1 Minions or Friends?
“Are yah sure about this?” Applejack asks, her uneasiness clear in her tone.
“They can be quite the handful,” Rarity adds.
“I’ll be fine now go, you’ll miss your train otherwise,” you reply.
“Alright, we’ll just say goodbye to the girls real quick.”
Rarity and Applejack go to say goodbye to their sisters before they have to head off to the Crystal Empire. Apparently, they have some urgent business up there and can’t take the girls with them, so you agreed to look after them while they were gone for the day. You even invited Scootaloo to come hang out with them. Those three are inseparable and mostly take care of themselves, so your main concern is the evil little filly watching from the window with a sinister grin. That look is putting you on edge a little. She gets along with the girls alright, but she’s not fond of letting anyone come around to the house. Yet when you told her they’d be visiting, she didn’t put up a fight. You know her too well to think she’s just being friendly; she has to be up to something.
“Bye Anon.” You look up from your train of thought as Applejack calls out to you.
“Bye. Say hi to Cadence and Shining for me,” you shout back. You wave to them as they leave and the three girls walk up to you.
“Howdy Anon, thanks for lookin’ after us,” Applebloom calls out.
“No problem. Moonie is just inside.”
You show them inside and when you step in, you look around for Moonie. She’s nowhere in sight and it’s eerily quiet.
“Hey Anon, where’s Moon?” Sweetie Belle questions as she wanders around the room.
“In her room, probably—”
“Greetings Scootaloo, Applebloom, and Sweetie Belle.” Moonie steps into the room with a cheerful and charming tone, which only further increases your suspicions.
“Hiya Moon, did you wanna play?”
“Of course, I have some stuff in my room we can use.”
You give her a puzzled look as she leads them into her room. She doesn’t even like you going in that room half the time. Something is definitely up. You wait a few minutes before walking up the hallway to her room. As you get closer, you hear chanting and the steady beating of a drum few seconds. You gently lean on the door and peek in through the gap to see Moonie sitting on a kitchen table adorned with tin foil like it’s a throne.
Scootaloo is beating on a drum while wearing the same dark-hooded cloak as Sweetie Belle and Applebloom.
“Oh great Queen of the Night, what is your bidding?” Applebloom chants in a monotone voice.
“Your queen desires—”
You can’t let this continue so you open the door and stand there, cross armed with a stern look.
“Oh, Anon. What’s the matter?”
Moonie gives you a relaxed look, acting like this is all innocent and there's not evil context anywhere but you know better.
"What is all this?” you ask.
“A game,” Sweetie Belle squeaks.
You’ll think about how cute that is after you’ve put a stop to Moonie’s tyranny. Wait.
“A game?”
“Yeah, we were playing cults and templars,” Scootaloo announces.
“What kind of game is that?”
“It’s like cops and robbers, but with magic.”
“And who are the templars?” They all pause in thought, like they have suddenly realised what their game was missing.
“Anon,” Moonie jumps from her throne and looks up to you with big pleading eyes, “Can we go to the park, please?”
They all huddle up with the same look. Pouting lips with a slight quiver, bulging eyes that pierce your heart like a spear and they all say in unison, “Please?”
Before your heart overdoses on the cute, you raise your hands to admit defeat. “Okay, okay, we’ll go.”
The three proudly cheer and rush to the door. When you get to the lounge room, you notice Moonie laying out flat and the girls are nowhere in sight. Time for some teasing.
“I’m happy you’ve made some friends.”
“What? They aren’t my friends, just minions who have submitted to my will.”
“Oh, really?” you look off the distance and scratch your head, “I was thinking about inviting them over again soon, but if they aren’t your friends...”
You look in the corner of your eye to see her flinching, you can tell she’s thinking of how to get you to let them over without admitting anything. After letting her struggle for a few seconds, you walk to the door with a grin.
“I knew it. I’ll invite your friends over again when Rarity and Applejack get back.”
“I-I told you, they are minions and I am their Queen, no more.”
You say nothing more as you think about how proud you are. Moonie has friends, which is something you never thought to see.
---Some random amount of time later---
It's been quite draining looking after the CMC and you decide to finish off the day by taking them to the park with Moonie. They're playing some game that you aren't even paying attention to. You drift off for a few moments and are woken by Applejack and Rarity.
“Howdy Anon, the girls been behaving alright?" Applejack shouts from halfway across the park as she and Rarity.
“Yeah, no problems."
“Girls, it's time to go. Thank you again dear for looking after them today, I apologise if they've been a hoof full," Rarity exclaims with a hesitant expression.
You can tell the two are really worried, though you're not sure why though. The only one who was close to being a handful was Moonie, considering she was a few steps away from using Applebloom as the vessel for some god of evil.
“It's no problem, really. They get along with Moonie, so I'm happy to."
You wave as they head home before turning to Moonie, who is now laying down on the grass, spread out from exhaustion. You give a laugh before standing up. “Come on, let's go."
“Your Queen needs a moment’s rest."
