Moonie shorts [Filly Nightmare Moon]

by Eighth

3 It's quiet, too quiet.

You've realised that it's been quiet for a while. That's too suspicious. You get up and go check on Moonie to see her drawing with crayons peacefully. You watch her for a moment before she notices you.

"How DARE you spy on the Princess of the Night? Off with your head!"

"Moonie, what did I tell you about threats? Anyway, what're you drawing?"

"Stay back. These are my secretest plans. Not for your eyes."

You roll your eyes and go find something else to do.

You're making dinner when you feel a tug on your pants leg. Looking down, you notice Moonie holding a card out to you so you take it and read it.

'To my number one servant.'

There is even a childish drawing of you two atop a castle.

"I just thought... you deserved a thank you... Don't forget your place, servant!"

You pick her up in a hug that she slowly returns.

Comments

[Shit just Goat serious]

ISHYGDDT

[The Watcher 509]

Needs rape and foalcon

[BumbleFlow]

*mind has been fudged* Well, let's put it this way... Hmm.. Well, the whole "Anon" and "you" along with the human thing is all too confusing. Although it's cute, the time period isn't quite right, but I still like it. So, please do so continue.

~Flow

[KittyLover5]

I feel like this is copying past sins for some reason.

This comment May make ppl mad.

Whatever

[Kirb]

4509921 Weird. Your comment is on chapter 0. How is that happening? O_o

[KittyLover5]

4513521 the story perspective is in the eyes of you.and your name is anon. Doesn't really exp plan that

[sockmarionette]

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Jesus Christ, shut up. No one care about your opinions. Stop talking like you know what's going on. I doubt you've ever been in an AiE thread.

[KittyLover5]

4513640 I don't caaaaaare

[Bin pony]

4511097

Shut up faggot.

Every nod Twilight gives, I smack that upboat button o' yours.
i.imgur.com/bH7qu7A.gif

[whatmustido]

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Rat commented, then 8th removed all the chapters he had before it got approved. For some reason, that put her comment at chapter 0.

[RedvsBlue327]

4513498 Google can deliver

[StarChaser01]

The cover image reminds me of Annie from LoL

[Chewed Pencil]

4511012 I have this distinct feeling that you are trolling the shit outta us...

[CreepypastaReader]

Nice story!!

[Corneredbadger]

4513521 its second person perspective. its a really uncommon writing style outside of fics and self help books.

[BumbleFlow]

Ah. That makes sense.

~Flow

[ParadigmShift]

GRHHHRHHH!

AGGHHHH!

GRAAAHHH!!

HER-HER PLAN! ALL ALONG!

AAAUUUUGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!

*HEART EXPLODES FROM CUTE OVERDOSE*

[G-AB Acid]

4511012 You forgot about allowing Rainbow Dash to come inside.

[ForlanceAbice]

4511012 You think this is bad?
Try going back to the times when meta stories were still allowed here.

[Apple Banana]

Hmmm...Oh hey, did you hear that? It sounded like a nuclear explosion. Probably just my heart.

[Epic Brony 4 Life]

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[Epic Brony 4 Life]

Warning...Warning: Critical cuteness meltdown imminent. *Sirens start up*

[onlyanorthernsong]

this is relevant to interests.

[Sean66067]

There is no such feeling as when your child draws a picture of you as a gift. This made me cry because my daughter did the same thing when she fist learned to do it.

[Noble Savage]

SO ADORABLE!!!

[Bones_]

4516940 Agreed

[PrincessLunaTheGamer]

4517718 First*

[Wacuire]

Awwww... ^_^ *doesn't care about the fact that this comment is pretty much a copy of my previous one*

[WorldWalker128]

That title name I read in Peppy Hare's voice.

[WorldWalker128]

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Depends on the Anon that goes to Equestria. This one doesn't seem to be from the /mlp pony thread simulators. Though if he was he'd probably be more interested in cumming inside Rainbow Dash, or hiding from Sluttershy.

[mlprules537]

IT'S SO CUTE, IT'S SO CUTE, IT'S SO CUTE, IT'S SO CUTE, IT'S SO CUTE, IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CCCUUUTTTEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[SkittleQueen]

STAHP! MY MIND IS FORCED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! WHYYY THE CUTENESS!

[Vinyl-ScratchDJ17]

OMFG IM SATAN! I was the 666th upvote!

[Mortefleur]

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666/616 isn't Satan, it's the number of the Beast

[thedarkitty]

Short chapter is short. Needs longer pacing. AND MORE D'AWWWW MOMENTS!!

[draco the flamewing]

4513498 *revives from the dead*
YOU ARE SICK!
*slaps you until you die infinite times*

[Dustchu]

Hehehehe, awww.... cuteness.

[XerainTheBountyHunter]

*lies on the ground gasping for breath*
Too...
Cute...

[Gear_change]

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I doth think he be jking(just kidding)

[kitsune_shadow]

tsundere nigthmare moon ?