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Calm Wind
We writers do not speak. We do not hear. We have no songs. We have no pictures. We only have scripture. From words we bring images. From words we bring emotion. From words we bring life.
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You magnificent bastard!
You forgets many commas
I wish for a follow up chapter where Fluttershy repeatedly breaks Rarity's mind with all the information on what happened.
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oh jeez, i'll try to fix it
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i couldn't stop it
I will say, this one did feel more romantic and endearing. With the Soarindash one I think it worked for that story because there was SO much build up and SO much teasing of it. When they actually did it in that story it felt like a huge release....screw it pun intended, and it was incredibly satisfying because it was just out of the blue. That is unless you didn't read the story that prefaced it, but that would be just wrong!
This one matched very well with it's source material as well. Very little spoken during the scene, which works here given the characters. Also it was nice that it didn't have to go through a Fluttershy panic attack to get there. This one didn't have the huge payoff feeling the other one did, but really it didn't need it. This one kinda felt like two awkward teens getting together for the first time. I say that as a positive as it matched the romance they had.
Anyway, this has been possibly the longest comment I have ever posted on here. However, I finally found myself reading on my comp and not my phone so I can actually say something! Yay!
Keep up the great work CW, can't wait for the next main story-line fic!
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Thank you very much!
That was exactly the feeling i was going for. These two are certainly not the wild ponies Soarin and Dash are
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That would be just cruel hahaha
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And HILARIOUS!
Just imagine her mind breaking at Big Mac being a Virgin, how big he was, and the fact he had no problem with not finishing.
so we have a story with Fluttershy x Big mac, Soarin x Rainbow, Pinkie x Braeburn, applejack x thunderlane(didn't read it, prefer applejack/caramel), still waiting on one for twilight and rarity
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i now have the urge to torture Rarity more with lack of sex in later stories
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Then my Work here is done.
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Actually, the two of them are not going to be shipped. As part of my ongoing storyline, i didn't want to get redundant and have all of them find romance.
I...um... also am a little embarrassed because i'm admittedly not very good at writing their characters. Glamour girl and nerdy girl are two personalities i struggle with.
4427469 ah man, and i wanted to see sparity and flashlight
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Don't you ever stop! Things can only get better from here. This is only the entrance exam.
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while i'm a fan of both those ships, i probably wouldn't have used them as the love interests had i done it.
It's for reasons that will be clear later
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*snicker* flashlight *snicker*
If your taking request for stories, I have a couple, mainly based off the same story lol. First, LittlepipxBlackjack from Fallout Equestria. If you haven't read it. READ IT (BTW it's DJPegasus)
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Oh, new name
Requests huh, I never thought about doing that. I actually have never read anything fallout equestrian related, although I am familiar with its popularity
O_O wtfffff!?! I asked for a sequel b-b-b-but no like this! XD still good story with the rarity acting!
My range of emotions and thoughts from beginning to end.
Description (before read): XD XD oh my god yes! We get chapter 19 all over again!
Beginning: he he he, quiet blunt there are we Rarity? *raises eyebrow*
Gets Fluttershy to ponder sex: Omg. Rarity stop pressuring the poor mare. She's just so innocent and small and cute. This a crime. :(
Before and during barn (before sex): *le sighs* omg there considering this... *hacehoofs while chuckling*
During sex: ... somehow this is better than I thought let's see how it goes...
After and end: hmmm that was pretty satisfying. Enjoyed it. *nods head in conformation*
Great work. I guess part of the reaction was going back to Dash and Soarin, but after reading through the comments it makes more sense and makes it more enjoyable as a whole. Great work. Can't wait for another fic. Let's see if this rises as fast as Ch 19...
4427968 Want me. Send a link? It's a REALLY long story
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go ahead, i'll see if i can get around to it at some point
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Haha i'm glad you still liked it
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i felt the need to prove i could write sex without being so wild with it
These two, after all, are very gentle and reserved in my universe, so the sex takes on a much different form.
i tried to double the "reserved" feeling by never once directly referring to man or lady parts involved. I like how it turned out and don't feel nearly as dirty as i did with the first
4428243 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/119190/fallout-equestria
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oh yeah thats long
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thanks for reading and commenting
The main reason i went with this was to see just how much i could contrast my other sex story, which was EXTREMELY rough and heated.
I really wanted to have the other side of sex show forward here
4428454 *cough* *cough* that's what she said *cough* *cough*
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4427388 They certainly aren't. Although given how you sized Mac there in comparison to Flutters, I can only think of one thing for when they actually did it. OW! Also that she will definitely never be able to go down on him ever without breaking her jaw.
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The size difference is for a mixture of adorableness and lots of jokes
i love working with it
Where's Carousel Boutique located?
great story i just wish it was a bit longer hehe
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was waiting for you
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alas, it was just a small addition. I appreciate the interest though, thanks for reading!
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can't help but wonder if there was an innuendo in there...
You did it again... and I read it again
but wow that was intimate, and in a way I could enjoy thankfully
I think I appreciated this story more than the last one, the way you write fluttershy and mac is just so cute and endearing
You also did really well with your personal challenge. Partly I think avoiding naming parts directly fit in with their personalities and tied in really well to the couple's last story and made it feel a bit more relatable.
I applaud your efforts sir
and I look forward to your next main series story. (Good luck in your contest, I think you'lol do really well given your skill.
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I'm glad you liked it
And yeah... i did it again, but this time it was willingly and not forced by my unfocused brain haha.
FSH's sex addition was more my brain saying WHY DIDNT YOU DO IT?!?!?!
this one was more: sex can be a very personal and very loving experience when shared with a significant other, how can i convey that and do so without the extreme dirtiness?
I'm not too "WHAT HAVE I DONE" with this one because i really felt i was able to show the softer, more loving side of sex well. There's nothing to be ashamed of with that
...if you are wondering why I didn't comment sooner it is because I was hiding from the cover art in my closet. Dang rarity. Like what you did here. Fantastic
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I didn't feel as awkward reading it either!
Rarity
poor Rarity, I think her role as comic relief works rather well for your writing, I wouldn't even mind if you did give every one of the mane six a stallion, but if you don't this is still pretty funny for me.
How uncouth, Rarity, how uncouth...
4427475 Flashlight=yes
Sparity=no
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I was, admittedly, making a face like this,
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when i wrote the part with her jabbing the carrot towards Fluttershy.
i love using her as a gossiper or the bringer of awkward moments for all but herself.
It was hard to break out of that when i used her for a main character in Hard Pressed to Impress.
i really have nothing against her, but i tend to have lots of jokes at her expense haha
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haha the cover art is meant to be misleading
After how Rarity so "colorfully" puts it, how could Fluttershy not think that way?
He's just a gentle giant through and through
Hoo... Somehow I can't imagine Rarity being QUITE this crude about sex. Oh, I can see her having the interest all right, but she would probably be more likely to indulge in glamorous euphemisms. Especially around Fluttershy.
Otherwise, well and (by the standards of such things) tastefully done.
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Thank you
As for Rarity, i find i like to characterize her as one who immerses herself in being proper and ladylike... until something completely pushes her past the point of giving a damn.
When something really gets to her all the restraint drops, even in front of Fluttershy. It's sort of my way of giving her character because i'm admittedly not very good at working with her personality
"Like A Virgin" is the perfect theme for this.
You're damn right it's obvious.
SoarinDash was barbed wire — this was pure cottony fluff.