“Moonie, we've been here all day, it's time to go home." She just looks up at you in silence with pleading eyes. You roll your eyes and lift her up into your arms. “Anon the Human, at your service, your majesty."
She giggles and shifts into a more comfortable position in your arms. “Onward."
It's a long walk home and Moonie takes a nap in your arms along the way. You look down at her sleeping face; she remains still apart from the rise and fall of her chest and her hair that never stops moving cascades over her face. She shouldn't be this cute.
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I don't like this story at all. This story is obviously an attempt at flooding FimFic the first of many stories featuring green slenderman. I can't stand your 4channel memes, and refuse to give you any upboats. Truly this story is disgusting. Not once have I seen a story so polluted by the much rumored and feared Pony Illumination or whatever they call themselves these days. Everyday I see such classics as "Flowers for my valentine: A Fluffle Puff Chrysalis Fanifc" by Brony117 violated by their terrible "fun" commenting. I only wish to read stories about horses touching each-other's vaginas without all these 9gag guys ruining everything.
Help me, fellow FimFicirians to stop this onslaught of epic trolling.
[downvoting intensifies]
90000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001/10 le upboating XD.
4511012
Shut up faggot.
4511012
>doesn't like 4chan le maymays
>uses one to end his post
Steg pls go
4511012 Dick.
4511012
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4511012 Ahem...Irrelevant Username, you are a complete dick (which is an understatement) and shouldn't post comments like this. Not only are you slandering this authors and others like him/her, but you are basically calling all the people who like this story and who think it is cute idiots. Not only that, but you wish to read stories about horses touching each others vaginas and think that "9gag gays shouldn't ruin it. That is stupid in itself, so you want to read stories about homosexuality but you don't want gays messing it up? Just by posting a comment like yours, I imagine you as a fat do-nothing (I am not saying that all fat people do nothing because some work very hard to get in shape) that stares at their computer all day reading stories about leabian horses having sex, does that sound weird to anyone else? Also, know that the name of this website is FIMFiction and FIM stands for Friendship is Magic, I don't think you should be being a dick to everyone if you ever want to make friends.and last thing, have you written any fanfics? Because if so, you should know that sick critics like you hurt and just because someone posted a mean comment on one of your soroes doesn't mean you shoul do the same to someone else. So in conclusion, I have four words for you quoted from the PonySwag Megamix (those who haven't listened to it, you should, it is amazing), so yeah back those four words, love and tolerate BITCH!
Y'all are replying to a troll.
>>IrrelevantUsername
You are such a perverted dick
Um, mind-controlling/enslaving peers?
...Last time I checked, that's not friendship, dude. And not something to be proud of.
4511012
Wow, you're so clever and witty.
Plz shut up, faggot.
4520741
You're silly. He's totes trolling our good buddy 8th because he is jealous of his god-tier sexyvoice and writing prowess. So much sexy. So much...
This story has a ten out of ten for me. Why? Because it's best pony, that's why.
4511012 I don't get why so many people are giving you a hard time about your comment. Seriously, I had a good chuckle when I read it, which is what it was supposed to do in the first place, not like anyone paid any attention when reading it... I for one applaud your attempts at humorous trolling. Good on you, for not being an ass when attempting to be a troll for shits 'n giggles.
>“Moonie, we've been here all day, it's time to go home." She just looks up at you in silence with pleading eyes. You roll your eyes and lift her up into your arms. “Anon the Human, at your service, your majesty."
>She giggles and shifts into a more comfortable position in your arms. “Onward."
>It's a long walk home and Moonie takes a nap in your arms along the way. You look down at her sleeping face; she remains still apart from the rise and fall of her chest and her hair that never stops moving cascades over her face. She shouldn't be this cute.
That gave me diabetes. I love it.
4511012
Someone call the Billygoats, boys! We've got a Troll up on this bridge!
6282140
Wait... Were we supposed to downvote the comment? Or the fic?
...comment I guess because it has so many...yeah...sure lets go with that!
4511012
My good sir, If you could please be quiet and keep your rude comments to yourself, that would be much appreciated. In other words,
SHUT UP UNLESS YOU WANT ME TO UNLEASH THE PINKIE PIE HORROR ONTO YOU
AWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That last bit is SOOOOOOO adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THE CUTENESS!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4511012 Hmm, seems to be you haven't written a thing, so you are you to say this fic is bad? You're probably just jealous. This story is wonderful to all who appreciate reading for the fun of it, not by some low down standards you must have, whatever they may be. I don't really care actually. And before you try to throw the whole "haven't written a thing" comment back at me, I have 35 stories. Yes a good portion of them may suck, but like everyone else here, nobody gives a crap what you haters have to say. I've met worse folk than you, so that's at least a small good start for you, but you wasted your time typing something nobody will care about. I can understand you don't like the story, but you don't have to go full on hater, alright? and nobody will help you with your "onslaught"
6614009 I believe the proper term is...
*Clears throat and promptly grabs chest*
HNNNNNNGGGGGG!!!
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4520741
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Does Moony have a child's mind, or just body?
