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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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With Daring Do as his prisoner, Ahuizotl discovers the temple where Scorpan sealed away the Rainbow of Darkness. The Mane Six, joined by Celestia and Luna, quickly go to prevent such an evil force from being unleashed. However, it turns out their attempts to reseal the Rainbow of Darkness cause some unforeseen consequences. Only the Rainbow of Light can set things right, but where could it be? It turns out that its closer than they think.
(Takes place after Season 4. Elements of G1 are used. NOT a character turns evil story.)

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 28 )

Sounds really interesting :pinkiesmile:
I'll give it a looksy :twilightsmile:

Feel honored as I rarely use this theme to describe any other hero turned evil story but yours has earned this epic theme. It is what I shall play each time a new chapter is posted:

(Takes place after Season 4. Elements of G1 are used)

Considering you're using Scorpan, this fact shouldn't come as a surprise.

Interesting! This is now in my "read later" list

This story is soooo awesome :rainbowkiss: I love it wonderful job and definitely keep up the fabulous work :pinkiehappy: I can't wait for another update

She splashed the cool water onto her face, and brushed her mane back into its proper place.

*chuckles immaturely*

Oh god.....man that's gotta hurt. Poor Soaring :twilightoops:

4461593 *joins in one the chuckling* hehe that ryhmed

OH SHIT!

Okay now that you've shown that Rainbow Dark can corrupt I DEMAND she corrupt an element of harmony.

:rainbowhuh: my golley... That's freaky! kinda cool and awesome, though ya could publish the next chapter faster right?:twilightsmile:

Dear Luna.....that's creepy, but cool. I can't wait for the next chapter this story just keeps getting better and better you're doing an amazing job keep it up :twilightsmile:

Oh shit...it's G1 all over again!
Except...better

That tango with Soarin totally caught me off guard.
I laughed a little bit at it thinking, I wonder what happens when Rainbow Dash finds out?
Definitely the best part of the whole chapter.

Dragons? Really? i was hoping for something cooler. like Werewolves. or how the demons looked in Diablo 3. Also Rainbow Dark is just a chick Version of Tirek in that last part. G1 and G4

...WHY MUST LIFE BE CRUEL THAT EVERY STORY I GO IS ALWAYS INCOMPLETE! Well sometimes, most stories I go are already ded. :derpytongue2:

Compared to you and me, the Wonderbolts are just a bunch of fillies. They couldn't save that unicorn from falling in Cloudsdale's' Young Fliers' Competition, they couldn't stop that dragon that attacked Ponyville, and they were totally useless against Lord Tirek. Letting you go was another mistake they can add to their growing list of failures

I can agree with that.
Especially the last sentence.

Soarin,
You don't have to bathe in my dark light,
(And now my heart cries!)

Soarin,
You don't have to wear that black suit tonight,
(Feelings now take flight!)

Soarin,
You don't have to bathe in my dark light,
(And now my heart cries!)

Soarin,
You don't have to wear that black suit tonight,
(Feelings now take flight!)

SOARIN!!!

Soarin. . .

CAYDE OH HOW I MISS YOU DEARLY YOU WERE FUNNY AND HILARIOUS AND THEN ULDREN SOV TO YOU AWAAAAAAAAY!!! I FEEL TORN AND I FEEL BROKEN CAYDE YOU WERE MY ONLY FRIEND, CAYDE I MISS YOU… sooooo…

And we’re still waiting. Is this story dead?

General Secretary Malashenko: "Ohhhh, this is just perfect." *Turns from the monitor and looks at the man beside him* "Get me Soviet! I have plans for this one."

Soldier: "Right away Comrade Malashenko!" *Salutes, runs and brings him the phone* *Beep, Beep*

Soviet Dash: "Da, What is it?"

Malashenko: "Darling. You won't believe what I found."

This has no comments, and i’m The first commenter of this story, and it has been out for years, that is weird. Great story so far by the way.

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