's genre?
7565683 By the way, I just got around to reading that story you recommended. All I have to say is: damn, you really know how to pick 'em! Thanks for providing me with an entertaining read. Cheers
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This is a pony with a raised eyebrow. I'm a bit confused by what your overall point is.
One of the scariest things a character could go through is for them to be aware of their own existence, for them to realize that they're not an actual person, that they're puppets who'll have their strings cut should they attempt to move the wrong way. The real terror this story invokes is through the feeling of helplessness, which can be felt by both the reader and the characters involved. The characters can do nothing but act, and the readers can do nothing but watch.
Well done on this one, really!
When it comes to pretty girls like Sonata getting tortured like that, it is times like this that I am thankful for being one sadistic buck!
Very good story though
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Who’s her? Also, I feel bad for sonata. Out of the the dazzlings she was the nicest and would have been the easiest to redeem.
You can has review!