This story is a sequel to Apple in the Corner
No matter how hard he tries, Braeburn can’t forget the bad choices he made that forced him to leave Appleloosa… BUT FORGET THAT! There’s an emergency! Maud Pie arrives in town with SHOCKING news! Pinkie Pie needs Braeburn if she is to help her poor, over dramatic sister! It’s time for an adventure! It’s gonna ROCK! And we’ve got cupcakes! (Braeburn is doomed)
A story about enjoying life. We all have done things we regret, but the important thing is to keep on living, find what makes us happy, and more importantly, makes us smile.
Edited by: Lucky424
Featuring in chapter art by: eveyannie
Chapters (4)
can I say that Pinkie still scares me in the cover.
alright, time for me to read it.
I'll comment again after I've read it, but WHAT?! What trickery is this?
besides the bolt, wondering if I should place it in one of the couple libraries I have for my favs.
Well you got me to squee, darn it.
Now please go work on Piercing the Heavens like Pinkie said
OMG pinkie face is terrifying
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no don't worry I really didn't want to sleep tonight
The funniest bits are Maud's 'emotional' quips, even more than poor Braeburn's reactions
Talking Trees... well, you did warn us that it's gonna be crazy but that was just...wow, just wow.
And here I was expecting Braeburn to be shipped with Maud but this is just as entertaining.
omg this is hilarious with plenty of WTF moments
this story has just taken a turn for the Crazy
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Once again, well crafted. The contrast between Pinkie and Maud was fantastic.
And Pinkie breaking the fourth wall was well-executed. Eagerly awaiting the next part of Piercing the Heavens. 
Schocking?
Two mouths maybe?
Come on Brae Brae! Pony up and ask her out already! This is more painful than a whip hit my ass... yeah, that's pleasure not pain. Anyway, take her some chocolates, take her to dinner, then make some foals!
5660783 Whoopsie, I let one slip.
pie is so tasty.
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
IT’S DANGEROUS TO GO ALONE!” Pinkie yelled as Maud was suddenly standing beside her.
“Take this…”
is dat an intentional reference or did it just happen?
dem tree's encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSbYL_doQ9stnYDQgyR967shdzWGrDwr5MOJYcqp96MHOs48k8x
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That's the plan!
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Yep! i was trying to reverse the whole scene having a tree say it would like to be a pony
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After seeing this:
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I had to use the face!
is v.g. (was it explained how dash is here in piercing the heavens?)
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Maud is so much fun to write for it hurts
Thanks for reading!
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SON OF A...
Thanks for pointing that out
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NOTHING MAKES SENSE AND I LIKE IT
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You've gotta be subtle with the 4th wall breaking, because it's easy to go overboard and really break the story.
Glad you liked it! i'm eager to start work on my baby again
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Thanks for that too
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WE"RE GONNA MAKE LOVE. PINK STYLE
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That was VERY intentional
Zelda ftw
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Take note of the timeline position.
This takes place a month after That's not quite how he told it.
Piercing the Heavens starts two months after Not Quite how he told it
5661096 ...so many pictures, one stupid rule preventing me from posting...
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That and my workplace moved into a new office and i dont have a corner desk anymore (i have a tiny blindspot but thats only if no one is moving around)... so no nsfw during work hours please
5661107 See, you shouldn't have told me that... once I know this sort of thing, I have to control the urge to flood your PM box with NSFW stuff.
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ABSOLUTELY NOT here bro
I (painfully) can no longer look at DA or derpibooru while at work
I will literally get fired if that shit shows up on my screen at the wrong time
(im already lucky that our IT doesnt give a shit about monitoring the sites
I LOVED IT!!
Yes, yes it does.
Keep up the good work!
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oooooooo burn
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ahh calm wind you know me so well
I give this ten trollestias out of ten
5661071 still very scarey
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Hahaha i was itching to use that gag all through the writing process
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
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Yessssss gimme ALL the Trollestias!
Thanks for reading!
I have now been asked on 5 different occasions if I'm ok by the students around me.
Each of them saw me shaking and holding my breath wondering if i was having a seizure or something.
I was trying not to laugh out loud.
Thank you for this wonderful gift.
--- One Psychopathic Maniacal Fox
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Hahaha, glad i could provide some laughs!
Thanks for reading!
5661089 I always enjoy the 4th wall breaks and antics that you choose, because they move the story along and actually have me laughing aloud.
I'm going to enjoy going back through this one and seeing if I can pick up on all the references you make.
Also really glad that the one forum thread is now up.
An actual home for theories is going to be fantastic in the coming months. 
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I agree! you have no idea how much i love reading those!
I'm pretty sure those trees were the Posse..
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*looks left* *looks right*
What gave you that idea?
Short and sweet, with the perfect amounts of d'awws
Loved you breaking the fourth wall, as usual with Pinkie 
Oh, gosh, her and Maud's antics...
This was perfect. Thank you for making my day.
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Writing Maud was so much fun
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
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Just wondering, was it hard for you to be able to keep personality with such different characters in the same story? It sure does seem like it.
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Actually i took a unique approach to the two of them
i viewed Pinkie and Maud as being equally insane, but having them show it in polar opposite fashions 
Pinkie over the top, loud, and rambunctious. Maud monotonous, reserved, and stonefaced.
So i wrote the same personality... just opposite deliveries!
Rock puns are started to become funny.
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Tried to make them as original and fitting as possible
Didn't want them to seem forced.