SCP-10314: Rainbow Factory
Item #: SCP-10314
Object Class: Keter
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- Member Since 8th Aug, 2018
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waywardfallout
Grew up on SCP and MLP, what more is there to say?
waywardfallout
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If people like this enough I will make more.
Interesting take on the old story. I hope you do make more.
Nice! I love your writing feels like it's a real SCP report. Bravo!
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Thanks
Always good to see more SCP content.
Needs an editor, but otherwise great work.
Woaaah
10490831
A good Woaah I presume?
10490836
Yup!
System says I got on to featured or Is this my bias?
Honestly when Rainbow Factory Dash said "Not a single soul gets through, not even my own" I got chills.
I'd love to read more of these!
Maybe a follow up on Field Agent Dash huh?
10490555
Hell yeah! That was awesome and I’d love to see more!
10491189
Yea I plan on one longer Multi chapter story while working on SCP documents.
10491206
I have enjoyed seeing this equestrian take on the scp foundation and would love to see more maybe even some scps from the wiki but handled or maybe even classified differently because magic
Just to let you know, there is a SCP tag that was added a month or two ago, it would be nice to see more things added to them. That and wonderful job.
- Senior Researcher Schwabauer.
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Thanks
So it means the SCP is Dash?
10492109
Please reply I really want to know
10492111
No Dash is not the SCP
Very well written. It was like reading an actual SCP article from the wiki page.
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Thanks
Wow i didn't know you liked scp! I mean who doesn't!
Awesome job by the way!
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Thanks
500 views! Wow
This story really needs some heavy editing to improve the sentence structure. I'd recommend getting an editor, which I know isn't easy. Or at least a second pair of eyes to go over any future stories. Still not the worst effort to make an MLP SCP document. ^^
This actually flows like a genuine SCP article from the SCP wiki, Nice job!
Great story!
There are spots in it that don't sound like an scp article, but most of it is good
10505665
Could you point them out so I may improve? If you’d be so kind.
10505729
"However it should be noted that while inside SCP-10314 creatures no longer need to eat or drink. Also unicorn magic can not be used inside SCP-10314." The way it just goes on to say no unicorn magic can be used makes it sound like a very minor footnote, nothing in a containment procedure like that detail should be sounding like a minor footnote.
The issues beyond stuff like that are the random points where short snippets of text seem less formal, I can't think of any spots off the top of my head but, id say read through it once more while listening to some scp readings by the volgan.
I may read through it again later to more accurately find the less formal parts
10505896
Thank you.
This belongs in the official scp database its that good.
10527032
Thanks. More is coming down the pipe line just so you know.
Instead of going with [REDACTED], you could have gone with ████████ instead.
Not bad. However the...clinical tone is inconsistent and there’s otherwise room for improvement. I’ll get more detailed later, on mobile right now.
10625714
Ok
I like it, I'm not the biggest SCP fan but I like it
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Thanks
Wait this is scp too
Dang have to read now
lemme guess: 'rainbow factory'
I almost think, was it Rainbow's loyalty to the Foundation that kept her safe, or was the fact her alternate was Overseer at the time, confuse the effect
10749053
It’s that or Pegasus device