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ShadyAwesomeness


Retired.

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While crashing over at Rainbow Dash's house for the night, Scootaloo decides to share Rainbow Dash a tale that many ponies believe it to be fake. But as the story goes on, Rainbow Dash will soon realize that her story will get ponies to know the truth.


Authors Note- This was a incomplete story that I cancelled last month due to of some minor problems. All of this takes place during the Rainbow Factory timeline.


This is an contest entry for 1000 Follower Story Contest by Harms Way .


Artwork By- FoxInShadow, Popular on December 2, 2016!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

Huh. This is interesting.

Why did you make this just one chapter? You could have a WHOLE ARC just off of this

7764460 I was planning on writting more chapters, but since school has taking over my head, I've decided to leave it like that. But I'll let you know if do plan on writting more.

I heard the overmare is fluttershy is it true?

Ooh I love this idea! If you want I could finish this arc for you

I was afraid this was just going to be Rainbow Factory happening or something... Damn, I barely recovered from that when I read it - and I didn't even read the whole thing! :fluttershyouch: I'm not one for horror stories... I stopped Cupcakes at the first five paragraphs. But anyways, this was so much better than I thought it'd be, :pinkiesmile: I hope you eventually continue this - it could be a whole arc off of this!

7866924 Yeah. I didn't handle it either. But I was able to read all of it at the end. I might continue this as soon as I finish the rest of my stories.

7867224 Okie Dokie Lokie! I'll read another of your stories right now before getting back to work on my own. :pinkiesmile:

A few grammar/spelling errors here and there, but otherwise pretty good.

8093712 Thanks! And thanks for adding it the story to your bookshelf.

8096711 You're welcome :rainbowdetermined2:

Then, Rainbow awoke to find herself in her room, but it was still dark, and Scootaloo was gone. "Scootaloo? Are you there?" She asked. 'Must've left? But... That makes no sense.'

Rainbow She heard a heavily accented voice call out in an echoey tone.

"Who's there!?" She yelled. "I'm not scared of you!"

Of course you shouldn't be. I mean you no harm

"Okay? Then show yourself!" She demanded.

Then follow my voice It said as she felt it get further away.

"Okay, you asked for it!" She yelled as she sprang from the bed, and galloped after it. Until she came to her mirror. But when she looked in it, all she saw was that her mane was a mess. "Is this some kind of joke?"

Why don't you look again?

"Okay- But when she saw her reflection, she realized that it looked sort of like her. But was wearing a double-breasted uniform jacket, with a green shirt/black tie underneath, and a general's hat, with what looked like pants and boots on her hind legs. As for her mane and tail, it was darker shades of red, orange, yellow, and was jet black at the back where her blue, purple, and green we're supposed to be. "WHAT HAPPENED TO MY MANE!? AND WHEN DID I GET THIS STUPID UNIFORM!?" She yelled. Until she looked down and saw she was wearing no such uniform, with her mane the same as it always was. "Phew," She said to herself until she realized her reflection didn't follow her. "WHAT THE HECK!? She yelled in shock. "That's not p-possible, is it?" She asked herself.

Yes it is comrade Said her reflection.

"Oh, goo- Then she realized it just talked. " Wait! You can talk!?" She asked.

Yes, I can. But enough of that, I came here to see you

"Y-you did? Who, are you anyway?" She asked as she moved around to get a better angle on her. And her reflection just followed her gaze.

My apologies comrade, I am Soviet Malashenka, formally known as...

"Yes?" Asked Rainbow with curiosity clear in her voice.

Rainbow Dash It said while it flashed its fangs and crimson red eyes.

"B-but how could you be me? You look nothing like me!?" She yelled, knowing that wasn't completely true.

Now now comrade, I think it would be best if I just showed you Said the reflection as it lept out of the mirror and pulled her inside.

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