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Nightlock106


I enjoy spending my free time jotting down ideas for new stories, though most of them either go into the trash bin or are left unfinished. Nonetheless, I hope you all enjoy the works that I publish.

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Today is Vinyl and Octavia's first date. They don't really plan too much, just dinner and a movie. But for both of them, it is the most magical night of their lives.

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Just one suggestion... space out the paragraphs a bit. It's kind of hard to read the story when it looks like a wall of text.

I liked it, though. I'm a big OctaScratch fan. Keep up the good work!

Kawai! And that's all I have to say.

MAKE IT LONGER... PUT CLOP IN IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED MOAR!!!:derpyderp1:

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... If you can:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

5107358 I'm taking a break from clop for a little bit so I can focus on other stories. But fear not, there will be more OctaScratch clop on the way shortly.
5107761 In due time my dear reader, I will write more.

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:D hooray!:pinkiehappy:
You shall get a fluttershy :yay:

I needed to take a chill pill, and I needed to take it now.

Once this has been read in a Max Payne voice, it can never be unread.

Comment posted by SkylaDash deleted Dec 27th, 2014
Comment posted by Nightlock106 deleted Dec 27th, 2014

I like how they met online in this fic. It just seems like it makes sense.

Keep writing amazing fanfic's where-ever you are

Cipher Splash

Aww, I love OctaScratch fics, nice job.

Ugh. I really don't like giving stories a thumbs down. It breaks my heart and I feel as though I'm saying the author isn't good enough but that isn't it all, what I mean to say is there is room for improvement and the author should strive for it. Because this story is good but it's rushed and the author could've done a switch in POV's to show what each character thinks of the other. Maybe some stolen glances through out the movie bit, or maybe each character in the movies has the same ideals as the characters for their significant other!

Like, Vinyl wants a mare like Octavia so maybe when the movie starts vinyl says, "I like the chick with the crazy hair, she seems chill." And that character points out how the pony she is currently stuck with matches her romantic ideals and as this character talks about it Vinyl sneaks a glance at Octavia envisioning a future where Octavia is teaching her how to cook! You know?
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No?
Just me? Okay. Anyway...I'm gonna go now.

Best of luck in all of your endeavors!
With lots of Pony Love - The Wandering Mare.

Also, feel free to use my idea.

The Fluff is strong with this one. It was more saccharine than one of Pinkie's cupcakes!

That being said, not a bad little dose of feel-good. Not bad at all.

The floors were mahogany

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