You’re heading over to Sweet Apple Acres to pick up Moonie. She got invited to play with the Cutie Mark Crusaders and you’re expecting to walk up to their tree house to see it set alight or dark, evil symbols everywhere of some old cult devoted to her former self or to see her sacrificing one of the girls. Moonie is a great kid and she’s doing well in reforming but she has her... moments.
You knock on the door and Big Mac answers.
“Hey Big Mac, Moonie ready?”
“Nope. She’s upstairs.”
That's probably the most you've ever heard from him. You say thanks before heading upstairs. It's not hard to guess which room; the giggling is a pretty clear sign of which door they’re behind. You open the door a little to check if Moonie is behaving well with the girls. Surprisingly, they’re all sitting in a circle talking.
“Nightmare, truth or dare?” No doubt she made them call her Nightmare and not Moonie.
“Dare. The Princess of the Night can take any challenge you throw at her.”
The girls talk amongst themselves in a huddle for a brief moment before returning back to their spots with devilish grins on their faces.
“Ah dare ya, to call Anon your ‘Daddy’.”
Moonie goes the brightest shade of red and stutters to get out an answer. The other girls go into a giggling fit. “I will do no such thing! Anonymous is my servant and will be addressed as such.”
“You’ve got to Nightmare, it’s the rules,” Sweetie Belle adds.
“Yeah or are you chicken?” Scootaloo mocks after making a few chicken clucks.
Moonie gives Scootaloo a glare while they go back into a giggling fit. Moonie’s blush goes turns a brighter shade of red, probably from anger. You give a knock before opening the door the rest of the way. Moonie freezes, probably afraid you might have heard the dare she’s been given. You know she’s not one to back away from a challenge but she’s not fond of showing emotion either, especially around others so, you play innocent.
“Ready to go Moonie?”
“I-uh-Yes.”
“Good, let’s go then. I’ve got to get dinner ready.”
“Okay *mumble*.”
You know what she said but you’re not going to let her get away with it. “What was that?”
She responds with a confused look. You can see how nervous she really is. “NOTHING! Let’s go, your Queen is tired.”
You give a grin, seems she can’t do it after all.
After dinner and a few games you tuck Moonie into bed then read her favourite bedtime story, ‘Goodnight Moon.’ She falls asleep before you finish, so you give her a kiss on the forehead before quietly leaving. As you slowly close the door, you hear Moonie talk in her sleep.
”Goodnight, Daddy.”
Like ending.
I'd bitch on about this story needing bigger or longer more engaging issues... But hey, 4chan. I'm surprised the English language is being used correctly.
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If it goes through me first, I'm not going to let it have horrible grammar. He hasn't shown me all of the parts of his story, but I've seen plenty.
Ded.
I think I just had a heartattac.
How cute!
You my good sir are talented at making people's hearts melt, I applaud you
FUCKING ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!
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LIK DIS IF YOU CRY EVERTIM
This is a perfect example of how less can seem like more. He didn't go into any real detail and bog the story down, just a simple statement and off we go to the feels.
I commend you sir, you understand this more than myself.
Bruh da feels
Aww... ^_^
Never has the personification of evil been this freaking adorable
D'awww....
>“Ah dare ya, to call Anon your ‘Daddy’.”
It gave me diabetes.
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!
FUCK THIS STORY AND ITS CUTENESS! ITS GIVING ME HEART ATTACKS AND DIATBETES FROM IT WHYY! WHY MUST THIS BE SO CUTE!!!!!??????
HHHNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!
SO CUTE!
*SQUEE*
But why was it so short? It-it has so much potential. Just think of the evil cuteness nightmare could have partaken in during dinner by refusing to eat her food in a fit of rebellion. And don't get me started about bath time.
NEEDS MORE D'awwww moments.
But still really cute. This warned my heart greatly.
HHHHHNNNNNGGGGHHHHH!!!
*Dead*
HGG! HELP ME! GET ME HEALING POTIONS NOW! aww crud.
*Dies from heart attack.*
okay it can be to short.
*Sees comments*
Pfft... this isn't that cu-
GACK! *drops to floor*
Daaaaawww! :D
"Goodnight Daddy!"
It's so precious! :)
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Yeah this seems a bit fast paced and I’m not really sure that I like it.