A path of a Princess ruling a nation comes with many great challenges that almost seem to coincide with their rule, but in an unfortunate way for this one however. Princess Luna reflects and looks back on troubling memories she has continued to have ever since she was cleansed. She considers all of the things that followed up to her betrayal of her one and only sister. Princess Celestia's love for her sister was like a vast ocean for Luna, and she knew she seemed a bit troubled by those things. She wanted to do whatever she could to make her sister happy.
Chapters (2)
Luna wasn't "reformed", she was cleansed of a possession. Study more comic series!
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Added to read later. Hope it isn't too overstuffed with head-canon.
It's fine bro, and i respect your comment, but i haven't read the comics on her becoming Nightmare Moon and such. But yeah i think i'll change reformed to "cleansed", lol.
Atleast unlike your comment, other people would bash and be all "Why would you say something like that? Reformed? Really man, read the comics kid." ..........something like that, you're certainly more light mannerd than they are
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Had to become detached when at least 90% of the stories on this site annoy the hell out of me.
Anyway, I will give it a read now.
EDIT:
Finished reading.
There's a few sentences that are awkward or make no sense. The grammar is not horrible.
You made the rookie mistake when using Luna's Middle Equish Language.
You - Thou | Your - Thine | You're (You are) - Thou art
The story is nice, I can tell it was heavily inspired by the two animations...
Luna gets her cutie mark and the preview where Celestia fights Sombra...
Yeah most people tend to make that rookies mistake as you said it, i also made mistakes probably because she's not one of my tops favs, but hey, i give everything a try man. But i appreciate this stuff, and i'll do some polishing on it whenever i get over this sickness....bleh.