First of all, good start to what will no doubt be a very good story. The only thing I didn't like was the fact you time lapsed through the park scene and deprived us of even more extreme filly cuteness. I'm usually not a big fan of the second person perpective but I give this a 6/10. (Your character needs a bit more interaction with the ponies) but these are just nitpicks.
Now onto my second point
4511012 you are a dick. Plain and simple. Your comment was only there to bait people into hating a good story. I usually don't outright slander people based on their works or comments. (This is actually the first time I've responded to a comment like this) but quite honestly you deserve it. It's comments like these that can destroy the confidence of an aspiring author (I myself nearly quit this fandom because of people like you needlessly degrading good stories. People like you are what's wrong with this community) thankfully the author of this story didn't take your shit so the rest of us can enjoy his work. I say again. YOU ARE A COMPLETE DICK FOR YOUR COMMENT!
To the athour of this story. I'm glad you wrote this story. I am completely sure it will be nothing short of awesome. (And I've just read the first chapter) keep up the good work!
4511012 Well.......I guess for what i have to say with this comment is-you know what, i'll let Draco handle this one. DRACO!
Yes?
Take a look at this.
*Reads the comment*
...You...really...just...done that......I can't believe you, but i can say this one.
*Takes a deep breath*
YOU ARE THE MOST DISGUSTING PONY I EVER SEEN EVER! YOU HAVE NOT ONLY MADE THE RANK OF BEING HIGHER THAN BROAD SWORD (someone from another story i won't list) OR EVEN THE MOST EVIL MONSTROUS PONY I WILL GLADLY HUNT DOWN AND MURDER OVER AND OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN!!! Draco the vengeful flame has started the hunt, and it will end with your death from dying 10 times by MY hand. AND I WILL NOT LIE ABOUT THAT, YOU DEATHS WILL BE SLOW AND PAINFUL FOR THE FULLEST OF ALL THAT WANTS YOUR HEAD ON A PIKE TO THEIR FULLEST ENJOYMENT!!!
4511012 I'm not even going to bother ranting at you, the rest of the comments did that for me. But 2 questions. Firstly, how much of this comment was intended to provoke outrage? Secondly, you do know these stories have ratings right? If you only like mature fic, its spelled out which fics are for you.
Cute start to this, hehehe, love it!
4511012
DON'T WORRY PEOPLE... I have a boat that flies, therefore...
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You're welcome.
7304443 Here's a recommendation, STFU and calm down!
What time is it? Time to binge read!
Oh, and
4511012
You're the person who gives this fandom a bad name.
But seriously guys, he posted that comment 127 weeks ago, I think he has had enough.
Oh. My. GOSH!! This is exactly the sort of adorable I've been looking for. More please.
4511097 i wonder how many of those upvotes are because of the second half of your comment.
7831389
All of them.
4511012
Dude, it's a free site. He can write what he wants to write, and you don't have to read what you don't like. For all you know, this is his first attempt at writing. Simply put, leave constructive criticism (I.E. Grammar, spelling, and sentence structure advice) or GTFO and ignore these kinds of stories.
Haha! This day just got better; a ridiculously long reading project to work on! Oorah!
4511012
Hm, haters gonna hate.
*Unleashing savage demonic mode from my story*
If that’s what you want to read, wrong site, you f***ing female dog.
Writer writes whatever the **** they want, Okay? I write terrible stories too and I DONT CARE. AND NEITHER DOES THIS WRITER OF THIS STORY CARE ABOUT HATERS LIKE YOU. Why would you hate this, it’s adorable and the majority loves it so f*** off, go to hell, and find someone like Logan Paul to hate on.
Oh wait, I get it. You’re a discouragement to the writers. Pfft, what a d*ck you really are. You say this story is disgusting? No. It’s a story filled with fun, passion and of course cute, which many appreciate.
The story isn’t disgusting. YOU are. 😡
8988709
*breaths heavily*
Now. Let me say the one word I would use to describe this: Adorable. Absolutely, cute.😍 I have a long way to catch up, but I might hop on and check out the chapters when I’m bored, Kay? I love the idea of having many short stories in one big story. I’ve wanted to do that for a long time but I couldn’t do it without it being weird.😂
4511012
Heh. Green Slenderman. That sounds hilariously awesome.
8988709
I think that you severely misjudged the comment. It wasn't meant to be taken seriously. Like...at all.
8051891
So many people, so little humor. The comment was obviously facetious. I mean, go back and reread it, and then tell me that its a 'serious' comment. I think that you'll find that it wasn't
8988713
Again, just in case you didn't get the memo the first time: sarcastic comment was sarcastic, and the King is disappointed that he has to be the one to point this out.
8755011
I'm pretty sure that the comment in question was SARCASTIC, and that it was supposed to be FUNNY. It isn't their fault that people don't get sarcasm.
7831389
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
7727933
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
7636964
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
7636790
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
7388802
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
7304443
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
7086620
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
6900424
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!
6858440
I wonder how many times I'm going to have to go down the line saying something that should be painfully obvious! The comment in question was probably supposed to be facetious, meaning not to be taken seriously, and was an honest attempt at humor!