An Earth Pony by the name of Maestro is moving into Canterlot with his foster parents. He was raised his entire life up until now in Manehatten, until his foster father Revenue, found an interesting oppotunity in the prestigious city. Maestro had been learning to play the cello ever since he was about five or so. He was good, but he needed a teacher. He stumbles across an Earth Pony however who seems to catch his interest of learning from her. Her name is Octavia, and many things seemed clouded about her to him. But later on will he discover that she is not the typical refined Earth Pony he thought her out to be?
Chapters (48)
OH GOD THIS IS SO GOOD!!!
I cant stop reading!!!!
3052664 I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOUR TALKING ABOUT BUT I KNOW ONE THING FOR SURE.....THIS IS SOME GOOD SHIT!!!!!
I NEED MOAR!!!
I honestly have no clue as to what happened to the reent comments that were posted about this story, what happened to them? everything posted by readers within a week or two period is now gone......wut?
Sorry I couldnt say this on xbox, I got grounded -,- but If you need ideas, I haz one! :D Have Maestro and Octavia entered into a orchestra for celestia, and one of octas old friends zat is jealous of her totally like tries to ruin the performance over and over agaaaaain :D fun, amiright?
3194198 Um....it doesn't sound intriguing enough. For one, there is no Orchestra for Celestia, but there is a Canterlot Symphony Orchestra, but i've already got stuff having to do with that planned more into the future. I just need some help on the storyplot on where i am right now is all.
Chapter 23 is actually looking not half bad, hopefully I can finish it by tonight.
I like the new short description i have for my story, i'm pleased with it.
Editing Notes:
@ the Begining: The Mother is yelling but her dialog ended with a period. Consider using an Exclamation point there.
@ Dialog line "He wasn’t exactly a morning pony, but neither were very many ponies out there anyway to begin with."
I suggest saying "He wasn’t exactly a morning pony, but neither were very many ponies out there to begin with." or "He wasn’t exactly a morning pony, but neither were very many ponies out there anyway." Note: this change is a weak one and has almost no impact on the pieces quality. Its just another option.
@ Dialog with Octavia. There is a verbal exchange that is missing an [enter] space between lines. Its a spot following the “If you’re wanting an autograph, no…" Text chunk.
Shipping approved
No real flaws with this chapter. Good work.
3211089 Glad you enjoy it so far, And I see what you mean by some of these mild errors. It happens to all of us i'm sure, lol. But otherwise again, i'm glad you enjoy the story, escpecially since the shipping is approved
....but the story i believe gets good in my opinion starting from Ch.6 up to Ch.17.
interesting story nonetheless, i am enjoying this. I got your msg from Xbox live of you telling me to chekc this out. So i did, and this is actually an intresting story here, i like it. There's a few errors in your story, but nothing really major at all, very minor stuff, but overall keep up the good work.
Dude, my friend on xbox told me to check you out after he just got through reading like the first few chapters and he fowarded me to you. funny how i wanted to make an account JUST to see this, but overall good story, a few minor grammatical errors but otherwise i'm not complaining.
THERES NOTHING HERE!!!!
My gosh.....that jerk, how dare he act like that to Octavia!
great story bro, keep it up!
3228888 Wait...waht is this supposed to mean? I stayed up liek 2 in the morning after one of my friends told me to check this out....which i can tell he's got to be the SS Goku picture. What's this music supposed to mean? DOES SOMETHING HAPPEN?!
3229008 Something does happen....but that's for you to keep reading and find out. In Chapter 27...lets just say the expecting has been doubled.
whao
3310528 Um...is that a good "whoa"? lol.
Damn bro, this shit is good, i like the emotion put into it dude. I'm gonna keep reading it yo.
I'm reading your long description, and well....i see that you put your long description for your story as a little backstory to your OC but....idk. But otherwise, i got ur msg bout ur fic on FB, i'm on chapter 8 i think on ur story after u e-mailed it to me to see, and i'll be resuming on chapter 9 on this profile of your here. It's good so far, a few minor errors but overall well put together and easy to read too.
Also, shipping approved good sir, he's very well balanced and isn't a Mary Sue. He has his ups and downs and many of them which i like and it doesn't ruin his view, but that's just one man's opinion.
3315365 Thanks Cookiemonster9000....lol what a name
Hmmm....interesting, i'll keep reading this.....YOU ENTERTAIN ME PEASANT! jk, but good story so far.
Btw, thanx for letting me know bout this on Xbox LIVE, it seemed interesting when you told me his backstory, which obviously looks like his long desription. But yeah dude, i'll share this with my other friends if i can remember, lol.
Bro, just finished your story! Wow, among others i've read with Octavia in it....you've done a great job here. It's amazing that the story STILL isn't finished, but keep up the good work dude! I LUV IT!
This is cool man, i wonder what will happen next?
Wow....this guy is a dick honestly, why would Equestria, home of magic and friendship have such a jerk? her ex really needs to get the daylights beaten out of him. But dude, good story man....thanx for E-mailing it to me last night, i read like the first four chapters after that....so yeah. nice job on the story though
3369466 Well the story isn't exactly "finished" but i got what u mean...thanks alot dude, that helps me
3369518 You want to believe *X-Files theme plays*
3369610 IKR? That's what he's there for
Hey everyone, just wanted to thank all of you for enjoying the story i have been writing. The story is now approaching its end, as only a couple of chapters remain in it. But again, i appreciate all of your good feedback rather than rude comments as some online jerks do. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to PM me about it, thanks.
Just letting all of you know, It might be a little while for the final chaoter to come out for this story, as i'm busy with life and all that jazz. If ANY of you see any issues that seem major or need editing, let me know.
Where's starlight? And did she become his official sister yet?
3771182 Why does it say Chapter 48 on your comment? I haven't even got up to that point? But...ah well....well anyways, for your question.....just be patient. I've been busy while writing this story, so it might take some time, but she'll reappear eventually.
So far I have only finished the first 9 chapters, but based on what I have read I am assuming that this is not a Vinyl X Octavia fanfic. I wish for confirmation on this fact.
4979740 Not a Vinyl x Octavia ship, no sir.