This story is a sequel to Country Gems
Apple Bloom finds out that something has been going on between Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo, and it ends up causing major changes in their relationship.
Chapters (5)
- Member Since 10th Dec, 2013
- offline last seen Sep 25th, 2017
Nightlock106
I enjoy spending my free time jotting down ideas for new stories, though most of them either go into the trash bin or are left unfinished. Nonetheless, I hope you all enjoy the works that I publish.
Nightlock106
Joined 10th Dec, 2013 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Nightlock106 · 8.6k words · 64 8 · 2.2k views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.088 seconds
Total duration
900 users online
1,354,982 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Hmmm... Liking it so far. Please continue good sir.
well that escalated quickly. even for young ponies dealing with hormones and new and confusing emotions, that escalated really quickly.
seriously, things are moving way to fast. i know i'm kind of a stickler for details, but we aren't getting any depth to the story here. if we're looking at this from Appleblooms point of view, then we should be hearing her thoughts the entire way. when she went to the bathroom, it's obvious that she came up with the 'see other ponies' idea in there, so we should be there for the entire thought process of how she came up with it. there's actually a really good story that perfectly shows what i'm talking about. The Demesne of the Reluctant Twilight Sparkle. it's all from twilight's point of view, and we're with her every step of the way through her trying times.
see, why couldn't they have dealt with AB like fluttershy did? she was much calmer about the whole thing.
Poor Applebloom.
i like it and since this sequel is marked as complete now shouldn't not say to be To Be Continued at end of this chapter for this sequel
5279175 Oh trust me...I'm not done with this yet. Not by a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG shot.
5279186 ok
5279190 Keep your eyes open. You'll never know what's coming next.
5279195 i will
if i was scootaloo, i don't think i would be willing to date sweetie belle anyway. if she can cheat on someone like applebloom, then what's to stop her from doing it again?
Burn life's house down with a combustible lemon.
Keep writing amazing fanfic's where-ever you are
Cipher Splash
it's sucks tht Sweetie belle was cheating on Apple Bloom................
..................please 
APPLE BLOOM don't worry there's always a certain filly who wears a tiara....*cough* Diamond Tiara *cough*
ME WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That went nuts so fast I had to read it twice