• Member Since 8th Aug, 2013
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gwg


brony from massachusetts. intellectual. willing to edit for writers and may write my own.

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The troublesome trio finally have their cutie marks after five years of searching. Five years have past since then and only one of them has found success in her career. Scootaloo, self made stuntmare, and Sweetie Belle, aspiring singer, have yet to make much headway in their careers. Will the love for each other be the inspiration they need to achieve their dreams?

For more of this universe, read The Apple Ran Away With The Spoon.

My first fic and my entry in the Scootabelle Writing Contest 1

I wanna thank Wolfie 03 for pre-reading this for me; it would have turned out worse than it is now. I also want to thank her for the cover art. Let's add drawing to the list of things I can't do.

If you don't like my story please tell me why in the comments below. For those that do like it please upvote and favorite so that I might have more confidence to continue writing.
Rated teen just as precaution. Sex tag also added to be safe.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 35 )
gwg

3456994 I will try to have the next chapter within a week's time, don't you worry.

3456997 Good since we have a Twidash stort as well

gwg

3457026 there is a bit more twidash in an upcoming chapter, though it is not the next one I'm afraid.

gwg

3457297 tell you what: if this does well enough, I may decide to flesh out the Twidash into its own fic. Does that make you feel better?

So far it's great! There's a few areas that could use a few minor tweaks, like the progression, it seems a little rushed, slow it down a bit and let things flow naturally. Really great work, I can't wait to see what comes next!

gwg

3458132 if you would care to elaborate I would find it most helpful.

I like the explanation for how to actually pull off a Sonic Rainboom, it would fit rather well for how Dash can do it in certain circumstances and not just to show off (even if I don't like TwiDash as much as FlutterDash, still well done). :pinkiehappy:

gwg

3458286 well here you go, more twidash to hopefully tide you over

Thanks again to Wolfie for editing my work. I'd be helpless without cha.

Bah, I'm pretty such most of my stories would be full of grammar errors that would send everyone running for the hills without your help :ajsmug:
I'd say we help each other equally :twilightsmile:

Sorry, only just noticed this but "Cadence" is actually "Cadance". They purposely did her name like that to be different from the musical aspect of the name :ajbemused:

I only just thought of it and noticed it :applejackunsure::pinkiehappy:

gwg

3543977 <grumble grumble>
alright it's fixed, I hope that is the only remaining issue

Its Tigger's song

gwg

3544067 I'll have to get back to you on a seal of approval.:facehoof:
have a brohoof instead.

3544077 :pinkiehappy: What? Anyways nice story. It was a fun read.

gwg

3544081 thanks, me and Wolfie worked hard on this and it's nice to see that people like it.

“And if you needed to, you could live with me while you’re working on this project.” Silver Spoon suggested with a slight blush on her face.

“Thanks for the offer, but Ah doubt that will be necessary, Spoon.” Bloom responded with a small blush of her own, much to her friends’ confusion.

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gwg

3546716 :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: i can neither confirm nor deny that you may or may not be sated with my next literary foray :trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft:

3546727 :pinkiegasp: i can neither confirm nor deny that I may or may not be interested :derpytongue2:

This looks great, I will read as soon as I finish the next chapter of mine. :raritywink:

Wow just wow. what did i just read? Something awesome and adorable, i didn't think that was possible.
What is in this story not to like? Build up was great and back story to the couple was good to, and the ending just made me (sqee) :twilightsmile:

gwg

3617279 thank you very much, you just made my day.

This was the greatest Crusader story I have ever read. You managed to make me appreciate the RariJack, which is something I am still getting used to.

That damned Pink mare stole the conclusion of this awesome story out from under the others with her funny, yet strangely in character song :pinkiecrazy:

I am saddened by the short read it took for me, but someone like me (who never finishes his stories and takes an ungodly amount of time to write) can understand the appeal of short stories.

Bravo good sir 10/10 :heart::heart::heart:

Am I crazy to want a sequel? :pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by gwg deleted Dec 18th, 2013
gwg

3643192 Finally something that resembles a rating. Ahem. You sir made my day with your comments. I would not say that you are crazy for wanting a sequel, but that may be awhile. In the near future I will be writing another story that, while not focus on the couple, will feature them in a similar fashion to Twidash or Rarijack, but they will play a more important role in that story.
2014 isn't that far away so you might not have to wait long. Again thank you for your kind words.
-GWG-

3543989
if it makes you feel any better, I accidentally spelt her name as Candence in my story:facehoof: thankfully, I fixed it

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:YAYAYAYAYYAAYYAYAYA

Macinshy and twidash (i think rainbow-light :P)

This was awesome! I adore the Scootabelle (or is it Sweetaloo?) ship! I'm glad you made Scootaloo able to fly!

Also, the song is Tigger's
:)

Wait! RariJack, ScootaBelle and TwiDash in a 19k words story?! This is gonna be guuud xD

Did this story get updated after season 5? If not then you must be a time traveler if you can put Starlight Glimmer in a fanfiction that was made in 2013 xD

gwg

7578173 ah so someone noticed.

Yes I updated this story some time ago to coincide with some ideas in regards to the sort-of-sequel. Before it was just the tree library.

Thanks for reading.

-GWG-

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