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Drunkenly wrote this just now. Well not now, but from 9:15 to 9:45 so that counts. This is a cute little, VinylXTavi Fic. In it Vinyl tells Tavi how she really feels, and comes to terms with what might happen the next morning.

No editing in the letter other than the word icicle. Grammar checking in GDocs. Other than that no editors or pre-readers. Just a cute, slightly sad fic I wrote on the spur of the moment. I hope y'all like it. As always leave any comments or critiques you want to share.

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Comments ( 16 )

uhh... Octavia loves or not Vinyl back? :rainbowhuh:

:heart: This is sooooo cute :heart:
I-I mean ,masculine, tuff, football :twilightangry2:
I'm giving it a thumb up ;-)

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I remember that I left the ending vague since Octavia feels emotionally conflicted. As for what she'd say after a few drinks ... I leave that up to the audience to decide. On one hoof adventure, spontaneity, and a love of life. On the other, lack of stability, childishness, and Impulsiveness. Third hoof was of course that it might not be that bad of a thing. So ... :derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpyderp1::derpyderp2:. Poor Tavi has some thinking to do.


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Yes, manly stuffs like Hoofball and Griffon Gladiator Battles. Or the Bear Calvary.

Thanks for the thumbs up, and I agree, this was a cute fic. Love VinyXTavi, they are so fun to read / write.

So I crack a smile,
and ask you to say a while.

stay

And I just want want to say I love you.

one want only

Well not forever, more like 10 years, ever since Pricnness Celestia’s School

Princess

I wonder what that’d taste liek?

like "e" and "k" flipped

Waht a tic, I needs me a drink of something …

Wait?(i think)

And baks

backs or I'm back(i wonder if it was you or Vinyl)

egonomic? egoicicle? egonomtistical?

ergonomic( intended to provide optimum comfort and to avoid stress or injury.) egoicicle isn't a word:twilightangry2:egotistical(excessively conceited or absorbed in oneself; self-centered)

As she monologued, she sang deeper and deeper into the bubbly goodness of her bubble bath

sank and monologued isn't a word in the dictionary but it is now

What will be will be. I’ll just leave this in fate’s hooves.

Will it be

b]

I guess what this bal of tardis-ness

love this part:pinkiehappy:

Dear Sweet Luna! that was hard to do *huff huff* thanks Sweetie belle for the assist on correcting:pinkiesick: oh my luna...*pausing/buffering* Okay im good
Its still a great story:pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy:

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The first two corrections did. As well as changed sang to sank.

The letter I left unedited, since it was a drunkenly written, drunk letter. From our very lovely Vinyl Scratch, to Tavi. But now that I'm sober I can attest to a few things.

Waht was Wait.

She was trying to say egotistical, which I think I was thinking at the time her not knowing how to spell or pronounce the word [kind of like Dashie] would've been funny. Thus every word but the right one, and yes, Egoicicle isn't a word. Poor, poor, Vinyl.

As for Baks [Or "I'll be back"] was a mixture of both of us. Both me and my character.
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As for "What will be, will be". I know I read that somewhere in the Looking For Group webcomic, but I can't for the life of me remember where it was in the fic. [need to put that comma inbetween be and will. Thanks for pointing that out.

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Seriously both you and Sweetie Belle are awesome. Thank you for pointing those things out, and thanks for helping get the song right [can't believe I over looked that bit]. And I'm glad you liked the story :twilightsheepish:. For your hard work, you and Sweetie Belle deserve a cookie.

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nom nom nom mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm:rainbowwild::rainbowwild:
thanks for the cookie(me and Sweetie split it)

More. Now. Chapter 2. NOW!.....Please?



Awesome cute and kinda funny. Definitely needs MORE.

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No promises. Someday if I get inspired to do an epilogue, or add a chapter. I'll add a little something, but at the moment, I can't think of anything to add to it.

4809014 Well then, I guess I shall wait patiently and hope inspiration hits you.:applecry:

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Why I don't turn on my computer when I'm drunk. :rainbowlaugh:

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
exactly...:ajbemused: then I come along:pinkiecrazy:

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To be fair, this turned out a whole lot better than I thought it would when I woke up the next day.


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Yes you did. And you were full of win and awesomesauce :yay:.


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Thanks you deserve a hug

Gah, this was adorable!

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