Vinyl's finally worked up the courage to tell Octavia how she feels. When she hands the gray mare a brand-new, homemade disc, what's on the last recording?
This is a Romance Request Writing as requested by Tarascha
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A nice, sweet, short story. I like it. You did good
This is so sweet! Vinyl is more than what others see.
I love how the roles were switched between vinyl and octavia
5243539 I did that to try and show that they both loved eachother, did it work?
it worked great and glad your back
5244988 Thanks!
I'm glad to be back
Definitely an excellent take on the theme of Octavia and Vinyl getting together. I like that you had specific music picked out, through embedding the song links within the story would be a good courtesy to the reader so that they know what to play and when. A little more elaboration on Octavia's part during each section would be nice as well, as that way the reader could better follow along with the character as she/they listen to the piece play. That could be a nice opportunity to insert some flashback(s) to her and Vinyl's relationship earlier, though given the length of the latter two pieces you might have your work cut out for you.
Still, either way, was a good take on the idea.
5246460 Thank you for the ideas! I'll keep them in mind when writing my next request
D'aww! That was adorable!
5257463 Why thank you, kind sir
if this is how vinyl asks her out on a date I wonder what she would pull off for a proposal?
5298271 I wonder
, but I don't think I'll write it 
Writers' Block is ruining my life right now!
Great story
5303367 Why thank you!
Oh my Celestia we're crying... Not only because we play the Violin but also because of how attached Miss Scratch was to Lady Melody...
5306655 I didn't realize anyone could like my stories that much
Thank you so much!
5306666
Thou is very welcome. May we accompany you in a little bit of a more... private area? (Private Messaging)
5306673 I suppose?
5306683
Excellent!! *Claps hooves together*
Classic setup for a romantic gesture. Excellent story.
*its
Nice bit of fluff. I noticed one typo at the end.
Very well written the only huge typo I saw was at the end all in all wonderfully written amazingly well paced and it all fits together perfectly.I would say this is one of the best stories i have recently read. It is on my list for best I have read on this sight just behind Never Forget Me and Love is Blind. Keep up the good writing and don't let anyone discourage you for they have no right to judge you until they have judged themselves and even then they are not you and don't know how you think.
sincerely
DJ Bass Breaker
(General Lunar Spartans)
5366440 Awwww
Thank you!
Yay! Awesome story!